This is pretty much what I do, verbatim. Though a pussy becomes a cunt until it doesn't serve its intended purpose :excited:


I've improved by reading a few of my favorites here. Some of you spend a lot of time crafting your stories to the point where I've felt intimidated. But I've put some of my work out there and I think I stack up pretty fairly to the best and brightest

 

Yes I hate writing the sex scenes because they are really a booger not to get repetitive with, and they are tiresome and mechanical if you don't spice them up with something anything...

 

get experimental with your language, and if it's going to sound the same as just another story, don't write it.

 

The best advice I can give you, is number one to practice writing. Every day. It doesn't have to be sex stories per se. Although you should read some erotica from good writers for helpful ideas on writing sex scenes. Set a goal for yourself on daily reading and writing. Get creative with your stories. All rights these things can help you become a better writer on here and elsewhere.

 

I think this is part of why the fantasy/science fiction genre appeals to me so much.

A profile on here exists solely to repost a few serials found on other sites (it's not exactly ethically correct, I know , but I'm glad it was done because the stories were great) and that's where I drew a lot of inspiration for how great a fantasy story can be made to be. One story had a boy who could telepathically "ride" other people's senses, causing him to have sex by proxy of someone else, and he later gained other tricks like object reading and telekinesis, where sexual applications got more tricky. One had a genie, which provided interesting body mod stuff, as well as a couple unique tricks (he could bend his environment into a sexual playground of sorts and then have it shift back to normal afterword.) I've yet to see two mind control stories with exactly the same gimmick/limitations, but that's probably because I haven't delved in far enough.

As far as my tricks to writing, I tend to use this. These are probably better for newer writers, most of the writers here that I've actually seen the work of are better at this than I am. But since we seem to be using this as a "tip guide", here's what I've learned over my short writing career:

Every time you use a body part, we should be able to trace how it got there. Specificity is the basis of writing something interesting and readable. It also helps fill in the blanks that some newer writers tend to skip. Also, it helps with the reality check. Some things just flat out aren't possible (Unless you're writing fantasy, in which case they still need to be explained away)

Foreplay and long stripping scenes are your friend. They only serve to make the sex sexier. Then again, DC and WSF have far outpaced me in this, so I'm preaching to the priests here

Physical gimmicks are GREAT fun every now and again. Characters with overly large or small breasts, characters that have some non-erotic body part they're particularly fond of or sensitive over, it's great filler and helps make them seem real. In my only story so far, Gracie is supposed to be both short and rather well-lubricated. Luca, another character I've mentioned, is blind (How I'm going to write for this scene, I have no idea, but it already has a lot of promise just because of it) They assist character points and help add variety.

As to nouns and adjectives, I understand that everyone has a few favorites, and there are a couple broad-spectrum words that everyone uses that have pretty much become staples of the genre (the word I'm thinking of, surprisingly, is "elicited", a word I have overuse problems with. Used for gasps, moans, whatnot. Even verbs gain some overplay in this genre) Usually I just think everyone picks one or two and sticks with it. If you use the same word more than three times in a paragraph, chances are you need to stop talking about that thing, not that you need to use a different name for it. Or use complex sentences. Switching areas of the same thing up is also a great trick and helps add detail and specificity. "Tip" and "shaft", for example.

And what everyone else said. I still have massive amounts of problems with this, and tend to flesh out the stories first and the sex last.

On that note, building story into the sex is great. WSF's CAW entry featured every little step as being sort of taboo, but also as something Sarah wanted to do. That subtle, moral uncertainty blended into the sex to the point it literally became part of it. Worrying about getting caught is another great example. Emotion, like everyone else said, is great, but I think I like emotion most when it flows through into the physical action.

That's all I got.

 

i definately struggle with being repetative within a story and also repetative across my stories to a degree. Then most of my worry comes from negative comments saying my stories are all the same.

a) this is a sex story forum and occasionally people do tend to write about people having sex.
b) there are only so many things a man can do to a womans vagina with his tongue, finger or penis.
c) opposite of b)
d) there are only so many names for a penis, ass and vagina
e) if you look at my material you will see i write from a fair range of topics but funnily enough the characters have the same sexual organs and tend to use them in a similar manner no matter how differently you describe it.


I dont often get complaints from skillful writers s on this thread about being repetative though.

Just some thoughts - FJ

 

Often I find myself writing about what the character is thinking during the scene; often something plot-related. This breaks up the action a bit and helps keep things from getting repetitive. Though on the downside, it can also kill the mood.

Actually, I had a hell of a lot of trouble writing about that, which is why only one person has ever read it...

 

" Why? Because there's not a lot of room for creativity. Sure, writing about flirting, teasing, and foreplay is fun, but once you get to insert-tab-A-into-slot-B there's really not a lot to write about. "

In complete agreement with you there, DC. Maybe another factor causing me to be so bad at the sex writing is that I've never.... done that stuff (I've seen porn and done that other thing that goes with it, but that probably doesn't count as sex).

 

Good advice.

 

Cooooool!!!

 

Thanks for the tips

 

As the disappointed actress remarked

to the bishop,

"Its not that hard."

Yes if its a hundred in and outs then it is but there is so much going on (settle down): if its a "he fucking her" one how it feels from her point of view with his cock coming up into her is a lot more interesting to me as a guy than the mechanics of him plunging his "member" into her "sex" or "love tunnel".

Its an intimate moment in a relationship and it should be where your writing is at its best. if you don't like writing these scenes then deal with your own inhibitions first then try.

It might be you just don't really approve morally of what they're doing and so a sex scene is, for you, inappropriate- a kiss and a cuddle might be as far as the characters at that stage should be going.

What underlines all this fear, I think, is an inherent dread that the scene will be unconvincing. Well possibly but if its its the same style as the rest of the story and the reader has liked it so far why should it be?

 

I think that the "in, out, in, out," can be spiced up by describing the sounds (fap, fap, fap)... Although the sounds aren't usually very sexy, lol.

:awesome:

 

I've only posted one story on xnxx to date so I'm not an experienced writer. That being said I think maybe I can contribute something here.

First, I think a good erotic story has to be like any other good story. Writing a good sex scene is all about putting your readers into it. You need to be very discriptive about the characters and the setting. Make your readers feel like they're there.

Second, it's important to develop your characters. I just read "New Daughter" by Daddycums and he spent a lot of time doing this. By the time the sexy parts came up, I found I liked and cared about those characters.

Third, you have to not overwrite the scene. In reall life, a sex act usually only takes about 15 minutes if you don't consider time for seduction and foreplay. The other thing here is that most people don't engage in acrobatics when they're having sex. A good writer knows this and refrains from having his characters doing it while hanging from chandeliers or having them fuck in every imaginable position.

Lastly, write about things that turn you on personally. If you're totally straight, don't try to write gay sex scenes. If you do, the feel of what you're writing tends to sound disengenuous and forced. If you like watching or participating in what you're writing about, that passion will make it's way onto the paper or in this case, onto your computer.

In the end, sex is sex and there's only so many ways to engage in it. Try not to worry about changing up your terminology so much. Just write what you feel and enjoy.

 

No sex while hanging from the chandeliers? Damn! So much for my next story idea.

 

I'm one of the new kids here in general, plus I've been away, so I didn't catch this until now. However, I wanted to give a slightly different take on it.

But first, yes, I have a hard time with it. Especially since I like to be extremely descriptive. I enjoy writing 4-5 page scenes. I want people caught up in it. Just like great sex, great stories need a build up then release. I attempt (and fail) to do this with sentence construction and word pace as well. The more into it they are, the shorter my sentences are, and the more verbs I try to use. Sometimes, the actual orgasm is the shortest sentence, and I wonder if I have failed. However, at least I do TRY.

I was instilled from a very young age to really enjoy finding just the right word with just the right connotation. That makes it more fun because I get to try out more words, but it also makes it harder because I despise re-using words as well, and there are only so many words we can use for certain things.

I did try to mix it up a bit by having my characters do some out of character "dirty talk" to break things up a bit, and I hope that helped. Characters playing out fantasies or role playing I think helps a bit, so you don't get stuck in a rut (while I try to vary things up, like everyone else has said, the actual sex is pretty much the same, and we ARE on a sex stories site - the fact is that the audience expects more, better, and more imaginative, but they are also desensitized to some extent, making our jobs that much more difficult).

However, my main point is this - If you are worried about it, it's probably a good thing. We only get to be better by striving for perfection, and accepting our best. This means we grow as writers and story tellers. I sure as hell hope my stories 10 years from now are better than this one, as it is my first series. At the same time, I still try to take pride in my work. If you are not satisfied, I think your mindset may be in the right place. Just my generic thoughts on any endeavor that is meaningful.

OTOH, Daddy, seriously, you wrote a sex novel you posted on here. It was amazing. Take it from me, you do just fine and dandy.

 

I find it challenging. It is the most difficult part of when I write. I have over 7 stories that are unfinished simply because I am not certain how to write the sex scenes.

Mood is also a factor. I do find them easier to write if I am feeling sexy.

 

I came up with what I thought was a cute term clitoris, "yum button". :excited:
Feel free to use it.

I beg to differ.
I think the sounds can be very erotic.

That's a good point, it pays to know how to get yourself in the mood.

 

If you've got 7 unfinished stories, may I suggest you just sit down and write them. Forget about mood. Forget about trying to make a masterpiece. In fact, forget about trying to finish. Write a little bit whenever you get a chance, even if it's just a paragraph or two. Writing two paragraphs puts you two paragraphs closer to finishing. Not writing those two paragraphs because you're not in the mood puts you no closer than you were before.

Sometimes that's the only thing that works for me. I have to force myself to write something, even if it's not a lot. And sometimes when I sit down and write, it helps put me in the mood and I end up writing the whole scene.