This is my first story so it may take a while to complete. It's fiction for the most with a few true bits here and there.

Part 1,

Every since I was a youngerster I rememeber the sexy games me and my older horny sister would play when we were alone in the house. What at first were just games turned into more when I grew older and realised just what could of been all those years ago.

Our favorite game would start by my tickling her back as she liked this a lot and even at a young age I knew what was inside a bra. As I stroked her back I would gently run my finger around the inside of her bra letting my fingers brush the side of her lovely soft breast, She didn't seem to mind so as time went on I got braver and one day decided today was the day I would have my first real feel.

We were alone and I took my position behind her with her top rolled up to her shoulder, with my heart beating fast I start my stroking of her back in the normal way with me running my finger around the top of her bra. I decided the best way was to undo her bra making out it was in the way as I did this she didn't say anything I pulled it open at the back and as I did her tit's dropped a little. I slowly started to tickle round her sides moving ever closer to my goal my dick rock hard in my shorts. All of a sudden she grabbed my hand pulled it round to her front lifted her bra to release her tit's and placed my hand full on it, I wasn't sure what to do at first but I knew she didn't mind so I began to stroke her firm tit I soon had a hand on each reaching round from behind I was in heaven and continued to play with them for a while before we heard the door open and we had to stop.

Over the next few months we would do the same thing when ever we could even sneaking a feel when others were in the house. Then one day I was off school sick and she had stayed home to look after me. We soon started our stroking game when all of a sudden she got up pulled the curtains closed and began to remove all her clothes. I couldn't believe it there she stood naked showing me everything she had, Her tits were massive and she had a nice soft bush covering her pussy she called me over and removed my clothes with my hard dick standing to attention she layed down and let me start to play with her tits my little dick standing to attention. She pulled me on top of her and let my leg fall between hers rubbing her pussy against my leg as we did this she told me to kiss her and as I did she slipped her tongue in my mouth giving me a full on kiss while was still rubbing those soft tits and feeling her hot pussy on my leg.

After a while she sat up and clasped her hand round my hard cock it wasn't the biggest but it was very hard, She stroked it softly back and forth before learning forward a giving the end a little lick, She had moved my hand from her tit to her pussy and she was rubbing my hand against her pussy. It was a strange feeling soft moist and warm but she seemed to like it see then cupped my balls as she learned forward and took my dick in her mouth for the first time I'd never felt such a nice sensation in my life with each suck she would get faster and I could here her moaning with pleasure as she sucked and as I rubbed her now very wet pussy. Just then there was a loud band on the window we thought we had been caught so we dressed quickly and went to what it was it turned out to be a bird which had it the window by the time we got back in the house our mom was back so we had to leave it there for now. I went to bed that night a very happy boy with hard cock that wanted more.

To Be Continued

I will continue but would like feedback on the first part please

 

Very good

This story was very good and certainly intrigued me. My only problem was that here and there you left out words or letters and you didn't really put much detail sort of like you rushed through the whole thing. Relax and slow down. Besides that I can't wait till the next part!

 

Your story has started well and I look forward to reading more. However, i agree with Sinful Nightmare, slow it down little and let us enjoy the build up. I hope that the next part will be posted soon!

 

Thanks for the feedback. I hope part two is a little better.

Part Two - My First Time

A few days had passed and nothing nuch more had happened but every time we looked at each she would give me a cheeky grin I was starting to think that our games had finished until one afternoon she called me up to her bedroom. As I walked through the door there she lay on the bed naked with her legs wide open gently stroking her pussy and smiling at me, She said take you clothes off so we can finish what we started the other day. I stripped off in seconds my cock standing to attention, she motioned me towards her and pulled me on top of her allowing me to slip between her open legs she pulled my head down and fed a hard nipple into my mouth giving me instructions on what to do all the time she was thrusting her pussy towards my hard cock, I was sucking and slurping on her hard nipples each in turn it sounded like I was sucking a lollipop. I stopped for a second and looked up to ask if I was doing it ok and looking at the smile on her face I must of been doing something right I could feel her soft bush against my hard cock. She looked at me and asked do you want to lick my pussy I wasn't sure how but nodded in agreement, she pulled her legs up and parted her bush and lips showing me her moist clit, I reached out and began to stroke it she let out a little whimper of pleasure as I first made contact with her clit. I lowered my head and she guided me towards her pussy telling me to lightly lick her clit with my tongue. I could smell her sex and my cock was throbbing as I took my first lick it tasted better than i thought and after a few minutes began to give my sister real pleasure with my tongue flicking fast on her wet pussy, she reached down and spread her lips wide and said stick your tongue all the way in my warm hole. I slowly pushed my tongue in bit by bit she was dripping wet, juices covering my face as I lapped away at her she lay back groaning pushing my head into her pussy whilst she was playing with her tits, She began to buck her hips to meet my tongue thrusts when all of a sudden her legs clasped round my head and juices began to flood from her pussy after a few second she relaxed and told me I had just made her cum not knowing what that really ment again I guessed it must of been good with the look on her face.

My hard cock still standing to attention she reached out and started to stroke it telling me I had a lovely cock and would make someone very happy one day, She pulled my foreskin back and forth slowly wanking me it felt so nice I thought I was going to faint. She edged to the end of the bed opened her legs and pulled me towards her again she pulled my foreskin back and began to brush my cock against her wet pussy lips, She stroked it up and down her slit with each stroke my cock end would slide in her pussy a little then she would rub it on her clit she looked and asked if it felt nice to which I nodded yes, I thought the end was going to explode it looked massive and my whole cock was throbbing. She looked me in the eyes and said do you want to put it in me? I nodded yes and she lay back and opened her legs. As I lay between them she took hold of my cock and planted the end of it in her warm entrance then reached round and pulled me into her for the first time, I then took control and on instinct began to push it in and out of her pussy very slowly as I could feel a funny sensation in the end of my cock that I had never had before and wanted it to last as it felt so nice. Her breathing was getting heavy again and she had wrapped her legs round my back to keep me in her for as long as possible, my thrusts were getting quicker and the feeling in my cock began to get more intense with every thrust when suddenly my cock began jerk as it did I kept thrusting as the sensation was intense with every jerk at the same time my sister began shake and I could feel her juices pouring out once more soaking my hard cock she was shouted cum in me fill me with you cum, as this was my first time I guess thats what I had just doning. After my cock had finished jerking I lay on top her with it still in her pussy and had the most sexy of kisses, when I pulled my cock out I looked down at her pussy and could see my cum mixed with her juices coming from her pussy grinning she said i told you you would make someone very happy one day and just giggled. With that said we got cleaned up and got dressed I was still a little dazzed but I had just had the best hour of my life so far.

To Be Continued

 

What a nice sister......Every young guy should have a sister like that!

 

Better but...

It was better but again it was way to rushed, to short, and I am sorry if English isn't your first language or what but your grammar was killing me. I know I am not perfect when it comes to writing (especially on this damn phone) but you need to work on this. Don't just say they said it, you need to make them say it. For example I said, "Your story is good but you need to work on it." When the sister was telling you to cum in her you needed to go, "OH GOD CUM WITH ME BROTHER, CUM WITH MEEEE!!!" That is just better than reading "my sister told me to cum in her which I guess I was..." Think of it like this, when people read a story they want to feel that they are there, not just looking at a website with words on it. They want to feel the brother's dick in his sister's tight little pussy, they was to taste her sweet juices, they want to hear her moaning and screaming, smell her naughty juices, and see her jerking up and down on the bed as they fuck her. If you need help seeing this I will be glad to give you some web links to good stories, or even write some paragraphs for you to see what I am talking about. And lastly, DETAILS!!! What does the brother look like, how long is his dick? The sister? Are her tits large, small, just right, what is it?! Thank you for listening to me rant.

 

I have been guilty of such act of rushing out a story without re-reading it.

 

Besides that I can't wait till the next part!

 

hot story

 

Thank you for listening to me rant.