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  1. Dizzyworks673

    Dizzyworks673 Porn Star

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  2. JadeM

    JadeM Lost in Translation

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    Bump :)
     
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  3. darthel0101

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    pics of The Freedman but none of his mate
    DISCRIMINATION ! !
     
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  4. snowleopard3200

    snowleopard3200 Guardian of the Snow

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  5. wantsomefun

    wantsomefun Storyteller and Lover In XNXX Heaven

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    Having re-read this story after studying the pictures, I was amazed again at how tight your entry is and how well it flows.

    The scene in the security office, a monitor flickering in her peripheral vision, and then blinking when she gave it her full attention. Dead leaves rattling on the wind in the dark, masking and confusing the sound of the hooves of a horse with insane eyes. Somehow, a seamless segue from escalating terror to deep eroticism, with a jarring jolt back to terror. Oddly, in this one, a steamy sex scene or two allowed the reader to relax!

    I can see Jaleesha, frozen in time, not yet having the patina on her finish her partner has. Her breasts are fuller than before, readying themselves to nourish the life that swells her belly. Who fathered it? The Freedman or the Fuseli's incubus?

    Brilliant. I can hear old Rod narrating it. Too bad you didn't write this back then.
     
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  6. Dizzyworks673

    Dizzyworks673 Porn Star

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    Wow I think you've written another winner here. Great work! Good luck!
     
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  9. ejls

    ejls Siren of the Seaway

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    Dizzyworks673 Porn Star

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    Bump...............
     
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  11. Daddycums

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    Very eerie and creepy. I really like how you used foreshadowing to build the suspense, and also how you maintained such a haunting atmosphere throughout the story. Not that I expected anything less from such a talented author.

    The ending is unhappy yet satisfying; the suspenseful atmosphere creates a tension that is only released when the heroine's doom is revealed. It's a story of inescapable fate, and although I don't like unhappy endings, ending this story in any other way would have been the wrong way of doing it.

    Excellent job, as always!
     
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  12. darthel0101

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    VERY MUCH AGREED.
    In this story, like the last, the lead was meant to die.
    Are we raising up a death-dealer in our siren?
     
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  13. snowleopard3200

    snowleopard3200 Guardian of the Snow

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    Only now asking that question?


    Ejls a question (and not to be rude) is the picture of the lady you posted a self portrait?
     
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  14. darthel0101

    darthel0101 Porn Star

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    Look at the legs and hands. They are at most 38 yo and ejls advertises herself as 58 on her profile.
     
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  15. snowleopard3200

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    Darthel, in the complex where I live we have several ladies who are in their late 60s you would swear are in their mid 30s. Even my own sister you would think is barely in her twenties.

    Besides, it could be of Ejls in a earlier pic.
     
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  16. ejls

    ejls Siren of the Seaway

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    You are too funny. I'm about as WASP-y as they come. Besides, the only pics of me on this site are very well hidden.
     
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  17. snowleopard3200

    snowleopard3200 Guardian of the Snow

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    If I caused any offense Ejls I did not mean to; honestly, I figured there was a slim chance it was of you.
     
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  18. ejls

    ejls Siren of the Seaway

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    Sweetie - no offense taken. I used to look good in a sweater. Now I'm comfortable in one.:rose:
     
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  19. Hornycountryboy

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    This tale was very eerie, of course it was supposed to be that way. I however thought tone incubus brought her into the nightmare painting not trap her in a statue.

    Very well done, as always Ejls. My short list continues to grow. Good luck to you!
     
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  20. wantsomefun

    wantsomefun Storyteller and Lover In XNXX Heaven

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    One tends to look best when one is comfortable.
     
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