KAW-7 : Pleasure Slave for Sale. (a non-entry)


After owning me for a short time, my owner has decided to sell me. I have no say on his choice. I only have to go with whomever he decides to sell me. The new owner will become my new master and that will be the end of it. I am trained to please him and be used at his discretion.

He found a place where I will be exposed for sale. Customer will be allowed to inspect me in all part, handle me in any way they choose, except to experience my talents.

I am shipped in a closed dark truck. I can’t see the light of day, except for a small crack in the door and it isn’t even directed my way. I feel lonely and scared. I dread what will happen to me.

Finally, the door opens and the delivery man brings me inside a mysterious place where I am placed right beside some of my friends that are also being sold out by our owner.

The seller, without a word, installs us on a small stage which contains all of us, making sure we face forward in order to attract as many customers as possible.

Most of us, like me, stand alone, others are accompanied by counterparts. Some have white flesh, as I do, some others are black and there are a few with yellow skin. I even see a couple that is interracial. I wonder who would be interested in acquiring them. Most of their counterparts are fat and tall, while some are smaller and shorter.

After a few days of being shown, I long for some man to notice me, but most just walk by without even throwing a glance. I see this handsome hunk come in and my hopes rise as I would cherish such a owner. But alas, he walks by looking for some other distraction.

When he walks back to exit the place, he looks at all of us and reads the sign that says: “You can look, touch and handle, but it is strictly forbidden to use. If you want to use our models, you buy them and bring them home. There is no facility for trying in this place. If you are not satisfied with your purchase, beat it to death.”

After looking at all the models and taking some of them out of their confinement, he glints my way and touches me. Looking at the price, he mumbles: “That way above what I can afford.”

But somehow, he does seem to be able to let me go. My heart is in a rumble. Oh! How I wish he’ll get out of his comfortable financial zone. I can feel my insides trembling at the thought of him penetrating my most intimate part.

Finally I hear say to himself: “What the fuck, I’ll only live once.” He goes to the agent and pays to acquire me. I’m overwhelmed. I will be able to accomplish my sole purpose and please a man, my master in any way ge desires.

We get in his car and travel for a short distance. I am on the passenger seat, so I stare at him. He is quite a specimen. I lower my vision and see he is already getting excited, showing a voluminous bulge in his pants. It gets me jittery, just thinking of what is to come.

When we get home he tells me:”Don’t expect me to have any consideration for your pleasure. I bought you to satisfy mine and if your don’t, I’ll simply destroy you and let you wroth away in the basement.

He strip and lubes his penis, holding me with both his hands. I can feel the gland of his dick at my entrance. I brace myself for his penetration, but with the slickness of his lubed cock, he slides in easily. I’m in seventh heaven. I have been trained to bring satisfaction and hope to finally get to know the sensation of sperm splashing my internal walls.

He suddenly shouts:”I’m coming you slut…yo..you fucking who whore. Yessss, I’ll keep you. Aaahhh…unghhh,”

He takes me to a basin and washes me, making sure I will be ready for him later tonight.



The object is a Fleshlight. Picture below.

 

Your thread title is missing. Half of it anyway. As for the story, very good work, Jeymar.

 

OOps! Too late to chage it now, darn. Thank you for liking it. I tried to make it interesting.

The title is Pleasure Slave for Sale. Should I repost it?

 

Yeah! Would you look at the one who always scrutinize others for mistakes. Like the saying goes, I the doctor should remove the log from my eye, before looking for the straw in the others.

 

Wow!! What i was thanking it was, i was totally off. Very well written. Now, i need to take some pointers.

 

You mean this type of pointer?

 

Lmao!!!! The way you write..... i thougbt it was a mannequin at first..... but still, i like how you write.

 

Thank you.

 

Competition "half-way/2-weeks left" bump.

Hush....an alias

 

Wow, I loved this story and I'm gutted it's a non entry !! I wish you'd waited and chosen from the three entries and chosen this one.

There were lots of mistakes, missing words etc (let me know if you don't already know them and want to ) that let it down.

That said it turned me on your descriptions were clever and arousing. I didn't guess what it was, at first I thought a slave girl (though that was human so I had to discount that ). Then I thought it was some sex toy but still didn't guess what it was exactly.

Really an excellent idea conveyed well, erotic and fit the brief. Fantastic job !!
Grr should have been in the comp !! Luvs xx

 

Well, I don't want to repeat myself It was good, and it was about something I probably wouldn't think of to write 9not this way anyway). I liked it.

 

Bump for Reading Phase grouping.

Hush....an alias

 

Thank you once again for taking the time to submit additional work regarding this competition especially knowing that it will not count toward the competition. All of it was precise and applied to the story itself, and it was a good effort in focusing the entire piece on the personification itself. Two aspects that are not negatives yet worth considering in the future if I might suggest would be (and they apply to all subjects) is don't feel a need to rush into a shift of mindsets. IOW, if someone is afraid, they don't instantly shift to the opposite (I only recognize that in the regard that my first non-entry to some degree I did the same thing).

The second would be (once again recognized from my own entries), typically personifications are more about physical aspects and sensations than mental or emotional ones. That is not to say it is wrong which it is not, yet as much as we use personification to help us relate to an inanimate object, they're most often utilized in such a way that they remain unrelated or detached from the "human condition." In that way we can describe a "thing," relate to it, yet not associate with it still recognizing it as a thing, not a sentient entity.

Probably the best way to see what I mean is to take a regular story of yours, and apply just a few brief personifications to some object within it to do nothing more than describe it. You'll then be able to have a sense of how "you" might feel as it, yet still feel that it is a thing, and so, distanced.

Well done, thank you for your additional work.

Hush....an alias

 

21 hours left till voting bump for competition grouping!

Hush....an alias

 

I like this one, and agree with @luvsalik. Had you given this one a little more time, and effort, I think it would have been a great entry.

My one question is... Do guys buy these used??