Thank you! The story really wrote itself. My young partner was quite descriptive and earnest.
More stories to come ... and I hope this story leads to more opportunities for me. Life is an adventure!

 

I'm grateful for the restraint! Many thanks!

 

Hello, I am new to this forum but not to writing stories. I have been posting to XNXX for over ten years now but don’t often comment on too much. I can identify with many of the complaints here about lack of readers responses. I am looking to hook up with a fellow writer of similar skill to bounce ideas off of and proofread each other’s work and possible friendship. If interested PM me.

 

@doll1 where are your stories posted? I couldn't find your name on sexstories and you've only posted a handful of times here

 

I also have difficulty locating specific items on this site. I do know you can go to the “Stories” section. Click on “True Stories” genre, on page one of the True Stories list, ranked by highest rating at the 96.0% level you will find a story by me. “Confessions of a Teenage Slut.” If you click on the author doll1 it will take you to a complete list of all my stories. My personal favorite story is “Seducing the High School Janitor.” If you have the time, “Maria’s Journey” is a good hour read.


I may have not used the best word, “Skill,” as I didn’t mean it to sound like I consider myself skilled, but I do cringe when I hear that someone wrote a story last night, and published it this morning, and is now waiting for the accolades to roll in. Passion or Respect for the craft might have been better wording. My stories take a minimum of 4 months before I am comfortable publishing them. The Maria story was over a year in the process.

I will repeat that I am not really looking for a public review of my work here unless you feel compelled. I would prefer a one to one with someone who would find a mutual longer term writing relationship beneficial.

 

No problem - I look forward to reading more of your work.

 

Before this goes off the rails, I would like to repeat my request. I’ve already received a PM from someone who didn’t read, but “scanned” a story of mine. He then commented on sections he didn’t have the time to read. I appreciate the response, but again I am not looking for a review of my work. I posted a request to find someone who shares a passion for writing, who has the time and wishes to partner with a similar writer to develop their skills. I have given access to my work so that you can judge for yourself if this is something you are interested in.

 

Hey there, my fellow writers. I am having a hard time coming up with more ideas about this sex story series that I am writing about. I already posted the first two chapters and I have a few ideas for the next few chapters but I can't think about any ideas past chapter six.

This sex story series I'm writing is about Brandi Love as my stepmother and me as her eighteen year old stepson. The title of this series is called "The Stepmother".

In this sex series, Brandi, as well as a bunch of my other favorite pornstars, fuck me in the ass using strapons.

It stars Lisa Ann and Julia Ann as faternal twin sisters, Syren De Mer as my stepmom's best friend from high school, Krissy Lynn as my stepmom's stepsister, Phoenix Marie as my Choir teacher, Madison Ivy and Madelyn Marie that are a lesbian couple in an open relationship, and Bonnie Rotten as a professional exotic dancer that Brandi hires for my nineteenth birthday to give me a fully nude lap dance for over an hour then Brandi pays Bonnie over a thousand dollars in cash to fuck me with a strapon.

I've got the next few chapters covered until after chapter six. I can't think of any more ideas for any chapters past chapter six. I've got writer's block. Can one of you guys or any of you guys help me come up with some good ideas for future chapters?

What are your guy's ideas that could help me get some ideas for this sex story series? What kinds of strapon sex could Brandi or any famous pornstar and I could do? Which famous pornstar should I include in the story?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

 

For any of you writers who are new to this like I am, one tip I learned already is to be careful with what you call you stories (e.g. Chapter 1 or Part 1). I screwed up a chapter number when posting and took the post down to correct it, but the site would not let me use the same title again. So in the future i think I will use part 1, part 2, ect. Anyway, for better or worse farewell Lunch is up in its entirety and it isn't doing too bad, so on to the next one.

 

doll1 Thank you for your positive and constructive comments, you made my day and helped boost my confidence to continue.

 

I did nt get on the internet with my own comp till jan 2002
before then I had an exercise book and wrote a few essays exploring popular subjects... like football
TV .... Sex etc.
One of those little stories back then was really a celeb story fantasising me and a pop babe having an affair....
When I came on line I discovered lots of celeb stories and for a few years I wrote quite a few
think the only one Ive put in this forum is...
https://forum.xnxx.com/threads/fergie-a-lesbian-story.614305/

So many babes on TV and on the Internet, celeb stories allow you to have your wicked way with them....
put words and opinions in their mouth and pretend you are there with the rich and famous....

 

Wow, that font size is intriguing.

 

Goldemmeadow A well written lovely story. Very erotic.

 

After an OK run with my first story (Never in a Million Years), I decided to write another based on another more recent encounter in Vegas just before the pandemic.
- https://www.sexstories.com/story/101639/
This is just my second story and wonder if true stories catch fire in terms of being read, or if their content needs to be amplified to fantasy to become popular? What's the group's opinion on this?

 

Ive written mainly celeb fake stories and a few non celeb sex stories
prob 80 % to 20 %
This is one of my non celeb sex stories
https://forum.xnxx.com/threads/horsham-manor.617765/#post-12484270

Would be great to have a section titled... Celeb Stories....

 

Did you ever find a solution to this? One of my stories is stuck in edit mode and I get the exact same problem on mine

 

I have written my first story(that I think is ok to share) I would also love feedback about it. I posted it at xnxx stories yesterday. https://www.sexstories.com/story/101757/
If this is the incorrect way to get feedback please advise what I should do.

 

Im also pretty new but i believe you need to contact an admin to get permission to edit a story.

 

When you post it there leave it in Edit mode and you should be able to change it. Once you change to Publish then it becomes available for everyone to read

 

Ok, just put up the first two chapters of our new story "A Voice from the Past". Hopefully it has enough sex to entice the readers to give it a fair rating and come back for subsequent chapters.