KAW-7 : Italian Delight



Paul was very excited to have been chosen to guard the Italian exhibit presented in his city. He was to work with the Italian personal to draw a security plan. He was looking forward to learn more about the Italian language from his fellow workers.

As he was making his rounds, he came face to face with her. What a beauty, she had perfect lines, fairly size bosom, lips to die for; firm body and her olive skin match perfectly with her skin tone. He got infatuated with her on the spot.

Being the shy type, he was afraid to approach her. He just stood there admiring the goddess. He longed to talk to her, to tell her how much he thought she was the woman of his dreams, not knowing how she would react to his advances. He became obsessed with the desire to possess her in a sexual manner.

Slowly he got closer and closer, his mind in a whirl of constricting desire, versus uncertainty. He was trembling when he finally touch her arm. He was expecting for her to rebuff him, but she did not react. Pushing his luck, he moved to her shoulder and still she said nothing and didn’t move away. She just looked at him with those beautiful eyes of her, her mouth slightly opened, as if waiting for a sensual kiss.

He got behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist, caressing her flat fit stomach. He kissed her neck and tease her earlobes. He tentatively raised his hand to brush the underside of her breast. Still she did not push him away, as though waiting for him to go further in his caresses.

His erection was about to bust his pants. He was shaking and his knees could barely support him. He wanted to see her naked. So he started to undo the buttons of her dress. If she still remained silent and didn’t reject him at this point, he knew he would go all the way with her.

She said nothing, just standing there, letting him act as he wished. So boldly he lowered her dress from her shoulder, down her chest, over her round hips and let it drop to the floor. She was not wearing any undergarment, as if she had expected, wanted someone to engage sexually with her. He walked around, admiring her perfect body, the firm breast, and the long legs. He looked her straight in her eyes and in his mind they were telling him of her desire for him to take her.

He brushed her crutch, playing with her smooth vulva with one hand, as her grabbed her ass with the other. Not able to hold on any longer, he stripped his clothes off and pushed his cock between her legs.

“What do you think you’re doing?” he heard a female voice behind him. “You pervert, if you’re in such a need for a good fuck, why don’t you take a real woman?”

It was the female director of the exhibition. He was cooked. He would surely lose his job, noe that he had been discovered.

“If you want me to erase the video tapes of your sick behavior, you’ll have to be very convincing.”

“I’m sorry, I just couldn’t help myself. It was stronger the my reluctance at engaging in such a deprave act.” He said.

She walked up to him, pressed her body to him and told him to start convincing her.

“What do you want me to say or do?” he asked.

She did not answer; she grabbed him by his dick and pulled him to a coach nearby. she reached under her skirt and removed her panties. She sat down the coach that was part of the exhibit, spread her legs and ordered him to kneel and taste the real thing.

He slurped away at her slit, smelling and tasting her delicious nectar, shoving his tongue in her twat, while rubbing her clit with his nose. Once in a while, he would pull back and blow hot air on her clit, which drove her wild.

He could feel the precum flowing continuously from his urethra. His cock hurt it was so hard and his sack was giving blue balls.

He raised up, not asking and slid against her body, grabbing both breast and putting his mouth on hers, letting her taste her own juices. His cock was now at her entrance and he pushed it in one shot, reaching bottom, smashing her cervix.

She started trembling, as her orgasm hit her and rise with every penetration. He shot his load in five consecutive burst.

They had finally regained their composure and she told him that she expected him to come to her office an hour before his shift tomorrow. She promised they would have more time for a better quality session.


1- A pervert playing with a mannequin.

2- Attempted masturbation on a non-sentient object.

 

A sex story that utilizes both themes in a very creative way. I'm impressed, Jeymar. I'll also add that that guard is one lucky guy! The world needs more women like that exhibition director.

 

Thank you Norton. Coming from you I'll take that as a consecration. LOL

 

Wow I finally figured one out before I got to the end. Loved the story and thanks for your submission.

 

You have a good imagination, that much is obvious. This one was a little easier to figure out than your other one. Still, you tell a good story. I won't belabor the need for a good proofreading as there were a dozen or more grammatical errors in this short piece. English is by no means an easy language. Heck, most Americans are required to take English every year of elementary, middle and high school, and still the average person cannot construct a couple of grammatically correct paragraphs.

I would like to challenge you, though, to take this a step further. It's my belief that @Hush wants you to "humanize" a non-sentient object. In other words, write your story from the point of view of the mannequin, not the perv. So, for a non-entry, since there's still plenty of time, how about you entertain us with a story that is written from the point of view of the object. Don't rewrite this story, rather, pick another. I'm going to dash off an example of what I mean in the next 30 minutes. Note how the inanimate object is the main character, and the point of view I'm writing from, ok? There's your challenge, sir!

 

Is the professor challenging is most promising student? You know English is a second language for me and having been away from English speaking people, accept for my friend, I find it more harder to compose and/or speak the language now days. Some might say don't fall in the trap, but I am tempted to see how much I could accomplish.

I am presently busy helping someone to correct spelling and punctuation mistakes in that person story. But as soon as I've finished the task I'll see what I could come up with. It scares me, but courage derives from fright. The only way to make a scary situation disappear is to face it head on.

 

Competition "half-way/2-weeks left" bump.

Hush....an alias

 

I wouldn't have known he was hooking up with a mannequin.

 

This was fun!

Not only was he trying to have sex with a mannequin, but got caught! Reminds me of my Mom's favorite movie...Mannequin!



Now for the downer part.

In my opinion, your writing is THERE! It is just the language barrier that is holding you up. English is so hard, and so complicated. It is comendable that you have done such a good job! Some of the problems that caught my attention.

So... You started many sentences with So. I would think that this would be left out at the beginning of a sentence, or used after a comma. (I may be wrong about this.)

Tenses... I get it! Using the right tense would be so hard if you didn't grow up with the language. It's so tough!

Punctuation... Oh how I hate punctuation!!! I have always done well in school, and I still don't get it. It is something that takes a very concentrated mind to catch mistakes. When reading through, DON'T get into the story, but try to read and think about the sentences instead.

You write a very good story!!! I look forward to seeing what you come up with for the CAW! ( shameless plug!)

 

@Little Miss K Thank you. Your pointers are appreciated. I do my best to improve my writing. and it's poeple like you that help the most. I haven't told this before, but I tried writing such stories in french, but failed miserably. I just can't seem to get the right turn of phrase when I do. I probably have a too low esteem of my capacities. Somehow, my mind often switches to English when trying to say something important and I translate it to french. Probably because in my lines of work, I was exposed more to English people for so many years. Speaking and writing are two worlds apart, tough.

 

I loved this story , although it did seem obvious this time what the "object" was

There were more gramatical errors in this but it was longer so maybe that's why

I think maybe with the addition of a few little differences at the beginning you could have kept her hidden longer.
Ooo necrophilia I'm not sure but I think that might be a first for me whilst reading the comps, (don't take that as gospel though , my memory is sometimes ) I liked I
it (serial killer nut here so it interested me )

The sex was good , and your descriptions of your infatuation were engaging it worked well, though better if I hadn't guessed obviously

A great entry, but , blah blah , I know , proof reader, I know youre fixing /fixed that
Good luck Jay, thanks for the hard work. Keep writing. Luvs xx

 

Now I was able to figure this one out rather quickly, loved it. A bit of errors but could easily figure them out not a distraction.
Thank you for your time and effort ( knowing that English isn't your first language makes it a bit more impressive)
Good luck!!

 

Yeah I know I still have to work and learn. If you had read my previous work from a few years back, you'd know I did progress a bit. Not as much as I would like, but still I did improve, which is a good sign.

 

It was amusing. For whatever reason I got it in my mind it was going to be some kind of a sarcophagus, or the thing inside it, even though it was clear it wasn't. I think I liked it.

 

It was obvious the object was non sentient. I did wonder if it were a statue of a goddess, but when he started on the clothes that was obviously not so. Just a mannequin is much less convincing.

The second half didn't follow well, just a standard discovered and blackmailed type story. Luckily for him, she's acting in a very male way about it.

 

Bump for Reading Phase grouping.

Hush....an alias

 

21 hours left till voting bump for competition grouping!

Hush....an alias

 

Thanks for this Jeymar. I enjoyed the theme and the story. The writing might be lacking but I know how hard it is to use a second language to communicate ones ideas.