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  1. BashfulScribe

    BashfulScribe Sex Lover

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    Hello, all! This subforum was created with the idea that fellow writers and authors on both sexstories.com and the XNXX forums could use it for a variety of reasons, including:

    • Asking/giving advice
    • Comments on writing/new emerging authors to watch
    • Requesting feedback on new stories
    • Sharing opinions about writing erotica, motivations to keep writing, thoughts on erotica
    • Self-promotion (all I ask is don't go too crazy with it)
    • Just a cool place to meet new friends and connections in the erotica writing world
    • and more!
    To get the ball rolling, I'll start. Hi, my name is BashfulScribe and I've been writing on this website for a few years. I know as an emerging author it's hard to get new viewers/gain popularity. If you want me to check out your story, feel free to either message me or tell me about your story here on this forum and why I should check it out, and I'll be glad to. I also welcome any other thoughts and ideas related to erotica writing, and I'm glad to share a space with you all. :)
     
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    2. Ready4itall
      Id love to hear your opinion on a story i wrote. its my first one and i really like it
       
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    3. YahooBob
      I am looking forward to writing my own stories. Does anyone have any tips for a budding author?
       
      YahooBob, Jul 11, 2022
    4. Nicky69
      I love writing stories about what has happened to me or I wish to happen. Check out mine. It may be a good starting point.
       
      Nicky69, Nov 1, 2022
    5. 603foreskin
      I have some crazy experiences I’m excited to write about.
      Hopefully I come across a few that blow my mind.
      Good luck
       
      603foreskin, Dec 17, 2022
    6. Mischief67
      I agree the site does not seem to offer clear paths to getting stories posted. What is a sub forum, and so on.
       
      Mischief67, Jul 21, 2023
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  2. Tcs1963

    Tcs1963 Gentleman Dom

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    Hello, I'm tcs1963 and I've posted a few things here in the story threads. Writing is kind of cathartic to me. Releasing some of my imagination so it doesn't get lost inside my head. I appreciate all views and comments to all my stories, whether bad or good. All I ask is try and remember its my imagination. Hopefully I'll write something good enough to make you say,"Wow" after you have had a nice orgasm. Looking forward to meeting new and erotic people. Thank you.
     
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      wow
       
      axfg12, Jun 15, 2021
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    2. Alberic Grunnion
      Anyone here to NaNoWriMo? November is National Novel Writing Month. I've done a couple of XXX type stories there, not that I would share them in that forum!
       
      Alberic Grunnion, Oct 12, 2021
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  3. bigbrother07

    bigbrother07 Kitty Saver

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    You know, I like this. We read each others work, but we know nothing about the writer. That being said, I am bigbrother07, or you can call me Jeff. I have been writing erotic stories for close to 7 years. I have posted on several sites, and found XNXX through another writer from one of those sites. Now, I only write here.

    Like tcs1963, my stories are a way of putting down my imagination. I am not sure if it is blessing or a curse, but I can see a gif, photo, or hear a statement, and my imagination goes to making a sexual scene in my head. I have written stories in a number of genre, but have found that people enjoy the smuttiest, incest. Although I have never dabbled in it, my imagination has no conscience so I have no problem writing. Just because I write a story does not mean I am into that type of sexual content. I prefer younger/older stories.

    I comment on the stories I read. Sometimes I give advice on how the story could have been better. I grieves me to open a thread and see a bunch of words jumbled together with no pronunciation and very little use of the grammar we learned in school. When I make comments, trust me, it is only constructive. I know how hard it is to write a story worth reading, and I hate it when a writer does not get the gratitude deserved.

    Okay, I will get off my soap box now. Happy writing everyone.
     
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    2. nowhereman
      I agree that grammar is important. It interrupts your reading when they of in place of off, should of in place of should've, etc. We are all guilty of missing something along the way when we self edit, but these errors can throw off the story.
       
      nowhereman, Jun 30, 2021
    3. Alberic Grunnion
      Definitely grammar important. So is proper formatting for such things as paragraphs and dialog.
       
      Alberic Grunnion, Oct 12, 2021
    4. Ready4itall
      Agreed!
       
      Ready4itall, Jun 5, 2022
    5. AJDavidson
      I have been writing stories for friends in need for a while, and they all have preferred my shorter stories as opposed to longer ones. Why do I feel like 5000 words is daunting?
       
      AJDavidson, Jun 6, 2022
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    6. merganser20
      I agree and would add the lack of a blank line between paragraphs as a pet peeve. This is pretty basic formatting regardless of the content (i.e. memos, letters, stories).
       
      merganser20, Dec 22, 2023
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  4. PABLO DIABLO

    PABLO DIABLO Sex Lover

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    I too, enjoy writing. Sometimes to clear my head, sometimes the writing just 'flows', and yet, sometimes it takes an hour until I get a paragraph the way I am happy with it.

    On my last 3 published stories, I've asked for comments (good or bad) so I can improve my craft. I find that I read and read and read. Usually to find out how better authors work their craft. I've created a "top 10" list of my favorite authors and will refer back to them when I feel my writing is getting stuffy.

    I will say that I have developed a list of things that some authors do that annoy the heck out of me. In no particular order: improper use of punctuation, wrong verb tense, poor adjective choice, lousy spelling, no use of quotations or reference of who said what. My final pet peeve would be the ones who write 500-1200 words in one long paragraph. My eyes get tired trying to follow along. Ok, ok, I know "stop your bitching".

    One final thought, I've written down the author names of the three that posted above me so I can read your work.

    To quote BigBrother07, "Happy writing everyone".
     
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    1. nowhereman
      I have noticed that you can tag favorite stories, but how do you tag favorite authors? Can you?
       
      nowhereman, Jun 30, 2021
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  5. BashfulScribe

    BashfulScribe Sex Lover

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    Wonderful to meet you all. :) It's super cool to hear about what makes you all tick and what motivates you and fuels your writing.

    In my spare time (which I have less of than I'd like) I'll try to make time to read your stories too.
     
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      be
       
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  6. Tcs1963

    Tcs1963 Gentleman Dom

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    So, I'm in the middle of writing a story, and I am feeling like my character development is going fine. BUT, I'm having a writers block making the sex scene new and exciting. This just seems strange to me. I'm always expecting the exact opposite. I get so tired of the same old thing suck, suck, spank, fuck, orgasm...blah blah blah...
     
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      I generally write in the 'observer' style so I am describing the scene so fully understand how it can become 'samey'. To get the emotion and feeling back in I will write a story in the first where I can't rely on descriptions but have to describe my feelings and emotions. When I then switch back to my normal style I find that I now try to convey that in the descriptions and narrative.
       
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    3. moballz
      I wrapped up two stories that I thought were very different, and they are. . . until you get to the fleshy bits. Then they are strikingly similar. Deciding now which story gets a rewrite. D'OH!
       
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    4. takayata
      ha
       
      takayata, Dec 5, 2021
    5. merganser20
      Sometimes I just free write without regard to the characters or story line. Just writing whatever comes in to mind and following that line of thought. The result rarely ends up in the story but I find it loosens my imagination, allowing me to find a new ways to approach things.
       
      merganser20, Dec 22, 2023
    6. SirCumScribe
      It works for spicing up uninspiring stories (for me, at least) to insert pictures as I write it. I try to match the performers to my character(s), it makes it immersive, guiding your imagination. If you can see '...her long legs spread in anticipation...' for real, via your inserts, the creative process gets more personal. It's easier to see what happens next in the scene if you have models to play with. The pics don't get into your finished Copy/Paste when you post the new story automatically, so no muss - no fuss. Note: That may not be true in the work you post on Forum Sex Stories. I've seen stories there with photos attached.
       
      SirCumScribe, Jun 15, 2024
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  7. BashfulScribe

    BashfulScribe Sex Lover

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    I always find that the situation leading up to the sex makes the sex a lot more interesting. One of the old classics of this website, Chris and Christie, mostly handled sex the same way every time in terms of what was done, but the pretenses of the sex made each instance of sex feel unique and fresh. Fun fact, it's also my main story inspiration and a big part of why I started writing.

    As Pablo (or Paul) pointed out, adding emotional stakes or even removing them does wonders. If you approach writing sex as what kinks you're writing, then you're inevitably going to eventually get bored writing every kink. But, if you make it character-first, and make the story about who is having the sex and why, that will really make your story shine, to me at least.

    Chris and Christie for reference: https://www.sexstories.com/story/47427/
     
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      da
       
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  8. Truthvstradition

    Truthvstradition Porn Surfer

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    Bashful... could you take a look at my series, Creating My Hot Wife? Here’s the reason. I choose to write this more as a narrative of a diary because everything was going to be true, actual experiences, and insights. I’m a much better speaker than a writer and have been encouraged many times after a seminar to put our journey down into a book. Of course if I did that, a radical edit and enlargement would be in order. Here, I’m just playing around with the possibility and experimenting with a voice to it all. Our perspective along the journey was always as marriage counselors...set free. Our experiences covered a very wide range assisted by some most extraordinary mentors. I’ve barely scratched the surface of what we have done. It would take a couple dozen more chapters to begin to cover it all and I’m even considering rewriting everything I’ve done up to this point. Currently, I have an MD friend who wants to be part of a book process because she values the insights we are proposing. I would appreciate your perspective as I ponder that possibility.
     
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      fa
       
      takayata, Dec 5, 2021
    2. C#mi7
      Creating My Hot Wife is such a hot idea. I love that. It is exactly what I want in my life. Your writing is your way of visualizing and creating her, perhaps. I am very interested in finding ways of getting win-win situations going. I find your words interesting as can be. All of this is about creating what one needs. That's my perspective, anyway, because I am potentially good at it, and not getting it done like I would like to.
       
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  9. Truthvstradition

    Truthvstradition Porn Surfer

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    Regarding my earlier post about my stories, I guess I should’ve invited any author to critique my them and not just Bashful. I know what I’m writing is more of a niche vs the primary interests on this site. I’m very fine with that. I am playing around with the concept of this becoming a book. I’ve been encouraged to do so for some time as a seminar speaker on the topic of lifestyle and polyamory. I guess one area of interest is whether I should start writing much more as a dialogue between characters and include much more of their thoughts and feelings vs the style I’ve chosen which is more from my narrative. My Dr friend is who is bugging me to do something with this suggesting we move it all to character dialogue. I see advantages both ways.
     
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      nice
       
      axfg12, Jun 15, 2021
    2. takayata
      ka
       
      takayata, Dec 5, 2021
    3. SirCumScribe
      There's an old rule of thumb: 'Show me, don't tell me' Dialogue driven plotlines are the epitome of that. Exposition is handy to keep your story from becoming 'War and Peace' length, but well-done dialogue is engaging, active vs. passive/observational story telling.
       
      SirCumScribe, Jun 15, 2024
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  10. PABLO DIABLO

    PABLO DIABLO Sex Lover

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    If you're willing, I would love to read whatever you have currently written. I can also suggest a few different well read authors so you can see the different styles of writing that you are debating.
    With writing, be it a well used topic (such as 'threesome') or a niche often you have to ask yourself if you are: 1. trying to tell a story, 2. educate readers on a topic, or 3. find a balance of both educate and tell a story.
    Paul.
     
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  11. Truthvstradition

    Truthvstradition Porn Surfer

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    Thx Paul. That is precisely the issue. Educate vs entertain. We, and I say we because my friend is an excellent writer, would only do the book if education was the primary goal. Ash and I went from exploring sexuality to very deeply living out polyamory and have included some extraordinary people, intimately into our lives. For instance, I’ve lived five yrs with the most darling up and coming politician in our State (even Clinton came down to campaign for her) and after that five yrs with probably the most published lawyer/professor in our State, among others. Ash has lived over ten yrs with a CEO Mensa type IT guy that was my best friend, and through it all we stayed best friends, married and are now back together... but also with several great people living with us. Our life is very entertaining and something we would’ve tradgically missed if not for understanding polyamory. People at the seminars want to know how we navigated all that and what lessons we’ve learned. We’ve got enough stories and insights for several books and my Dr writer friend wants to turn it into a type of Fifty Shades on lifestyle/polyamory. It’s a daunting task and I’d like to play around with it here first. As far as sampling other authors... I’ve done that here for a decade. There are many who are simply superb writers and far beyond my current skill. I’m frankly in awe of their abilities. I’d love to hear about the genesis of their skills and what they have done with their talents beyond the stories on this site.
     
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  12. Truthvstradition

    Truthvstradition Porn Surfer

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    Thx Paul. The link to my page...
    https://www.sexstories.com/profile1292801/Truthvstradition
     
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  13. PABLO DIABLO

    PABLO DIABLO Sex Lover

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  14. BashfulScribe

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    I'll give you a full account of my take on your stories in a personal message. While I don't intend to be mean, I'm a harsher critic than most and I don't want my feedback to look like this forum is a place for tearing apart other authors. I will say that while I have my personal feelings on the stories, I appreciate that you take a different approach to story writing than most authors, even if the format isn't for everyone.
     
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  15. XNXX WRITING COMPETITION

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    hello other authors this is an official invite to participate in the next contest that we just started the theme has been announced and posted and we would be honored if you would join the contest and write with us!
     
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  16. Tcs1963

    Tcs1963 Gentleman Dom

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    Thank you for the invite, but no thanks. Good luck with your thread.
     
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      You write very good stories. I read some of them. GJ
       
      Guzzler21, Oct 28, 2022
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  17. Paige Turner

    Paige Turner Porn Surfer

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    I need some advice, in my most recent story 'Seducing Sally' I've included a school teacher, I've already written the next two chapters but I'm thinking of including a student of hers into the story.
    My question is this, how young may I make this student without it being rejected?
    She's a primary school teacher so she's around 5 to 11 year olds which might be too young, but I can stretch it up to about 16. I need it to be young enough to be taboo, but not so young that it's banned. Any ideas
     
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    1. Tcs1963
      I would suggest you keep everyone 18 and above because you can be banned for a mistake. Its not worth the risk in my opinion.
       
      Tcs1963, Oct 9, 2018
    2. BashfulScribe
      Can you make it taboo with another factor, perhaps? Perhaps it's the son/daughter of a close friend who just turned 18, or even a past student? I agree with TCS in this instance of risk, though you can always try your luck and post it anyway (I'm not a moderator so I get to say stuff like that). I've seen stories with 17~ year old characters banned, but I've also seen a story with a 12 year old make it through.
       
      BashfulScribe, Oct 10, 2018
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    3. JBL69632
      I'm curious about this subject as well. Not that I want to write a lot about that subject (my teen years were pretty dry, truthfully) but I see tons of stories on here concerning teenagers (14, 15 16, etc) that are engaging in sex as well as stories of fathers or mothers having sex with their children. How did they get posted?
       
      JBL69632, Dec 20, 2018
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    4. JoeRogue
      The student had family issues(car accident/family placement/missed classes/moving) that caused them to be left behind a few grades?
       
      JoeRogue, Sep 6, 2019
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    5. axfg12
      what
       
      axfg12, Jun 15, 2021
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  18. bigbrother07

    bigbrother07 Kitty Saver

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    I would have to agree with TCS on this. It is better to stay above 18. You could not mention the age, but if you have stated she is a primary school teacher it would give it away. Have you thought about twisting it so maybe it would be the students older sister or brother, the taboo would still be there some what.
     
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    1. Rapier69
      I wrote a novel based on my experiences at school where the PE Teacher groomed the Netball team to be his personal harem. When I submitted it to an agent they went ballistic and warned me I could do time for it. I re-wrote it with the age clocks advanced but even so had to self publish as it was reckoned to be too controversial for any publishing house. Find that odd when reading Stephen King and other established authors, in "Gerald's Game" King graphically describes a father molesting his under-age daughter for instance.

      Good news is I just got my first royalty cheque, not going to retire on it, but what a boost to the ego!

      Sal.
       
      Rapier69, Jan 22, 2020
    2. m15artwork
      Is there anyway to change your username on your account. I have been going under a new pen name lately.
       
      m15artwork, Nov 1, 2022
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