A piece of home, away.

A world weary man tired from a hard days work heads to his sleeping quarters. Alone for a few hours as the younger guys of the crew head out for a night on the town. He longs for the touch of the love he left at home to take this job as a last ditch effort to save there way of life. He heads to the showers to clean up before a well earned nights rest and day off. He undresses as the water warms, he notices his reflection and noted the well defined muscles not bulky but lean and strong from years of physical labor. He gets into the shower, letting the warm water cascade over his body. He remembers the times he and his lover spent tangled in each other's bodies in a warm shower. He feels a twinge in his cock as the memories flood his mind. He comes back to himself as the bathroom doors swings open, one of the young guys just making sure he does not want to hit the town with them. He says know and starts to soap up. As he washes his body he again becomes aroused at the thoughts of his lover. Her ample breasts heaving as they made love, her firm buttock in his hands as he took her from behind, her tight, wet, supple pussy contracting on his cock as she would cum again and again. He starts to stroke his cock rhythmically, trying to stay quite listening for the sound of anyone who might catch him in the act of self pleasure. Suddenly he is transported to his home, he sees his lovers naked body outside the shower curtain. She pulls back the curtain and joins him in the steaming water. Her body glistens like a spring rose in the morning due, he notices sweet nectar dripping from the sweet lips between her thighs. He wants to taste her nectar. She sits on the edge if the tub and he buries his head in her crotch. He teases her clit with his tongue and nibbles her lips, she arches her back and cums squirting her sweet nectar into his mouth, his cock stands more erect now excited by her pleasure. She raises his head up and kisses him deeply, she motions for him to stand. She kneels in front of him and strokes his hard, pulsing shaft. Precum drips from its tip and she lick it playfully. She kisses the tip, then slides his entire cock into her mouth. He moans with delight grabbing the back of her head. She pulls his cock out of her mouth but continues to stroke it with both hand while she sucks on his balls. He is growing harder and moving closer to climax. Again she slides her mouth back down his entire shaft. Now she is stroking and sucking faster and harder, he is fucking he mouth like he has done so many times with her pussy. At last he can't hold back any more, he blows his load cumming again and again. Suddenly he comes back to himself, alone in the shower, his throbbing cock in his hand. He misses home and his lover but at least he had this piece of home, away.

 

Geeze if i could daydream like that i'd never leave the bathroom! so hot!!!

perfect, don't change a single thing! write more!

 

A more common reaction would be, I might be bothered to read it if you'd bothered to format it in a more readable manner. You could add a few paragraph breaks to it and repost it. Paragraphs works best with two link breaks (one totally blank line.)

 

(giggie) like whatever i'm not a fuckin riter i just like a good story (shruggy)

 

This is a really good piece of writing. Have no doubt in that mind of yours that you really can string a few words together.

All of us face that first time posting in white on blue and what is an easy read in white on back becomes a wall of text.

So, yes we do have to have a line gap between paragraphs but any fool can do line gaps, not many can wrote as well as you.