its 2:45 and i just get out of school its friday and im 16 i can do what ever i want or so i think but i return home take a nice hot shower go in my room and read m,y new vampire novel blood and chocolate after what seemed like an hr of reading my 15 year old sister knocks then just runs in (glad i wasn't jackin off) as she stands in my room i look up and say sarcasticly"ohh why sister of mine do come on will you?" she looks at me then smiles "sorry brother" she says and sits down on my bed beside me, " watcha readin?" a book i answer, she laughs. i look at her and say what do you want?"as i stare it her i notice she is wearing nothing but a bath robe and she has gotten a little to tall for it and she is not its size anymore" she looks down into my eyes and says " hey chris can you buy me a new robe this one is to small for me now" i look at her and notice that she is showing off parts of her body" i never noticed my sisters perfect breasts before i stare at her breasts in amazement" she then smiles and says" i just came in to see what was new with you chris and also see if you would get me a new robe" she smiles she turns away and says " love yea" i say as always " love yea back" and she says really i like my front better but whichever you love more" i laugh and say with tits like that everyone should" unknowingly i said that outloud" she turns around and stares at me, i say to myself ohh fuck i said that out loud she walks closer and he stares at me point blank again i lose myself in her breasts but this time my dick gets hard" now me and my sister love each other but not like bf and gf but like brother and sister, this time she notices my hard cock and giggles, i quickly move my hand to cover it and she just stares i say sis i didnt mean that! she looks at me looks down and notices what i meant she shrugs and actualy loses her robe i look at her naked body and she just says "oops" then giggles she then says to me "well uve seen me naked now its my turn to see you" so i stand up walk to my doort shut it and lock it then spin around lose my pants and shirt then i leave my boxers on, she demands me to take them off but i say " u do it for me" so she gets on her knees and pulls my boxers to my ankles then she is eye level with my hard cock, she pushes me to the bed then lays on top of me and starts sucking on my cock, i never new it would feel this good comming from my sister or yet it has never felt this good and it kind of scares me but i enjoy it to much all the sudden she stops flips around and sticks her wet pussy in my face so i start fingering her and licking her clit she stops sucking me and says " ohh fuck brother it never feels that good don't stop please?" i say as long as you dont stop eithier, "a pretty dumb thing to say seeing as i know its wrong but it feels to fucking good to stop so i let it happen" she goes back to sucking my cock but moans of pleasure still escape her mouth even with my dick in it, she then stops flips around again and slides her pussy over my cock, she gasps at the feel of it, i ask her " are you a virgin sis?" she looks at me pushes down really hard and i knew i just popped her cherry then looks up and says "not anymore" she smiles and i can't help but smile back. we continue having sex untill she climaxes and she covered my cock in cum and she stares at me and said "ive never came that much, you must be magic" i said "youve never had a cock inside you eithier" she cracks a smile then continues bouncing up and down on my cock i tell her lean down and so i start sucking on her nipple and licking her chest and playinmg and doing everything i knew of. she started screaming louder " ohh fuck me chris fuck me harder ohhh it feels so good but i want you to come inside me and fuck me faster!!!" i listen and start thrusting forward and she loves it she is almost hypervenalating and so i put one hand over her mouth and say " shhhhh!!!!! parents are downstairs" she pulls my hand off her mouth and says " it feels to fucking good i cant help it, it feels way to good and i dont ever want you to stop fucking my pussy" i stare at her and say your a dirty little girl aren't you? she looks at me and said demandingly " dont question me fuck me!!!!" so i thrust as hard as i can into her slippery pussy, she quickly covers her mouth with both hands and screams it sounded almost like she was takling to me, ohhh fuck that feels so good and continues moaning i felt the sensation of my orgasm comming but she beat me to it and started convulsing and jerking around as her climax left her body and she fell on top of me and after a few minutes sat back up and slid off. she said to me " you gotta cum yet?" i look up at her and say in a raspy voice" uhuh" so she starts rubbing her tits on my dick and then went back to sucking on it and i said a few seconds to late, " im going to cum!" as the cum left my cock she swallowed it down almost as fast as it came to her, i was shocked at how fast she could swallow and only a little dripped from her mouth and it landed on her stomach were she wiped it off with her finger then stuck it in her mouth. she then started stroking my cock for what little was left and so i told her let me clean you up a little and i licker her pussy clean while i was licking her clit she became the horny little girl she is and wanted me to lick her clit faster and slide my fingers deep inside of her i did and she had to cum again, she started moaning again so i took a pillow and put it over her head and she was still screaming then she went silent and she just stopped frozen in time as her whole body went into spasms as the cum left her pussy i licked her clean. she stood up i kissed her and smacked her on the ass. she turned around laid down on my chest closed her eyes and said" i love you brother and i want this to happen more offten" i say i dont know thats not what brothers and sisters are suppose to do, right as i finish my sentance i hear footsteps comming up the stairs, i say " oh fuck someone is comming and she slid off the bed put on her robe and i threw on a pair of dirty shorts and a shirt off my floor i open my book and my sister lays down on my bed right as a knock is heard on my door. i get up unlock it and my mom is standing thier she says i heard screams is everything ok? i look at her then look at my sister and give her a look and she just looks away, i say yea everything is fine. my mom then asks "well what happened then why was your sister screaming?" i say cause i kept poking her and it pissed her off so she screamed at me my mom smakcs me upside the head and says " dont be a dick," so i say sorry then she walks away and i shut my door and under my breath say don't choke on your dick... i hated my mother... anyways i turn to my sister act like her and put my hands on my hips and say you little bitch you got me in trouble... she says "i am sorry big brother want me to suck your cock and let you tie me up and fuck me to repay for the smack?" i say " keep dreamin sis" so she says "awww please chris? a little longer?" i look at her and say you still horny? she says yes so i say you horny little slut... she smiles and then says " please fuck me more?" so i say why don't you go play with yourself in your room while i read my book and maybe this can happen again. she puts her hands on her hips and says " fine... but im going to fantisies about you" i open my book find my spot and start reading, then say what ever floats your boat kiddo. she walks away and "says fuck me tonight?" i say maybe, now shut my door and go do your thing. she turns walks away and goes in her room i continue reading and at about 11:00 pm i am almost done reading when i hear a small squeek come from next door. i go out of my room silently walk to my sisters room and just open the door and she freaks out and covers herself i say "having fun" then start laughing she says "your and ass hole chris!" i say i love yopu sis, sleep tight, turn around and walk away return to my room and go to sleep. what a fucking saturday night! the end!!!
or is it!!!? its up to my readers!.

 

Well, with your stories, they're both good, but you need to learn some grammar skills. Separate paragraphs, make it easier to tell who's talking, use spell check too.

Also maybe a little more detail...

But i'd love to read further on this story if you're willing to write.

 

tried but cant....I need more then one continuous sentance and paragraph.

 

LoL ^^

 

not a writer

ehh i tried and also i dont like to use spell checkers but i hope it was okay

 

nice , good one

 

Separate dialect into separate paragraphs.

 

Well, if you ever need an editor, I'm sure there's more than a few people who'd gladly help out with editing.

 

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i apreiciate your feed back guys but i am trying to self teach into the grammer and stuff myself never was good at it going threw school i always had to have teacher proof read but thanks for the comments
i also like how some people are making suggestions very helpfull, thanks

 

No offense but I've seen 3rd graders spell better then you. Otherwise, it's good.

 

I am not the best at this but it took the time to copy this story and clean it up some. I think it is now a little more readable.

My Sister


Its 2:45 and i just get out of school its Friday and I'm 16 I can do what ever I want or so i think but I return home take a nice hot shower go in my room and read my new vampire novel blood and chocolate after what seemed like an hr of reading my 15 year old sister knocks then just runs in (glad I wasn't jacking off) as she stands in my room I look up and say sarcastically"Oh why sister of mine do come on will you?" she looks at me then smiles "Sorry brother" she says and sits down on my bed beside me, " Watcha readin?" “A book”I answer, she laughs.


I look at her and say “What do you want?"as I stare it her I notice she is wearing nothing but a bath robe and she has gotten a little to tall for it and she is not its size anymore. She looks down into my eyes and says “Hey Chris can you buy me a new robe this one is to small for me now" I look at her and notice that she is showing off parts of her body" I never noticed my sisters perfect breasts before As I stare at her breasts in amazement" She then smiles and says “I just came in to see what was new with you Chris and also see if you would get me a new robe" She smiles as she turns away and says "Love yea" I say as always "Love yea back" Then she says “Really I like my front better but whichever you love more" I laugh and say with tits like that everyone should" Unknowingly i said that out loud.


My sister turned around and stared at me, and I say to myself “Oh fuck. I said that out loud” She walked closer to and he stares at me point blank again I lose myself in her breasts but this time my dick gets hard. Now my sister and I love each other but not like bf and gf but like brother and sister, this time she notices my hard cock and giggles. I quickly move my hand to cover it and she just stares I say “Sis I didn't mean that!” She looks at me looks down and notices what I meant, she shrugs and actually loses her robe. I can't help myself I just look at her naked body and she just says "Oops" then giggles she then says to me "Well you have seen me naked now its my turn to see you" Far is far I guess, so I stand up walk to the door shut and lock it then spin around lose my pants and shirt but I leave my boxers on, She demands For me to take them off, but I say “You do it for me.” She gets on her knees, pull my boxers to my ankles. Now she is at eye level of my hard throbbing cock. She pushes me to the bed and I fall on to my back with her on top of me with her head still at eye level of my cock.


Without any hesitation she begins to suck on my cock. I never new it would feel this good coming from my sister or yet it has never felt this good and it kind of scares me but i enjoy it to much all the sudden she stops flips around and sticks her wet pussy in my face so I start fingering her and licking her clit she stops sucking me and says " Oh. Fuck brother. That feels so good. Please don't stop." And I say “As long as you don't stop either.”


A pretty dumb thing to say seeing as I know its wrong but it feels to fucking good to stop so I let it happen" She goes back to sucking my cock but moans of pleasure still escape her mouth even with my dick in it, she then stops flips around again and slides her pussy over my cock, she gasps at the feel of it, I ask her " Are you a virgin Sis?" she looks at me pushes down really hard and I knew I just popped her cherry then looks up and says "Not anymore" she smiles and I can't help but smile back. We continue having sex until she climaxes and she covered my cock in cum and she stares at me and said "I've never came that much, you must be magic" I say "you've never had a cock inside you either" she cracks a smile then continues bouncing up and down on my cock I tell her lean down and so i start sucking on her nipple and licking her chest and playing and doing everything I knew of. she started screaming louder " Oh fuck me Chris fuck me harder oh it feels so good but i want you to come inside me and fuck me faster!!!" I listen and start thrusting forward and she loves it she is almost hyperventilating and so i put one hand over her mouth and say " shhhhh!!!!! parents are downstairs" she pulls my hand off her mouth. And says “It feels to fucking good. I can't help it. It feels too fucking good to ever want yo to stop fucking my pussy.” I stare at her and say your a dirty little girl aren't you? she looks at me and said demandingly "Don”t question, me fuck me!!!!" so I thrust as hard as I can into her slippery pussy, she quickly covers her mouth with both hands and screams it sounded almost like she was talking to me, Oh fuck that feels so good and continues moaning I felt the sensation of my orgasm coming but she beat me to it and started convulsing and jerking around as her climax left her body and she fell on top of me and after a few minutes sat back up and slid off. she said to me "You gotta cum yet?" I look up at her and say in a raspy voice" uh uh" so she starts rubbing her tits on my dick and then went back to sucking on it and i said a few seconds to late, " I'm going to cum!" as the cum left my cock she swallowed it down almost as fast as it came to her, I was shocked at how fast she could swallow and only a little dripped from her mouth and it landed on her stomach were she wiped it off with her finger then stuck it in her mouth.


She then started stroking my cock for what little was left and so I told her let me clean you up a little and I licked her pussy clean while I was licking her clit she became the horny little girl she is and wanted me to lick her clit faster and slide my fingers deep inside of her I did and she had to cum again, she started moaning again so I took a pillow and put it over her head and she was still screaming then she went silent and she just stopped frozen in time as her whole body went into spasms as the cum left her pussy I licked her clean.


She stood up I kissed her and smacked her on the ass. she turned around laid down on my chest closed her eyes and said "I love you brother and i want this to happen more often" I say i don't know thats not what brothers and sisters are suppose to do, right as I finish my sentence, I hear footsteps coming up the stairs, I say "Oh fuck someone is coming and she slid off the bed put on her robe and I threw on a pair of dirty shorts and a shirt off my floor I open my book and my sister lays down on my bed right as a knock is heard on my door. I get up unlock it and my mom is standing there she says “I heard screams is everything OK?” I look at her then look at my sister and give her a look and she just looks away, I say “Yea everything is fine.” my mom then asks "Well what happened then why was your sister screaming?" I say “Cause I kept poking her and it pissed her off so she screamed at me my mom smacks me upside the head and says " Don't be a dick," so I say “Sorry then she walks away and I shut my door and under my breath say “Don't choke on your dick... I hated my mother... anyways I turn to my sister act like her and put my hands on my hips and say you little bitch you got me in trouble... she says "I'm sorry big brother want me to suck your cock and let you tie me up and fuck me to repay for the smack?" I say " Keep dreaming Sis" so she says "Awww please Chris? A little longer?" I look at her and say you still horny? she says yes so I say you horny little slut... she smiles and then says " please fuck me more?" so I say why don't you go play with yourself in your room while I read my book and maybe this can happen again. she puts her hands on her hips and says "Fine... but I'm going to fantasize about you"


I open my book find my spot and start reading, then say “What ever floats your boat kiddo. she walks away and says “Fuck me tonight?" I say maybe, now shut my door and go do your thing. she turns walks away and goes in her room I continue reading and at about 11:00 pm I am almost done reading when I hear a small squeak come from next door. I go out of my room silently walk to my sisters room and just open the door and she freaks out and covers herself I say "Having fun?" then start laughing she says "Your and ass hole Chris!" I say I love you sis, sleep tight, turn around and walk away return to my room and go to sleep. what a fucking Friday night!


The End!!!​

 

nice story.

 

very good

 

Nice job Oweena...

 

if ur sis want more sex then contact me ... i am very glad to do thissss ...

 

Learn to Write Correctly.

Please.

 

thanks Qweena. *goes back and reads it*

 

hmmmm. OP are you still in high school? just wondering.

 

I'm still in HIGH SKEWL! GIMME CANDYYYYY BELLA!

 

I hesitate to openly accuse anyone of plagiarism, but in this case I feel fully justified.
Elements of this story are far too close to sections of my story The Things Girls Say!: Part two - Telling Tracey.

For instance:



Tracey turned her upper body to face me. As she did so her bathrobe fell open slightly. She didn't seem to be aware that not only was her bathrobe open, but that she was also exposing one of her titties to me.

Almost an identical scenario in this story

“Love ya” Tracey said as she went to the door.
“Love ya back” I replied, as usual.
“But my front’s nicer!” she retorted automatically.
“Yeah, I know, now” I added.

Almost WORD FOR WORD form my story!

“Fuck me, big brother!” Tracey urged, “fuck me harder!” I’d never heard my little sister swear before, ever. Hearing her use the ’fuck’ word under those circumstances drove my arousal up another couple of notches and I obliged her.
I began to thrust my hips into my sister’s tight wet pussy harder and faster.
“Oh, yeah, Adam” she gasped, “that’s better!”

And again...

Suddenly, I felt her pussy tighten around my pounding shaft as Tracey arched her back and shuddered from head to toe. I had to clamp a hand over her mouth to muffle her orgasmic cries as her sexy little body convulsed and writhed.

Very similar...


and even the scenario of the parents being downstairs, the 'action' taking place in the brother's bedroom...


Okay, the story differs in significant detail to be quite different from mine, but it is way too close to be accidental or coincidental...

If you'd like to make a full comparison, this is the link to MY story...

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/13961/The_Things_Girls_Say%21_Part_Two_-_Telling_Tracey