This is a story for cutie kelly, as she posted a thread asking someone to write her a story depicting her fantasies. (;
The main characters in this story are teenagers/preteens, the oldest being 14, the youngest being 12.
As of right now, there is no sex whatesoever to be put in this story, however, that might change if enough people want it.​

Comments/criticism GREATLY appreciated. Now for the story. ​

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Chapter 1​

“Ugh, that was so boring!” Kelly complained to Grace Corther. The two 14 year old girls were the best of friends, and had been since elementary.
“I know, right?” the Caucasian girl replied, long brown hair swaying from side to side as they walked.
“Do you want to come over today?” Kelly asked, flipping her black hair behind her shoulder.
“Mmm? Oh, sure.” Grace said, nodding. “I know it’s alright with my parents. I’ll call them once we get to your place.”
The two girls walked to Kelly’s house, talking about the usual girl stuff. As they arrived home, Kelly patted her pocket, slight panic showing on her features.
“Fuck. I think I left my keys in my locker.” she said.
“Oh, that’s okay. Isn’t Brian home anyways?” Grace asked.
Kelly immediately started pounding on the door.
“BRIAN, OPEN UP!” she yelled.
“I’m coming, I’m coming.” They heard a faint voice come from behind the door, followed by the sounds of multiple locks being released. The door opened to show the 12 year old boy standing behind it, his black hair in a neat mess, his glasses tilted slightly to the left.
“Oh. It’s you.” he said, disappointment clouding his voice. However, that changed as soon as he saw Grace emerge from behind his older sister.
“Hi, Grace!” he piped up, a grin showing on his cute boyish features.
“Hello, Brian,” Grace said, smiling sweetly.
“C’mon. Let’s go up to my room.” Kelly said, half dragging Grace as she tried to wave goodbye to Brian. Back in the bedroom, they both sat on Kelly’s bed, door shut tight. They talked about everything. School, boys, gossip, average girl stuff. Then the conversation took a turn, and they found themselves talking about sex.
“So, have you ever fantasised about someone?” Kelly asked softly.
“Well, erm, yeah, once or twice,” Grace admitted. The girl’s voices had gone down to a whisper.
“Who?”
“Jorge Ritata, back in the 7th grade,” she said. This brought a giggle out from both of the two girls, then a slight silence followed.
“Have you ever…y’know…touched yourself?” Grace asked Kelly, her voice barely audible.
“You mean masturbate?” Kelly asked, louder this time.
“Yeah. That.”
“Well, of course I have, Gracie!” She said, using her best friend’s nickname. “Lots!”
“Really?” Grace asked, awe in her voice. “How?”
“I’ll tell you later.” Kelly said, closing that topic. Grace looked slightly disappointed.
“Have you done anything with a boy?” Kelly asked.
“Oh, yeah. It’s fun going to the mall or the beach wearing short shorts or a revealing shirt. They all look at you, with their mouths half open! Plus,” she added, “Some even get…you know…erections.”
Kelly sniggered. “Of COURSE they do, silly! That’s the fun part. Then they go walking around the rest of the day,”
“With a case of blue-balls!” Grace finished, as both of the girls erupted in giggles.
“Oh, shit,” she said, hopping off the bed.
“What?”
“I forgot to phone my parents. One sec.” Grace disappeared out of sight, and a thought popped into Kelly’s head. Quickly, she booted up her computer, typed in a website address, and willed it to load faster. She heard Grace bounding up the stairs to her room, and she surreptitiously turned the laptop so that the screen was hidden from her friend. They resumed talking, on different points this time.
Eventually, though, Grace had to go, and Kelly stopped her just as she was about to walk out of the room.
“You know how you asked me how I masturbated?” She questioned.
“Yeah?” Grace answered, her eyes shining.
“Well, this plays a part in it.” Kelly turned the laptop, the screen now showing obscene images of cocks, tits, and a myriad of sex.
“The website is xnxx.com, if you want to know,” Kelly said, smiling. “Seeya tomorrow, Grace.” And with that, she ushered her still dumbstruck friend out the door, the images burned into her memory. Later, to Grace’s surprise, she found a wet spot in her panties, the smell of female musk clinging to it.
Back at home, Kelly called Brian’s name, mischief in her voice.
"Yeah, Kelly?" the 12 year old asked, his black hair dishevelled, his glasses askew.
"I'm taking a shower, okaay?" she said.
"Erm, yeah, sure." He replied. Kelly didn't fail to notice the slight bulge that grew in his shorts.
Running the water, Kelly made sure to keep the door open about a foot, as she made her way into the steamy water. The shower stall had translucent glass walls, meaning that any onlooker could easily see her luscious body, with her cute ass and orange-sized tits.
As she soaped herself down, she thought of the plan that was blossoming in her head. She had searched that porn site and seen many, many videos. But the ones that turned her on most were when the girl was dominating the guy. She thought of her favourite video, and found herself masturbating.
Scolding herself, she thought only of what was going to happen that night. She remembered seeing her brother’s face as he talked to Grace, or whenever she mentioned her…and a revelation struck her. Her brother had a crush on her best friend!
She refocused on the task at hand, and remembered that she had left the door open specially for that onlooker.
Less than five minutes later, she heard rough breathing. Smiling, she peered out of the shower just a crack, her reward being the sight of her brother peering through the gap, mouth open.
Later, as she turned the shower off, she wrapped herself in a fluffy white towel and walked out of the bathroom. Kelly grinned.
"I'm changing, little brother!" She called as she ran into her bedroom, dropping the towel. Her parents were out at work - she had no worries about being caught by them in her teasing acts.
Bending over, exposing her round ass to her door, she rubbed lotion on her feet, then her ankles. Sneaking a glance behind her, she indeed saw Brian there again, mouth wide open. Rubbing herself all over with her lotion, she closed her eyes, and let out a sensual 'Mmmm.' Turning around, she heard a slight intake of breath as Brian saw her naked body full on. Eyes still closed, she massaged the cream into her skin, her breasts glowing from the moisture.
Kelly heard a slight 'Uh, uh, uhhhhh' sound, and she quickly turned around, putting on clothes. The smell of male musk permeated the room.
Tonight would be the night.
Booting up her computer again, she quickly logged onto her AIM, immediately talking to Grace.
Kelly_Kid69 (7:02 PM): heyyy
Grace_Lace1234 (7:02 PM): hi
Kelly_Kid69 (7:02 PM): how r u?
Grace_Lace1234 (7:03 PM): good u?
Kelly_Kid69 (7:03 PM): im good
Grace_Lace1234 (7:03 PM): lol cool
Kelly_Kid69 (7:05 PM): guess what????
Grace_Lace1234 (7:05 PM): wat?
Kelly_Kid69 (7:05 PM): i no who has a MAJOR crush on u!
Grace_Lace1234 (7:06 PM): oooh who?
Kelly_Kid69 (7:07 PM): BRIAN
Grace_Lace1234 (7:07 PM): no way
Kelly_Kid69 (7:07 PM): yeah waayy!
Grace_Lace1234 (7:08 PM): well u no wat?
Kelly_Kid69 (7:08 PM): wat?
Grce_Lace1234 (7:08 PM): i kinda like him 2
Kelly_Kid69 (7:09 PM): rly???
Grce_Lace1234 (7:09 PM): yeaa
Kelly_Kid69 (7:09 PM): thats awesome. u 2 shud totally go out
Grce_Lace1234 (7:09 PM): i dunno. he is rllly cute though
Kelly_Kid69 (7:10 PM): u shud! ill arrange everything 4 u 2, k?
Grce_Lace1234 (7:10 PM): ill think about it. but sounds pretty good. i g2g now. ttyl!
Kelly_Kid69 (7:11 PM): ttyl!
Grce_Lace1234 Has Signed Off.
Kelly smiled again. This was gonna be perfect.
The rest of the day passed by without incident. Kelly kept teasing Brian, and by 9 PM Kelly had teased Brian so much that she was surprised he was so composed. It was a good thing that her parents had called, telling the kids that they were on a project for work and wouldn't be back until 4 PM the next day.
Finally, at around 11 PM, Kelly told Brian that she was going to bed. Moments later, he followed, and they both closed their bedroom doors.
Creeping from her bedroom, she walked across the hall, naked, to her younger brother's bedroom.
She stared at the crack beside the door that had opened slightly, her breathing ragged. Night after night she had done this - waited, waited until her parents were asleep, or gone, waited until the fridge was quiet, waited until the only ones up were herself - and her brother.
She peeked into the room a little more, the perfect view in front of her eyes. There, on his bed, was her brother, Brian. Oh, Brian. The fourteen year old girl licked her lips, shivering with delight.
She watched Brian look around, watched him relax and push the sheets off of himself. The sight made her smile. There, in all of it's glory, was his cock, standing high and mighty. He wrapped a hand around it, closing his eyes in pleasure. She made sure that everything was ready. Tonight would be perfect.
He moved his hand up and down on his member, a slight moan escaping from his half-open mouth.
Words began to form on his lips as he jacked himself faster and faster, his hand now a blur.
"Ohh, Grace, yes, yess, like that. Ooh, ooh oo-"
She burst into the small bedroom, her naked body getting goose bumps from the cold air escaping through the open window.
"Shit, Kelly! What the hell?" he yelled out, as he began cumming.
Kelly posed in various positions, a sultry smile slinking upon her face. She used all the sexy positions she knew, posing obscenely in front of her younger brother.
Streaks of white spurted from his cock as he stared, open mouthed, at his luscious sister. His orgasm soon overpowered his shock, however, as his hips thrust upwards and he cried out with delight, the hardest orgasm of his life coursing through him.
As the waves subsided, he froze, hand still on his cock, mouth still open, white cum splattered on the blankets.
"Hello, Brian." Kelly said as sexily as she could.
"Wh-wh--what?" he managed to splutter out.
"You, my friend," she said, walking over to where he was.
"Will become my slave. My sex slave, that is."
"And why would I do that?" he asked boldly, though his cock was growing once more, and his eyes were glued to Kelly's tits.
"Because, brother," she said, climbing over top over him on all fours. She lowered her mouth next to his ear, her tits dangling enticingly in front of him. "Because you want Grace. And the only way to Grace is through me. And," she added. "You want me too. I know you do. I've heard you jack off in your room every night. I've seen you peeking at me whenever you think I'm not watching."
He knew he was beaten. If he didn't do this, his sister was known for spreading rumours.
"Fine." Was all he said, though his cock was now rock
hard.
"That's a good brother. Now, here's what you're going to do. You shall be my sex slave. But you will NOT be allowed to cum."
"So you're gonna torture me?" Brian asked, disbelief in his voice.
"Yess, that's exactly what I'll do. Here's a sample of what you might be rewarded with."
She got up off of the bed, moving in front of it. She started dancing to an invisible song, gyrating her hips and shaking her tits. She spread her legs, crouching on the ground, giving Brian a full view of her bald cunt, shaved naked. He gasped, his mouth hanging open, his eyes wide. Kelly knew that he jerked off to porn - she had gone through his stash under his bed once - but he had never seen a real, live, naked girl. And here, right in front of him, was his own sister, showing the goods that all guys dream of seeing.
She licked a finger and snaked it down her body, finally circling around her pussy, and inserting her finger inside. She let out a moan, beginning to masturbate.
For Brian, this was almost too much. His hips began to rock, and Kelly immediately stopped, proceeding to slap him on the leg.
"OW! What the hell was that for?" he yelled out.
"You are NOT allowed to cum." Kelly said, overpowering Brian. She stared into his eyes, and kept talking.
"If you cum without any restraint, you will not talk to Grace, let alone get to see her naked."
"Whoa! What did you say?" Brian asked, his cock jumping.
"Nothing. DO NOT CUM. If you cum, I will not show you any part of my body. I will not hook you up with Grace. However, if you are a good boy, and you hold it in, then there will be rewards."
Brian groaned, and sat up.
Kelly continued her dance, masturbating herself again. She kneaded her breasts with one hand, fingering herself with the other.
After a bit, Brian started to rock again. Kelly continued her erotic movements, but she came closer, staring at him, reminding him.
A little voice in the back of her head said something mischievous, and she smiled. Walking right up beside Brian, she spread her pussy wide open, and let him watch her finger herself.
For poor Brian, the sight was too much. He gave in to his orgasm, and it swept over him, thick jets of cum spewing out of his cock and onto his chest, face, and torso.
As the orgasm subsided, Brian was aware of a pitying "Tsk, tsk, tsk." He opened his eyes, aware that Kelly had stopped and was now standing above him with her arms crossed.
"You naughty boy. You came. What did I tell you NOT to do?" she asked, a cold cruelty creeping into her voice.
"C-c-cum." Brian said, fear showing in his eyes.
"And why did you, Brian?"
"Well...maybe if you had used your hand to press down on that certain part so a guy doesn't cum -"
"You don't deserve to feel my hands on your cock!" Kelly yelled, making him jump.
"In fact, you don't deserve to have ANY part of me on your cock! Keep that in mind as you go to bed." She said harshly, beginning to turn.
"B-but are you still going to be my master?" he asked, hopeful. Brian really like Grace.
"We'll see." Was all she said as she walked away, her hips swaying enticingly as she left his room to go to bed.
Brian turned off the light, in a dream-like state. He was aware of the cum that was still on his body, on his bed, and that just aroused him more, so he didn’t bother to clean it. He fell asleep with his cock tingling, growing, as he remembered the act which had just happened. And one thing swirled through his mind.​

What was tomorrow going to be like?​

 

thats definitely rivaled with sillyguy8's story. keep it cumming

 

Glad you like, hun. (;

 

keep going its a good story.

 

very nice

 

Keep this going Its really great

 

Oh my goodness! That was amazing

 

Writing the next part as we speak. Sorry, a lot has been going on lately.

 

You write like a pro - or that you have been there before...

I am looking forward to your next installment.

 

Anything new yet? I'm getting realllly antsy waiting.

 

wow nice

 

love to read more

 

nice

 

Writing teen fiction is hard. You want to credit them with the knowledge of the world that they have, but not throw adult responsibilities in with it, unless it is to show a development that works to benefit the teen reading the story.

Good work!

 

my cock is so hard for you

 

Very interesting

 

hot story...

 

nice!

 

Awesome!

Very awesome!

 

Wow, what an awesome story!!!

You're a fantastic writer :rose:

Please continue!