This is a story I've been working on, it would be nice to hear what people think about my writing - if I should write more, or stick to reading.

The day I met an exhibitionist

This is my first story, I have often thought about writing stories here as i enjoy reading them here I've decided that if I am going to write a story it should be based on an experience instead of dreams/fantasy. The experience I decided to write about is quite long, so I will break it down into chapters and if people want to hear (read) the next chapter then tell me, if people dont want to know also tell me and then I'll keep the next part to myself.

This story is true, except the names, locations and events were altered slightly, both people are over 18. I suppose I should start off by decribing myself, well I'm 23, a touch over 6 foot 2, tanned with dark hair and eyes.

This all started last week, I live in Spain and because its August there are lots of tourists and quite a few girls who are looking for a holiday romance and to let their hair down. Well I was sat at the bus-stop waiting when I looked up and saw a nice little body in a white bikini walking towards me - it was mid to late 30s (celcius) so it's not uncommon to see women in just bikinis - as she got closer I could see that her nipples were hard and very visible in the tight bikini top. Just as she was about 5 steps away i thought it would be rude to stare and looked at the floor, where a pair of legs appeared. I started to look up and noticed a slight camel-toe and it was clear the bikini bottoms were wet and stuck to her I was sure I could see-through it but didnt want to be caught so I took my head phones out and she asked "do you speak English?" I looked at her hard nipples and with a grin I replied "yeah a little bit" I had never seen her before, so asked if she was enjoying her holiday, name, age and the usual stuff.

Her name was Clare, she was 18, probably 5 foot 5, with shoulder length dark hair and a perky 32b. She asked for a ciggarette and if I knew of any nice beaches. I told her "I've got only a couple, but if you give me your number and join me for a drink later I'll give you 1, might even let you have a fag too!" She went bright red and said "I haven't got my phone with me, but for a fag you can have my room number" I decided my luck was in and gave her a ciggarette. Just as she was about to light up, the bus turned up so I offered to show her the nicest beach if she wanted to join me. We got to the beach about 10 minutes later and found a nice spot, I took my top off and was about to lie down when Clare asked me to put cream on her back. By this time i was dying to get my hands on her sexy little body, but was wishing there wasn't a beach full of people around. Anyway being the gentleman that I am, I took the cream and told her to lie down.

She got on all-fours showing her bum perfectly and slowly got into position, I started with her calves then moved up to her thighs. I decided I would tease her a bit and see what happened, so i opened her legs a bit more and put cream on the insides of her thighs "accidently" brushing against her pussy - if I wasn't in a trance i could've sworn there was a little moan - after brushing across her bikini clad mound I thought I should move to her top half and did her back, while I was doing her sides my hands "accidently" brushed along the side of her tits. I told her she was done and got on my sunbed, after a few minutes we decided to go in the sea. While we were messing about we each had a little grope and she tried to pull my shorts down, as we got out I noticed her bikini had gone see-through and i could clearly see her hard nipples and shaven pussy. I had to ask if she knew it went see-through, she replied " well duh! a wet, white bikini isnt going to cover anything is it?" and she went on "I like to tease and this way, I can show off and act like I dont know" by now we were back at our beds, "so tell me more about how you like to tease" I said with a grin. "I'll do better then tell you" she replied and began to remove her top, once the top was off she got the suncream and squirted a bit on her chest. "looks like some-one shot their load doesnt it?" she winked. "keep going and some-one will" I blushed. She very slowly rubbed suncream into her chest which unfortunatly made me have to lie on my front. Once she was finished she asked what I was hiding so I rolled back onto my back and she came and sat on my lap, grinding against my hardness. "shame we aren't naked isnt it?" she teased. I held her hips and pushed against her "yeah, but I wouldnt be able to stop if we were naked now" I replied. She came up with a brain-wave and said "well let's go back to the hotel then bigboy" So we did....

If you want to know what happened next, you let me know

 

no shit we want to know what happens next. good start

 

hahahaha agreed! why would you even bother to ask us?

 

wow that was nice

 

geeee...I wonder where this story is going....LOL

sorry to say the story line has been done to death, nice try....

BTW...don't stop because of lame brain criticism