damn this story is incredible :excited: and the wait for the next installment is killing me :wall:
first on page 5 ftw

 

awesome read

 

I'd just suggest that you leave out the posts where you say you'll post at a certain time as your schedule seems that you cant come through every time and readers become frustrated coming back and there is nothing. Its not saying anything bad, as its a wonderful read, it'd just be easier without the expectation of a new post at a certain time and it not being there.

 

I've cut and past the whole story into a word doc (just so I can read it when I have the full time to devote to it) and it is almost 300 pages.

I love the story I can't wait for the next part....

 

wow, 300 pages ? Really ???

I'm sorry this next update is so slow coming. I've had a lot been going on. I swear, I need to find some underaged girl repelent or something. They won't leave me alone. It's like, I could be in a whole room full of guys, eligible bachelors, all better off than me, and these underaged predators single me out, surround me and beat me down! Even at halloween, just walking along with my niece, a group of 11-13 year olds stop and tell me how awesome I looked wearing sunglasses at night.

I swear, I have tried everything. I tried not responding, and they just jabber on. I tried dipping and spitting my brown spit, and ohh my, that just fascinated them. I was terrified they would ask to try it! I'm a strong man, but god help me, if a 12 year old girl asks to try my dip, I think i might cave in my defenses and give her a pinch. They are wearin' me down!

*ahem* sorry... didna mean to go into that here. Just suffice it to say i've been working a lot, and spending a lot of time taking my niece out places so she can have fun. So, I promise I'll get this next arc of the story finished, and kick things towards the ending soon.

 

Know all too well what you mean man, I've had to actually tell one off one time because of that shit lol. It became quite a problem at one point, almost disturbing in a way- idk what it is about 13-14 yr old girls that just have a thing for geeky guys with guns lol.

 

thats fuucked lol... still waiting on the update tho, great story tho could probly read it everynight if it was long enough.

 

Man you don't know the half of it lol.

Indeed though, if there were installments to keep me occupied I'd be reading it all the time, it's outstanding- the wait for the next one has killed my motivation to do anything else lol

 

It's nice to hear a response so we know what's going on. Take as long as you need. People here dont seem to be too patient, including me lol. But at least we know what's up now .

 

mmm interesting. bit of a sicko aren't ya

 

Go cry to your mom, if you dont like it, dont read it.

 

mister you better behave, you have been enjoying a little too long with your sister, my 13 years old sister who is more developed then your sister, is jealous or her, so you better listen to me because i am the chie of homeland security of every country in this world.

 

i've been fucking my sisters for years and even their kids i got a 20 yr old neice that's hot as a firecracker and horny as all get up and one good fuck.

 

O great! Nate died again

 

Dare I say that perhaps he contracted H1N1? He cheated death before with the severe stroke, but he couldn't cheat death a second time.. RIP Nate.

 

Come on, dude. It's been 2 weeks since the last part. Get back into the groove and give us more.

 

Man! You are simply too good. Keep it up. enjoyed reading your stuff.

 

Man you rock! Good story, nice presentation. Can't wait for you to conclude. good job!

 

whoa, dude you niece as in your child? Is this shit true? And if it is, nice work!
man you story fucking owns all