BiStander...

Let me just say how wonderful it was to see you grow with your stories. When I first read your 'My neighbors incest 1', I thought the grammar was a bit off, and I noticed more than a few spelling errors. It was wonderful to see how much more care and love you put into your stories, and how well you developed some of the characters.

I am glad you ended it. It seemed like you were trying hard to fill up story, after story. It was ended gracefully as well, in my opinion. 'We can share' ends it as well as anything else.

Reading a story like this on xnxx is truly refreshing and I hope the next part of your life is enjoyable and good for you. Please, take care.

Thank you,

 

Very nice story, too bad you had to leave.... I had to look up my username just to come here and tell you this : it was a nice story, the end of course came way too soon, we all wanted him to find his true love. Good luck in your next adventure, Hope to see you soon!!
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Though I know he is not with us I find myself still logging in with his writing in mind and heading straight to this section to see what everyone is saying. The story completely wrapped me up in it and like so many have said I would check every opportunity I got for the next chapter with all else going on hold when it would arrive!

 

As a suggestion, Okie, you might try doing what I have been doing for quite some time; several of my favorite authors are no longer writing for this site and I find myself re-reading their stories, from beginning to end for the reminder of my love of their stories. This would be easy, but lengthy in this case because chapter I through XIX flow pretty well. I just finished reading all of them, one after the other. It is not the same as finding a new story from someone but it is more a reminder. Sort of like kissing your wife instead of the girl down the street - maybe not as exciting, but very comfortable (not to mention safer). I love his stories also.

 

I too have been finding myself rereading a lot of my favorite stories because i lot have quit writing till the server is up or aren't just writing anymore

 

In all the years I've been coming to this site, it was with a particular goal. A quick wank and off to bed. But when I started on this series, I found myself not just aroused by it, but enthralled with it. The writing was of a much higher caliber than the traditional "spank rag" you see so much of. I actually found myself aching with empathy of the emotional struggles of this imagined family. All of this without the trappings of a "romance novel" type story.

Well done sir, and here's to hoping you can return some day, and continue expounding the world you have created.

 

I must say, Admiral, that as a friend to BiStander, he would be moved by your comment. Very nice. And for all of us who are his friends, thank you.

 

Your stories are the best I have ever read on this site!
The only thing you did stuff up was at the last couple of chapters - the storyline was a little dodgy.
But - The ending was the best ending I have ever read/watched/heard - better than those crummy movie endings. Good work and wish you good luck in your journey!

 

definitely the best stories on the site - I could hardly not wait for the next edition to be posted - and I really felt for your characters - excellent

 

please continue

You should continue with the stories as long as they continue providing material. Who know`s, maybe they are enjoying reading them too.

 

Great story......

 

I would like to say, once again, as one of BiStanders friends; I know he would appreciate all of your very nice comments. I know he loved the thought that people were reading and enjoying his stories and was very proud of the improvement in his writing and pleased when readers noticed it.

Thank you all and as a suggestion: read them again in six months or so. You'll enjoy them again.

 

Have just only read this series after a couple of years of visiting the stories site! What a hidden gem these stories turned out to have been for me!

After finishing the last of the stories on Monday night the rest of the week has been spent just summarising the story and wondering what happens after the conclusion of it!

If the writer ever comes back and reads this comments, I just thought I'd say a deep felt thank you for writing this series, No other story has touched me as much as this one has!

 

Thanks for story!

 

I hope you get to make a nice end to this storie.
gif me a headsup when youre back with a new chapter

 

That's all good then.

 

Great stories

Thanks for writing I found them very captivating

 

I have reread it myself 4 times I feel like I know the characters of the story I miss Bistanders work it was great. I feel I miss seeing their lives as they grow older.

 

Extremely nice story you have shared.

 

It has been 2 years now since BiStander left us. This series is a testament of good writing techniques and its ending, like life is never what we expect or hope for.
May the authour be having the happy ending that he looked for himself.