My first attempt at such a story..... tell me what you think...

[FONT=&quot]My brother, My father and I took a weekend trip out of town, about 7 hours away, to attend an event. When the even ended we shared a hotel room for the night, we had 2 queen beds, so there would be plenty of room for us all. Upon arriving at the hotel we were tired and hungry, so we decided to walk to the restaurant across the street for dinner. It was one of those restaurants where the waitresses are dresses in really short shorts and very tight and revealing tops. All of the women were very attractive, our waitress (Tabitha) was about 5' 2", dark skinned, and with I'm guessing 38D breasts, an awesome looking ass, and a very pretty face. At one point I excused myself from the table to visit the men’s room. While away from the table I ran into our waitress, and told her that if her of any of her co-workers were interested in having a little fun, we were in room 305 across the street. She smiled and said she'd think about it. We finished out dinner, and returned to the room, I had not mentioned my conversation to the waitress to the other guys. About an hour later there was a knock at the door, I opened the door to find our waitress standing there, I invited her in, my brother and father seemed a little confused but not unhappy. Tabitha was still in her outfit from work, here breasts partially exposed, it was obvious from her hardened nipple had she had no bra on, and her ass cheeks hanging out of her shorts. She introduced herself and said "I was invited over for a little fun", as she was removing her shirt, revealing her beautiful tits, she continued "I hope you don't mind'. Unanimously we all said "Not at all", She moved toward my father, pressing her tits against his clothed chest, leaned in giving him a sultry kiss, and said "I've always been taught to respect the elders, so we'll start with you". With that she lowered herself to her knees, pulling his shorts down as she did, she then took his hardening cock into her mouth. She sucked his entire 7" in, taking it deep into her mouth. She continued giving him a fantastic blow job for several minutes, then they changed positions, he moved to a bed and laid down, she got on her knees between his legs and continued to suck his cock. As she took his cock into her mouth she was massaging his balls. Her ass looks so nice sticking up in the air, I move over toward her and begin removing those tight shorts of hers. As she continues to suck my father's cock I spread her ass cheeks and glide my tongue from the small of her back, down her crack, to her moist pussy. I glide my tongue back up and circle her asshole with my tongue. As I continue my tongue lashing of her ass and pussy, her pussy is very wet. I notice that my brother is sitting on the other bed, having removed his clothes and with his cock in his hand. I get up from my position behind Tabatha and motion for my brother to take my place, he kneels behind that gorgeous ass and guides his cock toward her moist lips. He slowly slides his cock into Tabatha's pussy, slowly sliding deeper until he's all the way in her. I remove my clothing and I notice Tabatha is still sucking my father's cock deep into her mouth, but I notice that she has a finger lodged deep into his ass. As my brother's cock slides in and out I hear Tabatha moan around my father's cock. With Tabatha's finger working his ass, and her mouth moaning on his cock, my father explodes, shooting his cum into her mouth, she swallows it all. Tabatha pulls herself off my brother's cock and rolls onto her back. My brother re-enters her and continues fucking her. I take this opportunity to kneel over Tabitha and suck on her ample tits. I circle my tongue around her breasts, circling her nipples, careful not to touch her nipples. Moving from one breast to the other, suddenly I suck her nipple into my mouth, and then I move to the other and suck it in. I continue sucking her tits, as my brother continues to slide hi cock in and out of her. I lick my way to the valley between her tits, and then I kiss and lick my way down her stomach, until I reach her clit. I suck her clit into my mouth, as my brother's cock is sliding into her pussy, Tabatha is writhing and moaning toward her first orgasm of the night. As I'm licking her clit, occasionally my tongue makes contact with my brother's cock. I lick the length of his cock as he slides into Tabatha's pussy, As Tabatha realizes that I'm licking my own brother's cock as it is fucking her, she explodes with her first orgasm, My brother pulls his cock from her as she cums, she squirts her juice on his cock and my face. Suddenly, my brother shoves his cock into my mouth, I wasn't expecting it, and have never had a cock in my mouth before, but in the heat of the moment, I began sucking and licking Tabatha's cum off his cock. As I continue to suck my brother's cock, Tabatha comment's "That's so hot....." she looks over to my father, who has regained his erection, and said " I need more cock...Fuck Me", and she rolls over on top of him, sliding he slick passage down his shaft. I hear her moan as she slides down my father's hard cock, my mouth still full of my brother's cock. My brother, not wanting to cum yet, pulls his cock from my mouth and trades places, taking my cock into his mouth. My brother continues to suck on my cock as Tabitha continues to ride my father’s cock. After several minutes of having my cock sucked by my brother, and hearing Tabatha fuck my father, I can’t hold back any longer, and I explode, shooting my cum into my brother's mouth. He holds my cum in his mouth and moves over to Tabitha, kissing her, sharing my cum with her. After swallowing the shared cum, Tabitha, says to my brother "Looks like you still need to cum, I want to feel your cock in my ass as your father fucks my pussy. Tabitha, lowers herself completely on my father's cock and leans down, kissing him, he mouth still tasting of my cum she shared with my brother. My brother moves in behind her and pushed the head of his hard cock into her small asshole. I hear Tabitha moan as she is feeling completely full of my father's and brother's cocks. My brother and Father find a rhythm as they fuck Tabitha in her ass and pussy at the same time, Tabitha it screaming from the pleasure. As Tabitha begins to cum, for the second time, Her ass and pussy squeeze harder on the cocks invading her. The added pressure makes my brother begin to cum also, feeling his cock pulse in her ass my father also being filling her pussy with his second load of cum. The three of them begin to come down off their intense orgasms and collapse on the bed, Looking on this display has gotten me very excited again, I look at Tabitha laying there catching her breath and I can see a mixture of hers, my brother's and my father's juices covering her pussy and ass. The sight excites me even more, I kneel between her legs and begin licking her dripping wet pussy and ass, Licking the cum of my brother and father from her. Once I've finished cleaning Tabitha’s pussy and ass, I slide up, kissing her, sharing the juicy mixture with her, as I easily slide my cock into her well used pussy. After several minutes of fucking Tabitha's pussy hard, I feel my cum starting to rise, I slide up Tabitha's sexy body and slide my cock between her tits, Holding her tits together I fuck her tits as she is has a cock in each hand stroking my father and brother. As I ready to cum I pull back and stroke my cock, until i cum all over her tits. Tabitha contributes to stroke the other cock until each one covers her tits in cum. Tabitha pulls one of her tits to her mouth, licking the cum off her nipple and the upper portion of her breast. We each take a few licks, helping to clean her up, before we all doze off to sleep.[/FONT]

 

thank you sweetie well done.

 

hot
maybe just separate paragraphs

 

Excellent luv. Thank you for sharing.

 

That was a wall of words and I couldn't read it. Please format it into paragraphs and repost.

 

Ye, ejls is actually right: very hard to read.

 

My fantasy in writing. How did you know? I loved it!!!

 

that srory is crazy

 

Does that come with fries?

 

Thanks for the feedback... I appreciate everyone's input