This is my first story, so let's get started

My name is John I'm 17 years old, and I am an only child, my parents separated when I was 8. My dad kinda split off and havnt seen him since. Now my mom hasn't remarried or really seen anybody since. My mom is 5'2" she is tan, about a C cup breast that are nice and firm. She has silky brown hair and weighs about 115 pounds. I have never experienced anything involving incest. I am pretty open with my mom though. As I was younger I would take showers with her, liking it at that age because I was so curious to what a womans features looked like. Sometimes when her and my dad faught she would snuggle up with me which I felt very comforting. Often times when I would masturbate I would here footsteps by my door and the footsteps would walk up, stop for a couple minutes and walk away, It could only be my mom and I always was paranoid she heard me and would open the door but was too carried away to stop.

Now this is how the day started.

I woke up early with no plans and thought I would get a shower. I undressedand put a fowl around my waist and walked to the bathroom. My mom was in the bathroom doing her hair. She said It would only be a couple minutes and just to wait there. She was being alittle flirty too. She would tell me how big I have gotten, And how I have big muscles like my father. And she complemented my hair and said, "I'm surprised the girls arnt all over you. I thought nothing of it and she got out of the bathroom and I jumped in the shower. About halfway threw my shower I heard a knock on the door and before I could say anything the door opens and my mom walked in, we have a glass stand up shower so I was nervous that my mom was seeing me naked. She walked in just looking for her necklace she looked around for it and remembers she had set it on he shelf of the shower for her shower. So out of no where she opens the door and reaches beside me grabs the necklace and as she pulls it back she drops it. Now I'm already feeling very akward now. So I say mom I'll get it just please get out. And she said no John it's fine I'm sorry I'll get it and get out. So sue bends down to grab it off the shower floor, as she goes to grab it up her hair brushes up against my dick. This gets my dick pretty hard. As she comes up she notices it but gives me a funny look closes the shower door and leaves the bathroom. I finish showering buy feel very embarrassed that my mother got me hard and even noticed it. I feel akward walking past my mom to m room and try not to make eye contact with her. I get to my room And whip off my towl and yet again there's another knock on the door. So I run to get some boxers on andd open the door. My mom said. "Honey I was hopeing we could talk?" so I said sure And she came in and sat down on my bed and patted the bed signaling me to sit down by her. So I did.she said, " Honey I'm sorry for walking in on the shower and invading ur privacy, but I just can't believe how handsome you've become" and the. She put her hand on my leg And slowly moved it up towards my groin. And says, "and in the shower ohh son I've seen how you have grown. I mean your very large and grabbed my cock instantly becoming hard. And then she realized what she was saying and doing and jumped up and said. "I'm sorry I'm your mother what am I doing!" and ran out of the room. I clearly new she wanted me then and to be honest I wanted her to. So I got up and went to find her. I was still wearing my boxers and harder than ever. She was in her bed crying, I crwalled up to her in her bed, she was now wearing running shorts And a sports bra. I just ran my fingers up and down her stomach and said, "it's okay mom, I know how you feel. And I feel the same way." she looked at me and said, "I don't know what I was thinking Hun." and I just took her hand and placed it on my cock. She didn't hesitate and started rubbing the head of my cock. She whispers in my ear, "I want you." so I started taking her sports bra off reveling her nice tan titties, she began to take my boxers off. Then she hagan liking my dick teasing me a little bit. I grabbed the back of her head and forced my dick slowly in her mouth. She deep throated the whole thing, it felt so good she then started bobbing her head on my cock very fast. I was already Bout to cum. She started rubbing my balls and I told her I was about to come. She said, "where do you want it baby" I told her on her face and titties. So he jumped up and dropped my load all over her tan body. The. She said, "she wanted my dick in her tight wett pussy." so she grabbed my thick cock spit on it and slipped it in her warn pussy, she was on top and began grinding on my dick very slow. I never thought I would be fucking my mom Ande she never though she would be fucking her son, but it felt so good I turned around to where I was on op of her and began fucking her as hard as I could. She started talking dirty saying, " yeah fuck your dirty mom, I'm a dirty cum dumpster. Treat me like your little whore!" so I gave her a light slap in the face. I told her to get up and bend over. She did and I stuck it in her tight ass. I went very slow at first then progressively got faster and faster till I was pounding her so hard she was just scramming. She loved it so much. She just kept moaning. "Ohh stick it in mommys asshole. Get deep in mommys ass." so I kept fucking her and smacking her phat ass and finally I blew a load in her ass. She loved it we both sat there motionless, my dick still in her ass. We were both tired breathing heavily then I pulled my cock out of her ass and she stuck her finger in her ass pulling it out drenched with cum, she stuck it in her mouth, "mhmm" she said S she licked it clean. Then she put her shorts on with her training bra and I put my boxers on and she sat next to me and said, "listen Hun no one can know about this," and I said, "I ok know mom, but I hope we cN xo this more often?" and she said, " Ovcourse we can I had a great time." Then she got up and said, "I'm gonna go for a run wanna join?" "No thanks, I'm gonna get dressed and go ride my longboard." and she said okay with a smile and left. I had soo much fun with my mom th morning and I new there was more to come.

That was my first story defantly not the best but let me here allitle feedback, thanks

 

Honest feedback - people are less likely to read a wall of words. Smaller paragraphs broken up with a space will help. Use spellcheck. If you don't have it, let someone proof your work We don't see most of our own errors. Learn about dialogue and how it should look. Again, separate paragraphs.

It's okay to re-do this and post it again.

 

i agree with eljs....you need shorter paragraphs....hard to read all the lines run together.....besides that the story itself was good i could see that happening

 

You need to say what kind of fowl you put around your waist.
Was it a hen, a duck, maybe a turkey?

 

also include more detail. how did she look, feel, smell, sound. give more description about the sex.

 

i agree with the other break things up a little was kinda hard to read. also build things up a little don't go right to the point. nervousness will play a big part as it is there first time together.

 

mmmmmmm mom love thanks so much!!

 

definitely break it up a bit. but great story , would love to read more

 

i fucked my mom...when i was younger and 8 of my friends fucked her too. She get drunk and pass out. we'd all line up and fuck her. alot more to the story..