Since so many members are constantly messaging me about new chapters, I will post this as a place to view updates for coming chapters. As I mentioned before, I work roughly 14 hours a day, so it's tough to get quality writing time in. I want to thank all the loyal members of this site who have supported both of my stories along the way. You give me the will to write on, which I do enjoy doing. Thanks to everyone for your support.


The next Installment - Chapter 11 should be up on or about July 16th, it will be a long chapter.

Take care everyone and please stay safe.

 

Great!

Perfect! I just reread the 1- 8, tomorrow when you post 11 I'll read 9 - 11. I know this will be a link in my favorites so I can be updated on my favorite series that I've read in a long time.

 

Thanks Blue, I'm glad you are enjoying the series. Thank you for the kind words. Take care, be stay and Semper Fi.

 

just like to say what a great series you have going here. personally i read it for the story not just the sex. you are a great writer and i hope you continue writing (not just this series) for a long time to come.

 

I just want to say how much I've enjoyed this series. You're a great writer, and it has been a wonderful distraction/alternative to studying this summer Keep it up, and I can't wait to keep reading. This story is one of the few that I've really really enjoyed

 

Thanks to everyone for the support, I have more chapters coming.

 

Just read chapter 11. You deserve an award! Very great story, although little sex i think it added to the story instead of taking away from it. Keep up the great writing.

 

Awsome

Your chapters keep getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter

 

Chapter 11

I just finished reading it, another piece to this amazing puzzle of a series you have! I'm excited for you to release Chapter 12 within the next few weeks!

 

Thanks guys, I appreciate the kind words. They make me want to write full time, in fact my job is getting in the way of my story. LOL. But seriously, thanks to everyone for the encouragement, you are way too kind.

 

BTW already working on Chapter 12.

 

Great to hear ch12 is in the works . Love your story, and like the direction with Alexis. Hope the back injury doesn't set back HD1 . Keep up the great work. I look forward to more chapters

 

This is just an amazing story to follow. It keeps the interest all the way through to the last word. I hate to see the last sentence scroll up, because that means the end of a chapter. Just as we all get enthralled with the storyline and the characters. After learning how extreme the training and practice is, I really would not want to do that even for a few million. No time for a real life, and the possibility of permanent injury, makes me happy with the path I chose. Keep going with this same style and I will keep reading and voting positive. Thanks so much for a quality story.

 

I've read all 11 parts so far and have to say great job all the way through. Yours is one of the best stories on this site.

 

I also think that this is an amazing story. You write very well and I hope you continue writing either this story or others. I'm sure most people who read this story feels the same way.

 

I do not understand why some people feel the need to intentionally try and disrupt a story. I have had one particular user who left me 14 messages, anonymously of course about how bad he dislikes my story and the lack of sex in it. If you go back to Chapter One, I tell people in the introduction what to expect. I understand if you dislike my story for the lack of sex, you indeed have a point. But why go on every chapter and post dozens of comments ? I get your point the first time. Then you give me 10 dislikes a day to bring my rating down. I guess that's why people don't allow anonymous votes, I couldn't figure that out until now. Anyway, thank you to all of the people who have been so supportive, the story will continue for you. Take care and be safe.

 

I started reading these stories a number of months ago and cannot help but praise the quality of writer which is showing their ability here and on the story site. Your stories are comparable to those of daddycums even though you do not have an extremely erotic theme. You have a quality that many other writers here lace, the ability to develop a character beyond a simple sex scene.

 

don't let the ankle biters get you down. character development superb. pace is great. only question is when Alexsis works out to get her killer bod. not a big point as she is not main character.

 

I agree, with darth, you are one of my top favorite writers on this site, don't let the issues of the sex stories site.

The negitive voting is a common problem writers have talked about in the past. Some people think to get their stories noticed they have to vote down others. Every time I get over 97% I get a bunch of negative votes at once.

Darth named Daddycums and his stories are a perfect example, his stories colectively are among the best body of work on this site, but if you look at his percentages they have been voted low. I've figured that people just vote down others to inflate their own ego.

Your story is good don't let the ratings or comments stop you from completimg this great story.

 

every time I see this thread has a new post I rush in hoping to see that a new chapter is up, instead it's just more well-deserved praise.

Sorry to anybody else who does this :excited: