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This is NOT based on a true story. The story will be told from my point of view even though I'm only in the story for the first chapter so try not to get confused.

My Wife:

Sarah was the love of my life and since the first moments our eyes met, I knew we were going to get married. Even though she was twenty six and I was twenty seven we still decided to get married. She was perfect in every way. She stood around five foot three and had hazel eyes. Her skin ran between light and tan. Her hair a was a glowing auburn color. And her curves were the most impressive thing about her whole body. Her breast were a solid 34 C Cup. And her ass was tight but not to tight. And every step she took it would sway left and right just teasing you. She was just perfect.

Prologue:*

It was a beautiful day at the Ranch house. It was located around thirty minutes outside of Monterrey, Mexico. My new wife and I had just gotten married and decided to honey moon in Mexico so we rented a house. The odd thing about the house was the rent was relatively cheap and affordable so we dove at the chance to get it. The land lord said it was hard for him to find people to rent it so he lowered the prices. The Ranch house had every thing a pool, a small lake, a garden and everything in between. We were so excited to start our new lives together until the suspicious trucks started passing by.

Chapter One:

We had just woken up from the first day and were starving so we went to the kitchen and made breakfast. It was such a beautiful day we decided to eat outside. As we ate we I noticed the same exact truck pass by us about six times. The fact that it kept passing by us wasn't the most bizarre part it was the fact that the house was on a road with a dead end, we were the only ones on it for miles.*

We just finished breakfast and decided to jump in the pool as we swam a different truck passed by but the weird thing was it fucking stopped. I ignored them thinking they would leave in a few seconds, but they didn't. They stayed for another ten minutes and my wife started to get scared, so I said,"Go inside honey."

As she waited inside, I cautiously walked to the truck. As i approached i noticed no one was inside but the radio was still blaring out bachata music. It was very ominous so I searched cautiously around the truck. *As I kept searching Found two assault rifles in the back, scared and creeped out I keep searching. After I circled the truck a few more times I figured they probably went up into the mountains, that were located at the front gate of the house. As I started heading back to call the police I saw what I think was my wife pointing back at me, but couldn't really tell. So I kept walking until I started hearing footsteps behind me. And right as i turned my head around to see what was going on BLAM. A fat mexican man followed by four other guys hit me with the but of a rifle, I was out cold.

Chapter Two:

My wife terrified still looking out the window, as the gang of men beat my limp unconscious body, starts to scream. A few seconds after they turn back at her and start to run towards the door.

*My wife runs up the stairs horrified and crying. She runs to the bedroom and hide under the bed. Right as she gets under the bed she hears the door latches bust off and the door slam the wall.*

The fat man starts yelling in spanish and the others scatter through out the house. They search down stairs knocking down vases, picture frames and the T.V. Sarah's hands start to shake as she hears them march up the stairs. She begins to panic again but this time holds her scream back with her hand and will power. As she lays there quietly they burst through the door and start searching. They search the restroom and the closets but have yet to check under the bed. As they look they knock the drawers and the desk down. Frustrated they leave the room and go check the rest of the upstairs.*

As they leave my wife quietly peeks out and tries to find her cell phone that was in the night stand. She quickly searches through all the junk and finds it. Right as she starts to pull her head back under the bed, one of the men passes by. She gets startled and bumps her head on the bed frame. The man quickly turns around and lunges towards her.*

He begins to yell in spanish and the other men come running in. Two reach under and grab her arms. As they pull Sarah starts to kick and move trying to break free, but to no avail. They rip her from under the bed and throw her against they wall. As she struggles the fat man pulls out a rag of what seemed to be chloroform. My wife breaks one of wrist free and slaps him. Angry and frustrated he raises his arm and quickly strikes her straight across the cheek. She quickly clutches her burning red cheek and the man rams the rag against her nose. Within a minute she was unconscious and on the ground.

Chapter 3:

Sarah, dazed and confused, wakes up a cold dark basement. Trying figure out what had just happened she tries to stand up. She soon realizes she is tied onto a chair. She gives up trying to break free and just waits a few seconds later a door opens.

In front of her, a large mexican man in a dirty tank top and ripped jeans. He starts speaking in broken english,"You change in restroom.". As he points towards a small room. He walks over unties her and pushes her inside. As she stumbles in he grabs he pulls out some clothes from a bin located on the outside of the restroom. He shoves them towards her and walks away.*

As he walks away Sarah grabs the clothes and yells,"What the fuck, you can't force me to wear this shit!!!" he quickly turns around and marches towards her. She tries to run but he grabs the back of her shirt collar and smack straight across the cheek. Still in pain from the last strike she starts caresses her cheek and says no words as he turns back and walks out the basement.*

She grabs the clothes and begins to put the on. She starts with the lingerie bra. The bra was velvet red with fray attached to the tops of each cup and in the center a small bow. She then grabs the thong and panty hose. She first smoothly pulls the thong on. The thong was also red and had a thin cloth where her slit was. It also had rose design threaded into the hips and around the front. The panty hose were made of a thin material as well and was your average type of panty hose but had straps on each thigh that strapped onto the sides of the thong. She then finished all this off with a pair of heels. They were also red and looked slightly used but not to much.

Right as she finished changing the same man busted through the basement door. As she strutted out of the restroom the man grabbed her ass, with out missing a beat she turned and slapped him. Unfazed by the slap he grabbed and threw her over his shoulder. She started to kick and scream,"Put me down!!!". He unwrapped his hand from her body and slapped her ass one more time. She let out a yelp and started blush from the thought that she was helpless and there was nothing she could do.

They *walked through a hallway and into a large dimly lit room. He put her down and walked her onto a stage. On the stage stood *four other girls lined side by side. All tied bound with ropes and posts. Sarah looks in shock as the man walks her.

He suddenly stops next to a hanging rope. He then violently grabs her wrists and tightly bounds them to the rope. As her hands hang securely above her head the man grabs her left legs *wraps it onto a small wooden post. He then does the same to the right. The man then pulls a rag from his back pocket. He slowly wraps it around Sarah's mouth, she is now completely helpless. Her legs, spread wide apart, exposed her cleanly shaven pussy. Her hand tied tightly above her head exposed her sweet succulent breasts. She felt so uncomfortable but couldn't * * * do anything.

*As she stood there, totally exposed and helpless, the man walked away and the lights turned on. She watched as a group of seven men walked in. The men walked right to the front of the stage and sat down. The group was made up of what looked to be both americans and mexican business men. After a few minutes another man walked onto the stage. He was a rugged well built mexican man. He was carrying a microphone and a small list. He began to speak,"Hello gentlemen. Today we have a fine lineup of young whores eagerly awaiting your purchase. These fine slaves range from $800,000 to $1,000,000.". He then Translated his words back into spanish.

Sarah's heart dropped as the man said slaves, she couldn't believe what was happening. The speaker continued,"We will know begin the auction with, Sarah our first slave.". Her face turned white to the sound of these words she was up first.

The speaker then announced," Sarah is a young caucasian female that appears to be in her mid twenties. She has fair skin and a auburn hair color. Her eyes are a light brown in color.She has fairly large breasts and a slightly used but still tight pussy. Test show Sarah is fully capable of creating offspring". As the man finished his sentence she new they had been inspecting her body so closely and intimately, she felt like a animal.

He then stood there until four men raised their hands. The speaker then continued with,"You four gentlemen may now come and inspect our product."

Sarah's began to squirm but quickly stopped as the big man raised his arm ready to strike her once again. The four men quickly walked up and eagerly started to touch her. She just stood there as one man groped her left breast and another ran his finger in between her pussy lips. She started to cry but tried to hold back to show no fear. One man crept up behind her and squeezed both of her smooth soft ass cheeks. Her face began to blush. The same man that ran his fingers through her clit began to rub her intimately *between her legs she let out a small squeal.*

The speaker then started up again,"You gentlemen may now take your seats. Since our first slave is not a vaginal virgin we will allow those who put down $500,000 to come and try our slave." Just as he finished two men raised their hands. The speaker then stated,"You men may now come place down your payments. Please note your are only allowed 2 minutes."

As the first man took to the stage Sarah's jaw dropped and she began to shake. She didn't want what was coming up to happen but couldn't do one thing about so she tried to stay strong.

As the bidder walked on stage the big mexican man pushed in a small mattress that was about waist high. He then pushed it so that it was facing right in front of Sarah. He unties Sarah's wrists and bends her so that she is faced down onto the mattress. He then ties her hands to a rope that is attached to the head board leaving her helpless once more.

The bidder then walks to where her pussy is exposed. He was a tall athletically built mexican man, looked to be in mid thirties. The speaker then handed him a sharp knife. He carefully but eagerly sliced through her thong and panty hose. Sarah started to quietly sob once more this time unable to hold her tears back her tears from what was about to happen. He unzipped his slacks and pulled out his cock. It was fairly big, at about eight inches in length and about two inches wide. He slowly started rub his cock against her warm sweet, sweet pussy. The speaker then started a nearby timer.

The man grabbed his cock and slowly shoved it through her slit. Sarah's eyes widened and her muscles tensed up around his cock but it didn't stop him as he continued forward. He quickly thrusted forward completely inside her warm body. She let out a scream but the gag held it back. Her pussy slowly began to moisten as he thrusted in and out of her fuck hole. He Started going faster and faster as she grew wetter and wetter. Sarah still crying began moaning behind her gag with ecstasy and a mild pain. Just as the timer went off he violently grabbed onto her hips and thrusted one last time. His cock started pulsating as he began to cum. He slowly pulled out and wiped his cock with a small rag. Sarah's pussy started to drip out cum as she continued crying.

Sarah couldn't believe what just happened to her but had to. As she continued to sob the next man walked up. He was also a mexican but instead of being will built he was tall and fat. He looked to be in his late forties.

*He quickly unzipped his pants and was eager to be inside Sarah's warm innocent body. This mans cock was huge. It had to be at least ten inches long and three inches wide, it was a monster. Sarah unable to look back could never have prepared for what was about to enter her. As his cock quickly stiffened the speaker started the timer. He slowly pushed the head of his monster inside her. Her whole body quickly grew goosebumps as she screamed from the monster that was entering her. The man continued to push forward until he was finally fully inside. Her pussy started growing wetter as he grinded inside her. He then quickly and smoothly pulled back out. Sarah switched her screams with loud moans as he violently thrusted inward. He kept pushing and pushing, more and more as Sarah moaned and tensed up. Each time he thrusted in Sarah body would slightly lift off the mattress following every movement his cock made. Just as the timer went off and he thrusted inward his last time she reached her climax and let out a loud scream followed by a moan. The man started to laugh as he pulled out. Sarah's pussy, dripping wet, was bright red from the monster that was inside her. Unable to move from both the ropes and the lack of energy, she passed out still dripping cum and pussy juices.

 

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I liked it!! Keep going! I'd read more... hehe. Maybe more of a setting tho.. more about where she is, smells etc.. I like to visualize that... and no more fat men! haha

 

Watch the tenses

You keep mixing up past and present; usually in the same sentence.

I found this a tiring read. The "sexy young female" snatched by Slave Traders" has been done many times and I have to say in the main a lot better than this.

My suggestion is for you to go back to the drawing board and start a similar domination story (if that's your bag) but get the basics right: if you tell it in the past stay consistent; choose what view point you use carefully,eye of God works but is dispassionate and can lose impact compared to a first person narrative. You really wasted any impact telling it from your point of view- that was a mistake.

You have asterisks all over the place; presumably there was some incompatibility between whatever you wrote on and the XNXX software but it does look odd.

 

I agree