Hi my name is Valerie and I've been reading some of the stories on this forum. And you know a lot of them were pretty good so I wanted to try it out myself. So if I do little bad don't be afraid to tell me. Now lets get started!!!

Little description of myself:

As you already know my name is Valerie and I recently turned 28. I'm a mix between Brazilian and White. My boobs are a C-Cup, I'll let your imagination fill in the exact measurement, but i'll have you know my fiancé seems to really love them . I go to the gym pretty often so i'm pretty fit but you know not muscular or anything like that. My height is pretty average at like 5' 3" I guess. I have dark brown curly hair and brown eyes. My skin is naturally tanish and I guess that's about it for my body. Now on to the story!!!

Chapter 1: Neglected

As I laid in my bed watching my husband get ready for work I thought back to what our relationship used to be.

Our relationship all started going down hill ever since our third anniversary. Just last week I caught him cheating on me with one of my closest friends , I felt like he didn't want me anymore, and that I was ugly and worthless. I had zero confidence in my self and still I stayed with him.

As he grabs some pieces of paperwork he walks toward the door and as I usually do I stand up and ask for a kiss but like always he just says,"Baby, I already told you I don't have fucking time for this.". I get back down and watch him leave, my heart cold and empty.

Still in bed thinking, I hear my phone ring. It was Michelle and she was wondering if we were still going for that jog we talked about earlier. I say yeah and get dressed. I picked her up and we took off.

Today I was feeling like trying a new trail in the park that I heard about. As we approached the parking lot I notice its covered in trees, something about it screamed horror movie but we just went ahead with it. As we started I tell her about you know the problems I've been having with Ben. She starts giving me advice and her past experiences and stuff. Then I tell her how depressed I've been feeling lately and about the time when I walked in on him and my friend. Michelle stops jogging, grabs me and looks me in the eyes and says,"Look Valerie, apparently Ben doesn't appreciate you so FUCK HIM! I think you should give him a taste of his own medicine so that he'll really understand how lucky he is to be with you.". I slowly start jogging again and say,"Michelle you know I could never do that him, I love him too much.". She says,"Fine have it your way." and we carry on.

Chapter 2: Creep

We slow to a stop at the base of a steep hill. As I finish a sip of water Michelle softly grabs my shoulder and whispers,"Valerie, you see that creep between the two trees.". I say,"Michelle there are like a million trees here, which ones are you talking about.". She points at these two odd looking trees with a ominous stone bench right in-between them. As I look closer I see a creepy man just sitting there staring at us with a dark stare and a grin, as if he wants something from us. Michelle turns back to me and says,"Come on Valerie, this fucking wierdo is scaring me.". We slowly head up the hill, me turning my head periodically to see if he's still watching us until the trees slowly block my view.

Once we reached the end of the trail, which took about twenty minutes since our last break, we head back down the rugged hill. As soon as we start jogging I see a figure move threw some bushes and branches. We both speed up a little and just ignore it. As we reach about half way down the hill my body shivers, I feel as if something or someone is following us. Michelle starts sprinting, scared for her life, as we hear voices whispering. I start calling her name trying to catch up. As she's sprinting Michelle trips over a tree root and tumbles down the trail. Screaming as she rolls uncontrollably to the bottom of the hill. She abruptly stops just a little past the base. As I reach her she grabs her ankle. In a panic she tries to get up but is quickly stopped by the pain and forced back down.

 

very good start, id like to see more

 

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to post more soon. <3

 

Good work!

 

Yo! Michelle's a total bitch!

LOL!

Continue please

 

As long as you have an ending in mind, keep writing. Even if you have to think about it for a while it would be better than hoping that you'll reach a conclusion if you keep adding to the story.

I like where you're going so far.

 

Lmfao I kinda was basing her off one of my best friends but she is kinda bitchy/ pushy like that.

 

DD Thanks for all the replies. Will try to post my next chapters by the end of next week. Love you guys <3

 

Off to a GREAT START I really like how you described your personal self...made my mouth water to remember my only visit to Brasil....let me sum it up for you as eloquently as I can....mmm mmm mmm :excited::excited::excited:

 

Ha, girls in Brasil are something else .

 

YES they certainly are but an Ecuadorian friend of mine for like 35 years tells me that Venezuela is the bomb...dont know but has me curious about it....

 

Yeah will you kno almost all South American girls are pretty, wish I could visit but i don't have the money to!!!

 

New Chapters!!!

It's super late but I finally wrote a new chapters, hope you guys like them ;D. Remember to give me feedback. Love you <3

Chapter 3: It Happened So Fast

I was in a state of panic but realized the first thing I have to do is check Michelle for serious problems. So I quickly get down next to her rubbing and checking her ankle. I smoothly and gently go over her ankle carefully examining it but i can't seem to feel any cuts, bumps, or like broken bones so I figure she must've just pulled a muscle. So I pull Michelle back up and stand their for a little bit helping her catch her balance.

We carefully try to make are way back to the car but are stopped by the slight but very noticeable sound of crunching leafs and twigs . My heart pops out of my chest as I turn around. But right as my eyes lock on to one of the men's faces we are grabbed.

We both let out a scream but are quickly overtaken by the men. They violently twist us forward and away from their faces, wrapping one arm around our bodies and the other on our mouths. I look at Michelle as tears run down my face, I could see she was still in pain from her ankle but she wouldn't stop fighting back. It gives me small chance of hope so I follow in her steps and try to shake him off. As I kick and thrash back the man quickly swings me through the air and directly into the ground. Right as I hit the floor I feel the cold, dark, evil reality about what was gonna happen and that it was helpless to even fight back so I just sit there crying as he rips me from the leafs and ties my hands up. I stand there waiting for the second man to tie Michelle up. Once he finishes they pull us away like dogs, into the dense deep woods and away from the trail...

Chapter 4: Hopeless

Twenty minutes later we are STILL walking. I can barely feel my feet and I have the biggest fucking headache but was I turn and look at Michelle it seems like my problem were nothing compared to hers. I look into her light brown eyes and can see she lost all hope, she's limping, her face is super pale, and she looks like she's gonna pass out right in front of me, I can barely believe she's still walking.

After about another ten minutes of walking we reach a small opening in the dense trees and hills. There's a pretty big mattress right in the middle with a few small bushes to one side and a boulder to the other. As we make our way to the torn mattress I see ripped shirts, shorts, bras, and thongs everywhere.

My heart starts pounding as one of the men grabs Michelle and throws her helpless body onto the mattress. As she lays there her eyes widen and her body starts to shake, he slowly gets down and mounts her wide thick hips, wrapping one leg around the outside of her thigh. He grinds and thrusts with lust as he pulls a razor sharp knife out of his back pocket and slowly moves down her body to her legs. He carefully rips through her shorts, unveiling a tight black thong. He grows a huge smile as he throws the blade to the bushes. Her pale cheeks start blushing as he slowly licks through her panties. As she squirms around he violently rips her thong off with his teeth. He slowly goes back down. He starts teasing her clit, just licking it at first, slowly swirling with his tongue. With every tongue movement her back arches up just a little more. He speeds up a little and slowly moves his hands under her ass giving deep long squeezes. As he speeds up she starts moaning and yelling trying to hold her orgasm in. Her pussy is now soaking as he carefully sucks and eats her clit like a hungry dog. With his now long deep strokes and licks Michelle's back arches more and more. Her breaths become quicker and lighter as her orgasm tries to force it's way through but she holds back. He keeps licking until she lets out a deep moan and her body gives out a deep shiver of lust as her orgasm flows through her body. Her back quickly falls to the mattress as she tries to catch her breath.

He quickly gets up pulling his pants and boxers, unveiling his cock. Michelle gives a blank stare into his eyes as he slowly strokes back and forth warm up, he's now in control of her. He then gets back down lifting her legs up and over each of his broad shoulders. Michelle still dripping doesn't move a muscle as he slowly rubs his head against her pussy, teasing it for what's to come. As he starts thrusting in, she gives out a deep moan. He starts thrusting slightly faster still teasing her tight wet pussy. Michelle's starts squeezing bed as he pumps in and out of her pussy. He starts to speed up without missing a beat. With each thrust he rolls his hips trying to get deeper and deeper. Michelle's eyes slowly roll back in her head as he beats her pussy up with his thick cock. She starts letting out deep moans and little gasps as he goes in faster and faster. Wanting to get more pleasure he lets go of her thighs and grabs her thick wide hips pulling towards him as he powerfully thrusts forward. She starts breathing quickly again this time between each breath letting out a small grunt from the pounding she was getting. The man starts yelling as he goes deeper and deeper, he's about to cum. After his last powerful thrust Michelle squeezes the bed tighter. Her body starts to shiver and she lets out a loud moan as her pussy squeezes tightly on his thick shaft. As she lays there tired from her orgasm he gives one last thrust. This one exploding cum deep into her pussy. As he pulls out Michelle faints warm cum dripping from her deep tight hole.

 

wooow thats hot stuff

 

Thanks!!! I worked pretty hard on this part. Lol

 

So hot! You write hot sex really well!

 

Thanks dude!!!

 

nice and hot