I think that I finally figured out how to post it. I guess we will see in a few days huh.

I will wait to see what your comments are before telling anymore of my life.

I need to tell this to someone other than my husband.I insisted that he read my diarys before I accepted his proposal.
nikki

 

right on nikki
good luck with your story. you'll have maybe a week-long wait til it actually gets seen by other readers.

Maybe you can look it over a bit... Did you get an extra space between your paragraphs? i think that makes it easier to read. Proof read while each day passes... you can click on the edit button on your story-page to edit some more. if you do this, make SURE to click SAVE THIS STORY at the bottom of the page each time you make any changes.

i just swallowed my sandwich whole... gotta drive back to work, lunch hour is nearly over!

Good luck!
-blade-

 

thank you blade,

Nikki

 

Blade,

I must be honest with you and everyone else who may read the babble that I have written. I did it to satisfy some urge within me. I dont fancy myself a writer at all, just a woman with a story she needs to tell.

I hope you all accept it within these terms and not hammer me too badly for my editing blunders.

Thanks, Nikki

 

Nikki, I don't think you will get hammered so much by the writters, just the armchair writters if you know what I meen.
I'm looking forward to reading your story :wink:
Doc.

 

i just read your story. you should feel very proud of it! I kinda expected it wasn't going to be too good from what you were saying... but you seem to have a knack for telling sexy stories. looking forward to your next submission. I liked the way you explained the way you grew up and all. it helped the story. you should try to add some more of this kind of detail in the next!
-blade-

 

I read it, Nikki, and it's great! Never be ashamed of writing something that you just needed to get off your chest. It's wonderfully cathartic.

I'm just jealous that YOUR first time was way hotter than MY first time! :wink:

 

Thank you all so much for your support and guidance.

Nikki

PS, my husband now thinks that I am totally insane. He has thought me only crazy up to now but he just cant understand why I am posting my diary here.

 

just read it. It was very open and honest of you to share your experiences with everybody at xnxx and it takes guts to be that open. Oh and by the way, you did a very good job of making it something that readers want to read even though you wrote it for yourself

 

Maybe, but I'll bet you, deep down, that he thinks it's HOT! Just tell him that there are now literally thousands of men reading that story and reaching orgasm. But only HE gets to enjoy the real deal. :wink:

 

good for YOU!!!! now go do something worth my time, like.....go outside

 

you're an asshole dude

 

So Sorry..DOOMS
I didnt post it for you haters...I posted it for me.

Nikki