Hey I live in a new york city apartment and I'm 18 years old. I just moved in on my own its really cool, I've been going clubbing getting alot of girls you
know. I actually have this embarassing story to tell... I was at the club and I was really drunk. And I made out with this girl or so i thought, my boys
liked her they telling me to go after her. So i did and when i got closer i felt something poke me she smiled and immediately I knew it was a guy. I acted
like nothing happened, and never told anyone. I was wierded out so I left. But that day left me so curious about what it might have been like.

I kept about my normal life, still hooking up with girls and going clubbing. Then one day my mother called me and said that some family friends where going to be coming to new york and needed a place to stay. Since she was not going to be around for the weekend she decided to ask me. The only catch was it was a gay couple, Jerry and Roberto. I almost too quickly said yes, I think my mom was kind of surprised. I knew this was my chance, or maybe I was just being
stupid.

I was awoken the next day by the doorbell. Half asleep I walked to the door, I was shocked when I saw an extremely attractive hispanic man at my door. "Hi, Im Roberto" he said in a spanish accent. He was probly 511 with an amazing body. Behind him was another extremely attractive man. OMG they are hottt. I'm not usuually attracted to guys but they were so hot, and masculine, and muscular, and omg... lol i need to stop.

So we hung out for a while and got a couple of drinks. I showed them where they were sleeping, as they were only staying one night I would let them sleep in my bed. I have a king size bed. I was wondering if they were attracted to me, but my hope began to fade when they had not made a move. It was almost 1130 and we were all ready to pass out. Then I saw jerry passed out on the couch and i said to Roberto"You better wake him up before he passes out for good and go to bed." He must have been real drunk, because he laughed so loud. After a couple shots his accent worsened
"Hey you, what do you like to do for fun, you have a girlfriend, maybe a boyfriend" he said and winked at me
Then he spread his legs, he had short shorts on, and i guess boxers because I saw it all. OMG finally i think this is what i have been waiting for. His penis was amazing not too big, maybe 6.5 inches but man was it nice. I could imagine swallowing his cum, and making him fuck me over and over.
"Lets go to your room, shall we" he said
I didn't say anything else and proceeded to stumble into my room. He laid on my bed, and i unbuckled him. He must have been drunk because he wasnt hard. I put his soft penis in my mouth and began to suck it. I must have done well because he was immediately hard. he grabbed my head and began to moan. and at that moment a bang came at my door.
"You guys werent going to invite me" It was jerry
He came over to me, and i was scared he was mad. But he looked at me and said "bad boy now im gonna have to punish you. get on your knees.
He put me on my knees and put his balls in my mouth. i licked them and started stroking myself. Soon roberto took over that and but my dick in his mouth, it must have only taken me five minutes to bust the biggest load in robertos mouth, which he swallowed with no hesitation. Then all of a sudden i felt the most amazing sexual feeling ever, at first i didnt know what it was but i soon realized it was roberto deep inside of me. I had never been penatrated before but it seemed to go in so easily, and fit soooo nicely. i continued to suck jerrys dick. he came in my mouth, i swallowed it, it tasted sooo good. i continued to suck it untill he was completely soft, i licked him everywhere from the crack of his ass to the tip of his dick to make sure ever drop of cum was gone. THen it finally ended when Roberto yelled out.
"ay papi papi papi" and he exploded in me soo hard that i almost fainted, i could feel the passion escaping from his rock hard cock. I dont think ill ever touch a girl again hehe

 

Not trying to critique too much but when it comes to dialogues, use paragraphs, much better for reading.

 

Nice story!

 

Very good , more please !