Wrote this at work today - just had to knock it out so to speak Sorry for crap spelling or punctuation but i've not spent long on it. Feedback welcome x


I was wearing my sharpest work suit - it had been a crappy meeting and I was it a terrible mood after it - thats no excuse for what I did - more of a partial explanation for acting so out of character for me. The tube was packed, but I noticed her the second the doors slid open and spilled some of its packed contents on to the platform. She was tall for a woman, but still not as tall as me (i’m 6’5 and well built) - she was wearing a pretty floral summer dress, sharp sun glasses, and had her mobile phone glued to her ear - the signal booster loops in the tube working well now apparantly. Her figure was quite simply stunning - sexy long legs, gorgeous round arse, a beautiful amazing set of boobs - all framed nicely by the tight figure hugging dress, that was just short of knee length. She looked stunning - her blonde hair catching the imitation lighting - I knew i wanted her the second i saw her and was so happy when fate intervened and led her to stand close to me facing away on the packed train

I could smell her scent - I recognised it as expensive perfume but couldn’t place the name. She was talking to a man - clearly her husband, and was telling him about how good the Comicon had been – “fuck - nerds don’t look like this”, i thought, edging closer under the pretence of making room for someone behind me. I managed to get so close that I bumped into her as the train lurched away, just enough to make her turn around - I smiled an apology to her and she grinned back at me -looking up as she noticed my height and build for the first time. Outwardly I was calm, deep down i wanted her, something animalistic stirred in me then, something that subdued my natural calm and contained being, and replaced that person with someone who just wanted to grab and fuck.

The journey had been uneventful, "blondies" phone call with hubby had ended as the service was lost, I did notice her look round a couple of times - and each look tended to be from my shoulders upwards. I could see her panty line through the thin material of the dress, god I wanted this woman, wanted to wrap my arms around her, get her naked and fuck her. Just how to break the ice?

The solution came when the train was plunged into darkness and screached to a shuddering slow grinding stop. I wrapped a long arm around her waist the other gripping the support strap suspended from the ceiling - perhaps I'd pulled her a little too tightly, or perhaps she'd felt the tell tale bulge of my semi aroused member in my trousers, but her yelp of surprise was so sexy - sounded a little posh. Anyway I stopped us both from joining the tangled heap of people on the floor who hadn’t been quite as strong or as quick with their reactions. Holding on a little too long but loving the feeling of her body moulded into mine. The lights remained off, we were in total darkness, and I had my prize wrapped in my arm, could feel the warmth of her skin through the thin material of our clothes. There was some screaming in the carriage, as people tried to stand in the packed environment, dark, dank, smelling a little of fear. Perhaps I should have put her down then, and behaved like a gent, but that’s not how i saw this playing out.

She said "thank you" in her cultured tones, but i didn’t let her go - wanting her to feel protected and at the same time, wanting her to feel my thick semi aroused member nudging her arse crack.

She gave her hips a little wriggle - and it was clear she thought the danger had passed, and wanted to be released from my grasp, i slowly removed my arm, my hand brushing deliberately against her crotch as I reluctantly let her go. Once released, and in the total darkness, she turned around, slid her hands around my neck, pulling my head down towards hers, and kissed me whispering "thank you", as our lips parted. Well that kiss frankly fucked me off, it made my member try to poke through my suit trousers and get at her - and she damn well knew it, the way she left a hand on the back of my neck lightly stroking the hairs at the nape of my neck, the way her hands slid down to my muscular shoulders as she finally let me go.
As we were still in darkness, I thought "fuck it " and pulled her close again, her hands tried to press me away, but my arms wrapped tight around her buttocks, pulling her firmly against me. “She'd fucking well feel my bulge alright now” I thought as I pulled her hips forward to grind on my tented trousers. My mouth was on hers stifling any attempt at a cry of warning or surprise. I slid my tongue into her mouth, and she bit me - not hard - but a nip, "right" i thought, my hand briefly letting her dress clad buttock go briefly to spank her hard for her bad behaviour.

She gasped - or was it more of a moan? Thinking back on it now - I do genuinely believe it was a moan, and that it clearly was her fault what followed. Just as I was about to slap that firm muscular buttock again the lights came back on, and the train lurched off once more. I was nervous - terrified that she would give me away for the advantage that I'd taken - but she smiled at me again and licked her lips. Now if that wasn’t an invite, I don't know what was - I smiled as she brushed against me once more as the train lurched off. The rest of the journey was uneventful - well until it happened.
As we pulled into the station at my stop, i leaned close to Blondie, wrapped my arm around her shoulders and pulled her with me through the doors just as they were shutting, "what the fuck" she said looking at me inquisitively - "this isnt my stop" - I smiled at her, told her to come with me as we had unfinished business (god where did that fucking expression come from) and led her by the hand towards the alcove that I walk by when I use this station - its right at the end of the platform, and slightly darkened, with no security camera pointing at it. The fact that blondie allowed me to lead her by the hand was perhaps a positive sign. "what do you mean - Unfinished business" she demanded. "ma’am - I'm an undercover subway policeman and I have reason to believe you are planning a crime against the Authorities - stand against the wall, spread your legs - i need to frisk you”. Amazingly she did so - "god was it true what they say about blondes ?" I thought, as my hands patted her body, her boobs felt amazing, strong and firm and free from a bra, but god the body I touched as I run my hands over her was so tight, so fit. Standing close behind her I said "what’s this?", my hand cupping her pussy mound through her dress and panties - the heat of arousal was evident and thinking back this spurred me on

She moaned as I pressed my hand firmly against her mound, my thumb rubbing the area where her clit would be. "hmmmmm ma’am - this needs closer investigation" - and with that I lifted up her dress in one movement, resting it on her back, and exposing her rounded arse - god it looked so fucking good - the way her back was arched slightly, her legs spread. She didnt complain as I got close again, this time sliding my fingers inside the waistband of her panties and tugging them down. "you like what you see you?" she said in that cultured voice of hers with the accent I couldn’t place.
without replying I used my spare hand to unzip my flies and free my aching swollen thick cock. The tip was already dripping with precum and so I just rubbed it up and down her gorgeous arse crack, my other hand pulling her pussy close to me, pressuring and rubbing her clit all the time."does this answer your question?” - i asked - so out of character, but rubbing the engorged wet tip against her exposed arsehole.

Gasping as she felt my sticky precum being rubbed around her tightest of holes, my fingers caressing, pressing and teasing her clit. God her cunt was dripping with anticipation - my fingers were soon coated in her juices which i used to lube her clit area and then rub on my cock. "what sort of cop would do this to me" she managed to gasp, as my fingers and cock worked away at her. "one thats going to fuck you and leave you full of spunk of course" I bit back at her.
"please no, please dont, my husband ......" she was saying - well she was saying that - but her cunt juices and the huskiness in her voice were saying something entirely different to me.

As I stood behind her, I noticed that the dress was a haulter neck one, and i reached up and undid the carefully tied bow, the front of her dress dropped forwards, revealing the most amazing set of boobs, as expected her nipples were standing firmly to attention, yearning to be sucked and played with
Knowing i was so close to fucking this strange hot blonde, my cock pulsed dropping a huge dollop of precum all over her anus, my fingers rubbed it in, revelling in how tight and firm she felt, she moaned again, and thrust her arse up towards my fingers, expectantly
grasping her hips i pull her back towards my waiting member, dripping with anticipation and lust, my cock slid between her open legs, parting those ready flushed pussy lips, i gasped as i felt just how juicy and wet with anticipation she was

Blondie looked round - smiled at me - and said "my name is Penelope - strange man - I want your cock right now"

hmmmmm with that she grasped my shaft, feeding it against her entrance, my initial small thrust being steered to rub her swollen tender clit, coating it in more precum. Grasping her buttocks so firmly my hand prints were clearly visible I parted her cheeks and slide the thick tip of my uncut cock inside her, feeling her cunt yield to my manhood , but not totally
The fear of being caught as we were like this was so hot - but it was that feeling as my cock first stretched her sopping cunt wide open that will remain with me - pressing her from behind - her arse backing into me, her gasp of pleasure as I sunk my cock deep inside slowly, inch by inch stretching her open. My hands grasped her buttocks spreading her tight little anus open, my thumbs reaching to tease and press on the soft opening in time with my thrusts that were already starting to build. I could see her luscious big tits jiggling with each thrust - her nipples aching - the way her hand left the wall to caress each nipple in turn - god yes

It wasnt going to be a long fuck I realised all too quickly - but i didnt want that - I wanted to use this sexy woman, fuck her, fill her and use her completely. she was moaning and groaning as we fucked - a real vocal fuck - dirty and yet posh at the same time. The angle wasn’t the best, but she knew how to work the muscles of her pussy. i soon realised she was milking me, cunt muscles stroking away as we fucked.

Past the point of caring I let go of her hips grabbed a fistful of that blonde hair, pressed a finger deep in her arse and started using her. the wet slapping sound of a well filled pussy was soon in the air, echoing nicely in the tube tunnel. My shaven balls were squishing up against her, and her milking motion soon paid off, as I grunted a "fuck yeah" and let fly, my load exploding inside her womb, wave after wave of warm cum coating deep inside her. She gasped and jerked against me as her own orgasm ripped across her body, her legs spasming as she felt my jism spurt deep inside her.
Leaning forward as my cum finally stopped flowing I pulled her hair so that her shoulder came up to my mouth, I whispered in her ear " this is for your hubby to see what a slut you've been", and sank my teeth into her neck, leaving a bright red tooth mark

As she turned around looking at me - she was surprised to see me dialling a number on my phone - "hello John - yes all done - would you like a word with her?" "you would - ok" I still recall the shock on her face as I hand her the phone, saying "its your husband - he wants to make sure you enjoyed your delayed birthday present"

 

Blimey no comments- not even - this is shit ?

 

good story
i liked it

 

thank you rebel x

 

Nice Story!

Hi BB, I guess that I will be the first guy to comment on your story.

I found this story to be an interesting read. It was very cleaver how the main character used the art of seduction to attract the woman that he came in contact with on the train. It was exciting to see where this would led to and the twist at the end, I wouldn't had expected that. Yes it was a short story, but it was a fun read. I looked past the spelling and punctuation, it didn't affect how I felt about the story.

 

thanks Silent1 - appreciate that

 

Cool )

 

Well, I know what I want for my birthday...

Great story!

 

a shameless bump

 

Not so shameless - I didn't realize this was here. You really ought to write more often, you naughty boy.

 

He could have just gotten her a cake, right? I thought that this was a very good story indeed.

 

love the story more would be good a part 2 maby?

 

thanks for the comments guys - I'd forgotten i'd written this until i bumped my old threads

 

good story BB well written (not that I'm a critic nor a proof reader)

and it had a good twist, nice work mate...

 

Thank you Nad - and not a single mention of the Ashes in the story !:excited:

 

thanks for not mentioning it.... you 'smart ass'..... Lmao!!

just read your cottage handyman story..... perks and all (even Madam Cija approved... lol) you may of got bored with it, but there is much more that could 'continued' with it.... haha again, nice work mate.

 

oh now stop mate - or i'll think you're trying to get into my panties

 

Hmmm wish I was that lucky girl x

 

EMPRESS RATED: VERY GOOD!++++

Loved the ending!

 

i could never comment on who provides the inspiration behind stories - besides which we all know you're a redhead