Love the description, words used etc scene and tone seemed to be set perfectly. Think it's shown you shouldn't leave it so long before the next story but as the user above said, no rush, better a story taking a while turning out well than rushing and churning out stories for the sake of it.

Great job, turned me on, keep up the good work! X

 

Thanks so much. I wish I had more time. I have a 3 month old and two other kids. I think I could crank out quality quickly but my hands are usually full of diapers instead of pens. Haha.

 

Haha been there done that huni, know exactly what you mean. Just keep faith and keep going, sure you're bringing pleasure to the multitudes on here, keep it up!

 

I think thid is a true story....happen with sexywriter..

 

Fantastic story! Soo descriptive would loved to have been that bloke at the bar.

 

LOL crank one out is a term that came to my mind too but not in the same context. LOL

 

Thanks everyone who enjoyed this story. I just finished up my 4th. If you would like to check it out it is called Conducted.

 

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Very nice. I love your style of writing and as someone earlier said, I see as sequel. maybe Shane was the man from "The Conductor".

 

I hope to write a sequel. glad you liked it

 

Just read it - very nice! had me hard and wishing I was a fly on the windshield watching you masturbate and cum in the car!!

 

Quickly becoming a fan of your work. I'd love to see a sequel to this story.

 

I imagine myself in the front while your Butt lift up as you are climaxing and I am holding the front with firm pressure now the big "o" comes I will hold it still longer and will go down to your Butt hole insert a finger. Ooooh hhhhmm god you scream as a stronger...... it takes a good 10 minute before your breath returns to steady normal.... please do it again you say... please again you begg.... pm me first...

 

Excellent story, it got me turned on. There was just one thing that didn't fit. You were in a tiny little town that had a parking garage. I'm from Small Town USA and surrounded by other small towns. There are no parking garages in small towns. We have parking lots only, because every small town has plenty of space and no need for parking structures. I still loved your story.

 

nice story. love it

 

your amazing

 

We live in what I consider to be a small town but it has grown as I have grown up so I still see it as a small town and thank you for pointing that out. We have a new one in the part called "old town". I still see where I live as a small town but ugh it's true it is not so small anymore. But I am glad you enjoyed it.

 

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