1. CAW SOP

    CAW SOP Sex Machine

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    Just one bite. What harm could it do?

    The stories are in for our thirtieth forum writer's challenge, eight in all, although one is what you might call a special entry (see that tale for the details). The theme this time was "Forbidden Fruit," a pregnant but ambiguous phrase that could mean almost anything but which usually puts each of us in mind of one thing in particular.

    And just what was that one thing? Read the stories and find out.

    Voting can start anytime and wraps up June 15. PM this account with your first, second, and third place picks. See a problem with a story? Let me know and I'll do my best to fix it. Thanks to everyone who took the time to write and read.

    Without further ado:

    1. "The Waitress"



    2. "Forbidden"




    3. "The Adventures of Lynny the Leopard"



    4. "Four Seasons of the Cinnamon Roll"



    5. "Lolita Sings the Blues"



    6. "Lord, Have Mercy"



    7. "Desert Gardens"



    8. "Judging Blue Eyes"
     
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    1. Dimple Gupta
      Hello , I am Delhi area service provider for escorts in Delhi so we need a content writer for my website. Your writing is so good so i wants to hire you for my website.
       
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  2. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Kuns og Kram Smukke Love once found never lost

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    Good job Black this looks awesome
     
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  3. wantsomefun

    wantsomefun Storyteller and Lover In XNXX Heaven

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    Illustrating the stories was a clever idea. This entire CAW was beautifully done, @BlackRonin, like everything you post.

    Reading,....
     
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  4. Shaggy1369

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    I honest can't read u guys shit... u worked so long and hard to make these stories boring as fuck... why put so much into them... I not here to read a book or even a chapter of a book... this is a story site... why can't u understand a story is u put a storyline of a few characters.. let us know a little about the characters, get to the theme not bullshit around with u so called bullshit run around plots... then finish with a ending...
    U guys suppose to be smart but u writings to much or trying to put to much in it to make a good story.. we not here to read a book... we don't want to read a book...
     
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  5. fartsandgiggles

    fartsandgiggles Porn Surfer

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    blah blah blah Im a nigger blah blah blaf i cant write blahf blah blah nigga nigga nigga blah
     
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      You're a troll because you're a very obvious sock of someone with an axe to grind and you think you can stir shit up.
       
      AyaLaRoux, Jun 3, 2017
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    3. Shaggy1369
      Im a honest real reader here... not a sock... just because i call your stories for what they r TRASH...that doesnt make me a sock...
       
      Shaggy1369, Jun 3, 2017
    4. AyaLaRoux
      You're right, calling stories TRASH doesn't make you a sock. Faking typos in order to seem uneducated, pursuing your old agenda which you've pursued under other accounts makes you a sock. And trying to stir trouble for the sake of stirring trouble makes you a troll. So in essence, you're a troll in a sock. A socktroll.
       
      AyaLaRoux, Jun 3, 2017
    5. Shaggy1369
      I tried to read CAW 30 just like 29, 28 and etc... i honestly cant make it past the first 10 paragraphs because u guys details runs me around instead of getting to a interesting storyline...
       
      Shaggy1369, Jun 3, 2017
    6. Shaggy1369
      I mean u guys start a story great.. then in the middle of the storyline u flip to something else, then when i get into that u flip again, then back... im not here for that shit... sorry way to much plots for a stories... not here to read a boring book
       
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  6. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Kuns og Kram Smukke Love once found never lost

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    I'm not sure why you even bother being here and commenting if you aren't interested, shouldn't you rather be play Tekken 27?
     
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    1. Shaggy1369
      Why u even here... no one reads your stories to the end...only writers or a couple friends vote.. honestly speaking who the odd man out here...
       
      Shaggy1369, Jun 3, 2017
    2. HisBabyGirl
      As he previously told us, he hates ahorsewithnoname and because horse hasn't been banned, shaggy is going to make the lives of the writers a living hell. He also attempted to write once before and was not successful. Speaking as a reader, I look forward to these CAW's. They really bring out the best.
       
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      Saggy babe, I'm here because I want to be, much like you are, although our reasons motives and agenda's may differ. Do I care if you read my stories till the end? No. Does it matter to me whether you can have a good (15 seconds) wank to them? No . With the amount of time you have invested in this hate campaign I'm surprised you didn't just write us a trilogy to help enlighten us together errors of our ways.
       
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    4. HisBabyGirl
      Shaggy, you're here to troll - no other reason. I tried to help you. I tried to figure out where all this hate is coming from, but no one can help you. Only ILMJ and only if she bans horse. I feel very sorry for you, shaggy.
       
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    5. Shaggy1369
      The problem is not just me dont read the stiries the the end. It 95% of the reader... so honestly speaking that makes u bad writer because u dont care about your readers...
       
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  7. Shaggy1369

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    Why do u guys even bother writing boring stories..
    No one makes it to end... u guys spend way to much time on bullshit details like its a high school essay...
    Make it simple and u might just get some readers or votes...
    Why i bother is u guys filling up the wall with bullshit trash..yes the stories r trash because like i said many times u run us around with to much bullshit details we not here to read...
     
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  8. Shaggy1369

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    I mean it take u guys to write a story a whole month... thats what most writers spend on a entire book... this is a sex stories site... the stories should take a day or a week at the most to write and edit...we r not here to read this bullshit... they are way to long with so much details we not here to read... 100% trash... why cant u guy understand most readers that come here will not follow through on a high school essay final exam...
     
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    2. wantsomefun
      This would be a good one.

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      wantsomefun, Jun 4, 2017
    3. LOAnnie2
      Me and my girl, she was hot and naked and had big tits, we fucked, like a lot. I came everywhere, it was so fucking hot.



      Story line of two characters, the girl is hot, they had sex, and it was short. There, your perfect story!
       
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    4. Shaggy1369
      Honestly speaking that short story is better than any 2 paragraphs in all the CAW stories... if they wrote that good they could get plenty votes... actually i think it great... why not put that much attention in your stories... u trying to make a joke but all u done was prove my point that compared to this short story the CAW stories r trash...
       
      Shaggy1369, Jun 5, 2017
    5. wantsomefun
      [​IMG]
       
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    6. LOAnnie2
      Uh, apparently you don't get how the minds of most females work. If you want quick and dirty porn that you can just jack off to, click porn videos up top. I'm guessing people looking for sex stories are actually looking for sex, and stories...
       
      LOAnnie2, Jun 6, 2017
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  9. ahorsewithnoname

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    Read all of the stories, commented on all of them too. Some good reads. Well, at least for those of us who have a greater attention span than that of a gnat. :)
     
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  10. fartsandgiggles

    fartsandgiggles Porn Surfer

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    bump
     
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  11. BiStander

    BiStander Tale teller

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    Isn't this thread normally sticky once the reading phase starts? I can't remember.
     
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  12. wantsomefun

    wantsomefun Storyteller and Lover In XNXX Heaven

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    Yes. Not sure why it isn't. Oh well.
     
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      It hasn't been stickied because someone doesn't want to waste everyones time reading Shaggy's shit.
       
      1 Toy Maker, Jun 10, 2017
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  13. Shaggy1369

    Shaggy1369 Sex Lover

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    Yeah right its not sticky because this post sucks... no one but writers click on this trash post... nothing to do with me...
     
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  14. AyaLaRoux

    AyaLaRoux Porn Star

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    Hey, I think I just encountered another one of your socks. It was like a family reunion, made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Like coming home.
     
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  15. BiStander

    BiStander Tale teller

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    A strange statement to make considering you obviously clicked on it.
    There, are you happy, we paid attention to you for a few seconds.
     
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  16. CAW SOP

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    Sorry folks, I have tried to get this stickied, but it seems no dice so far. Well, into all of our lives some rain must fall.

    In any case, some votes are already in, but everybody has until the end of the night on June 15th to cast their ballot. Thanks to everyone who has voted, and to everyone who will.
     
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  17. 1 Toy Maker

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    Please can I have the details for voting. I have read all but one of the stories which I will finish later today.
     
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  18. BiStander

    BiStander Tale teller

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    @CAW SOP wrote: "Voting can start anytime and wraps up June 15. PM this account with your first, second, and third place picks. See a problem with a story? Let me know and I'll do my best to fix it. Thanks to everyone who took the time to write and read."
     
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      Idiot awards accepted here..
      Thanks @BiStander
       
      1 Toy Maker, Jun 12, 2017
    2. BiStander
      It happens to the best of us
       
      BiStander, Jun 13, 2017
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  19. Deerhuner13

    Deerhuner13 Porn Surfer

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    Me personally I like a good story. I carry a certain respect for my fellow writers.

    Keep On Writing
     
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  20. Deerhuner13

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    How do I join the CAW story contest?
     
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