1. Shaggy1369

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    Honestly those r my favorite stories... I bet most of them have bad comments from u on them... again blame the reader.. u misread my comments dude... I said I like the bad Grammer misspelled words..again it makes the stories more real or natural for me...
     
  2. Shaggy1369

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    Nice story... lol u must dug her up... my mom died a few years ago... honestly this one should be the winner of the contest...the other 9 was bullshit if u ask me since again we on a x-rated site lol...
    Here my only vote guys... yes it's a first place vote...
     
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      Hey shaggy. I don't know who u are... But I agree with you.. these stories are so boaring... You would get limp reading them.
       
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  3. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Kuns og Kram Smukke Love once found never lost

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    But I haven't finished reading all your stories yet!
     
  4. pars001

    pars001 #1. Knight Writer

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    Was that guy for real? Gee what a whiner!
     
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  5. Shaggy1369

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    Lol honestly r u sure u do... 75% of all stories on this site has negative comments... I just being truthful... u so elite writers has been destroying the site since day1... every time someone writes something u guys run them away...
     
  6. wantsomefun

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    I guess it's a matter of taste. I prefer stories I don't have to decipher to read. That means no textspeak, some attention to the basic rules of written English, a semblance of a plot, and some character development. If that makes me an elitist, so be it.

    Anyone can write a hundred-word wankfest. People who love the craft of writing try to do more.
     
  7. Shaggy1369

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    Really what I see is this is a X-rated site and u elite writers only can turn me away with the most boring stories...
     
  8. wantsomefun

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    I have an idea. Why don't you read what you like, and I'll read (and write) what I like? No one said you have to read and enjoy everything, you know. I sure as hell don't like them all, so I'm not sure why you would expect to. There's room for many kinds of stories here.

    As far as some stories not being X-rated is concerned, maybe you're reading the wrong stuff. There's a lot of sex in most of the CAW entries. Maybe not as much "I came on her face" as you may like, but most of these stories wouldn't get past the censors on other sites.
     
  9. Shaggy1369

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    I just saying I can't get past the first 10 paragraphs on a CAW story to enjoy it... to much run around bullshit.. I rather read a bible... but like I said 75% of all stories have negative comments from the elite writers
     
  10. wantsomefun

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    If you're talking about comments on CAW stories, most writers welcome constructive criticism. None of the comments were as negative as yours, since your comments are all basically bashing the work of the "elite" writers.

    Why don't you write a story of the kind you enjoy? Maybe your efforts will encourage others.
     
  11. Shaggy1369

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    A great writer knows his readers... again this is a x-rated site... try getting your readers reading your stories....
     
  12. Shaggy1369

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    No u misread my comment...
    I said 75% of all stories on this site has negative comments... most is from the so call elite writer... the word All means not just CAW stories....
     
  13. wantsomefun

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    Sorry. I thought you were mainly dissing the CAW entries.

    So most of the 75% negative comments come from the so-called elite writers? How did you come to that conclusion?
     
  14. Redbeard1031

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    I want to thank all the writers again for their submissions to this CAW. I must have been on the right track as I hit the trifecta with my votes for this CAW.
     
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  15. ahorsewithnoname

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    Well look at that. You sent the exact same statement to me via private message, timestamped 3 minutes earlier than you posted it on this thread. That means you posted information contained in a private message, publicly. That's a gross violation of the written rules of this site, and as such, I'm obliged to report you to the site administrator. Which I'm doing. Right now.
     
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  16. pars001

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    All I can say is that guy gives real readers a bad name holy crap WHINE, WHINE, WHINE! No sex WAH! Its a porn site wah! geez! Grow a set already!
     
  17. Shaggy1369

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    Lol your stories r the most boring on the site... maybe u guys know how to use words... but they so boring that most readers here can't get past the first 5 paragraphs... I'm not whining... I'm just saying your stories r boring... u guys pick on people for not using the right way of writing.. but there stories r well above yours when it comes to excitement... talk about taking constructive criticism u guys the worst...
     
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  19. Shaggy1369

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    The truth hurts...
    I'm not the only one people...

    Well of course you're right the stories are as boring as can be. This is a sex story site and so they should be sex stories but none of the participants can write a decent sex story and so they write stories with sort of sex scenes in them.

    The view numbers are pathetic and have been for years, to all intents and purposes it is irrelevant to the vast majority of readers as is the forum itself.

    That was in my mailbox... say whatever u like... but the truth is better use of words or whatever u call is boring....
     
  20. ahorsewithnoname

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    It's time you get called out. You're most likely a sock. Big deal. You hide behind the cloak of anonymity so that you can have your 15 minutes of glory. Big deal. On a site like this, one can be a troll, a nigger, a homicidal maniac and no one else really gives a shit because it's all a facade. People who participate in the CAW aren't writing for you, but the hilarious thing is that you simply don't get that. You have a lower IQ than normal, and that's not a bad thing, it just is what it is. I'm not going to dumb down a story simply because you can't understand it. The internet is filled with great troves of free porn, why you opted to park your dumb ass here...well, it's obvious that you have an axe to grind. That's fine. There are plenty of dumb fucks here who have nothing better to do that just cause trouble...why? Myriad of reasons, I suppose. Typically, though, it's because your "real world life" sucks, and everyone knows that misery loves company. So that's your gig. You don't even believe what you say, but it is what gets you the most play, and that's just pathetic. You act like you speak for the majority of the readers, but, how is that possible? Do you have hidden conversations with said readers? No. Do you have inside information that the rest of us don't have? No. Are their voices in your head that tell you things? Probably.

    I don't write for you. I write for myself, and for the other authors. That's it. And a few readers who take the time to comment. Other than that, why would I care? Honestly, you're a nobody, so what do I care what you think of my writing? I have no respect for you, ergo, your opinion doesn't even register. You're what we call a troll, someone who is disgruntled and can't fit into normal society, so he burrows into the internet somewhere and spreads his life's misery among others. That's what you have to offer. All you want to do is jack off your little dick and feel good. Well, I'm happy for you, but you're in the wrong place for that. There are how many thousands of threads in this section of the forum, to say nothing of the 4-5 other forums here, to say nothing of the Sex Stories portion of the site, where there are 50,000+ stories. And here you sit. So it becomes apparent that you aren't here to truly just complain about stories, you're here because you got slighted by someone, that you wish you were a writer, but someone pissed in your Corn Flakes. So why not just admit it? Why not be a man for once and stop hiding?

    We're not writing for you. None of us. Never have. Never will.
     
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