Thank you for all of your hard work. I'm sure that even rushed, this story will be gold.

 

Ch 16

The next chapter is up!

 

i can't believe i'm saying this...

All i want for christmass is chapter 17...

but the whole story would be the best gift

and a cat is fine too

 

The next chapter is up!
Here is Julia:


Also, concerning the reason for me quitting writing, I will soon be heading to a country where I will no longer be able to access this site, do to the laws there. So, as soon as I post the last chapter, I will be saying, adieu.

It has been fun, and good, but I have little choice, if I am going to live and do my job there.

 

Your a amazing writer, dont let anyone stop you from doing what you love. and dont make shanna a lesbian...shanna/shannon are my favorite.

 

Moving to a country with blocks on certain sites?
Did you take a job to teach english as a second language in China?

I hope wherever you find yourself, even though you can't get here, you never stop writing.

 

Let's just say I work for the Gov't, and have to go somewhere that doesn't like my the U.S. very much...

 

lol... that narrows it down to about half the world...

but i can't see how that could stop you from writting and saving your work for when you get back, because we all know everyone will want to read it

 

Its called a proxy

 

Lol... I know about proxies. I also know that if I get caught with pornography of ANY kind I will lose my job. As much as I enjoy writing this type of material, it just isn't worth it.

Thank you all for your support, though.

 

Chapter 18

Alright, chapter 18 will be up momentarily.

One quick question... I have been seeing a lot of comments on my chapters being short, but Chapter 17 clocked in at just over 10 pages, which is my norm. I know I had a couple of shorter ones (15 & 16) but I guess I am missing something...?

Well, at any rate, 18 comes in at just over 12. I know not much bigger, but still bigger than my usual.

Oh, and 21 is at 15 pages so far, but the sex needs some work... Oh well... I guess that's why it isn't up yet.

EDIT: I forgot to ask... Does ANYONE have a pic or drawing that they think would work for Lela & Harana? I can paint with words, but not so well with paint or markers.

 

The country

There are many countries that don't like the US and sadly I've been to a few to many of them in my former line of work. I will say any muslim nation would be problematic for our friend DarkBrother and or China but I can't think of to many others where having porn durring your free time would cause problems.

 

Unfortunately you hit the nail on the head...

 

Next Chapter

Just finished posting the next chapter. A word of caution before you read, there is very little erotica, and more plot/character development in this chapter. Don't worry, though, as the next chapter comes back strong.

'Old' Mrs. Polkins:

 

encouragement

i have read all your stories and i find them all incredibly entertaining. beyond the erotic elements your stories have so much plot and feel to them. i can picture the universes you have created and the deep and complex charecters that inhabit them. you are a brillient writer and i urge you to continue writing even if it is no longer in the erotic field. i would deffinatly read your stories even without the erotic element in it. i am a writer myself and i would love to get some imput from you on some of my non-erotic stories. looking foward to the last chapters of B&S, you have me on the edge of my seat!

 

Well, the second to last chapter is up. Hopefully you enjoy! I'm going to bed!

 

I really enjoyed reading your stories. Just finished up reading all of them (took nearly 13 hrs I might add) and cannot wait for the conclusion of BS. On a side note I actually found BS first at the wolf pub and really enjoyed your writings and just had to finished reading BS and continued from there. Sad to read that you will not be able to be writing these stories shortly. Hope to read the last chapter soon, but for now I need my sleep.

 

I wanted to take a slight break from editing the final chapter to say, "Thank you!"

I have read all of your comments, both in the forum, and in the comments on all of my stories, and really appreciate all of the positive & constructive comments and support I've received from all of you. I hope to be able to publish (likely a non-erotic) story some day, and thanks to all of your help, I have learned a lot over the last 7 months.

I hope to have the final chapter up this weekend, depending on how much time I have available to do my editing.

Here is a pic someone xtremejump for Lela, though in my story she is hairless, and has a larger head with big eyes.

 

I just wanted to say thank you for all the wonderful writing you have done and that I hope you have a safe and fun time over seas. Take care and we will all be looking forward to the time in which you can come back to us!

 

The final chapter

Chapter 21 will be up momentarily.