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  1. jgem_86

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    Part 1 - Arrival of Debroinian on Earth

    Debroin, a peaceful and beautiful planet, located nearly 10 light years from Earth. It was once populated and glorious where all Debroinians lived blissfully without adversities. High technology and new scientific discovery have absolutely brought abundant of benefits for the people. However, the benefits have brought along the catastrophe to them too. One hundred centuries ago, there was a group of Debroinian Scientists researching on biotechnological genes. The motive was to intensify Debroinian and to expand the life span. The experiment was however failed and the order came to late where the viruses spread around the globe within days. Billions of Debroinian were infected and it has caused many became sterile and unable to produce offspring. Three billions Debroinians were now left to barely 1.5 millions today.

    For one hundred centuries, scientists and researchers have been working non-stop to look for other species, from the other planets, which carried mutual genes with Debroinians’ so as to keep up the reproduction. Within years, they have finally found the Earthman, or the so called human where their genes were matched with Debroinians’ and sharing similar appearances.

    Since then, one female Debroinian would be chosen and sent to Earth in every five centuries so as to accumulate the human’s seeds. It was a sacred mission where it must be fulfilled to save the Debroinians. They were given 10 months on earth to look for the candidate and for those who came back with the seeds would be honoured.

    “Floros, take care of yourself and be safe.” A middle aged woman with crown and dark blue massive gown uttered, she was the Queen of Debroin.

    “Yes, your majesty.” She knelt and bowed before the King and Queen. She gazed at the crowd while walking up the visual stairs to the spaceship. The crowd cheered for her as she proudly smiled and waved to the people. She was selected by the prophets to perform this sacred mission before she was born. For certain reasons, she has been put away from her parents and raised up by the prophets. She did not know who her parents were, and perhaps she would only know when she came back, with the condition of accomplishing her mission.

    The King stepped forward before the door closed and the visual stairs disappeared. “You shall be honoured when you’re back, and reunited with your family. Now, go and complete the mission. Do not let us down.”

    She smiled and bowed again before she entered the spaceship. She was barely 21 year old with long and wavy black shiny hairs. She was attractive at the height of 168 cm with slim and petite body. Her eyes were stunning and her skins were fair and smooth. Thanks to the prophets for raising her up so good in preparing her for this mission.

    The spaceship took off and disappeared within seconds. Built with sophisticated technology, the spaceship could travel and arrive in earth within 10 days in a distance of 10 light years from Debroin to Earth.

    Floros took up a sleeping pill so that she would fall asleep and only woke up when she has landed at the earth. The computer was set and the spaceship would be directed to the south of earth, as the emergence of candidate was predicted to be located within that area.

    A long glittery light with extreme high speed traveled diagonally down from the sky. It hit at the middle of the field of nowhere as it dragged for a distance before it came to a full stop. Smoke emitted and the surrounding was crumbled with dust.

    Floros walked out from the spaceship, she breathed the air and looked around. It was at midnight and no one could be spotted. She was naked and she tried to scan through the area around her.

    She left the spaceship steadily as the spaceship disappeared after her. It was self-destruct so that no one could track any evidence of it. It was forbidden to bring anything from Debroin to Earth. She found a residence and she quickly grabbed herself some dress and shoes. She managed to find a white tight t shirt and a white skirt. She dressed up and walked away quickly before she could be seen by anyone. She needed to look for a comfy place to settle down.

    Floros found a motel nearby. She walked into the motel and found a nearly thirty year old man sitting at the counter. The radio was turned on and he was reading a magazine.

    The man looked as ragged as his dress, crumpled shirt and tattered jeans. The spiky and shiny brown hairs, with prickly beards around her face have assured him as a fine-looking man. He stared at Floros for few seconds while he was totally ignored by her as she was busy studying the surrounding. How could a young lady like her walked into a motel alone? The man asked himself as it did not seem to make sense for him. Could it be a gift from the God, an award of fine young lady for him?

    Floros has finally turned his head to the man, she approached him.

    “Can I get a place here to stay?”

    “Sure, lady. Are you traveling alone?”

    “Yes.”

    “Okay. Let me find you a room first.” He stood up and checked at the list of the vacant rooms.

    “Mmmm… well yeah, I can get you a room at 3rd floor.”

    “Thank you.” She smiled to him.

    “You’re welcome. So let’s get the procedure done.”

    As the man filled up the form, Floros approached him closer. “Excuse me? I know I’m at the south of the earth. But may I know what the name of this place is?”

    The man looked at this young beautiful lady as her long wavy black hairs placed and rested around her shoulder. He frowned and wondered.

    “Are you from China?” He thought she was an illegal immigrant from China, without proper document and passport, as she looked oriental. Unfortunately, she did not even know where China was.

    “You mean this place is named China?”

    “Hell no! This is Australia, Melbourne!”

    “Very well, thanks.” She smiled walked away from the counter.

    The man stood up and yelled her back. “Excuse me? Lady, you’ll need the key and you’ll have to pay 40 bucks for that!”

    Floros turned back and eyed the on the key. It was a golden house key where she has never come across that. In Debroin, all the access and entrance were adopting biometrics technology. She came near to the man while both of them were separated by the counter desk, she leaned forward to smell him.

    The man was puzzled but a young sexy lady happened to act in such way could still somehow arouse him. He finally grinned and raised his eyebrows. “What’s up in your mind?”

    “Would you please tell me where the most sensitive part of a man is?” She held up his hand and sucked at his middle finger so as to distract him.

    He grinned broader as he grabbed his crotch with another hand, staring at this beautiful young lady in front of him. “It would be the cock.”

    “Cock?” Floros raised her eyebrows as she threw up his wet finger from his mouth. The man quickly swallowed the finger that she sucked at and tasted her dribble that she has left on it. It was all sweet for him.

    “Yeah, cock.” He grabbed his crotch tighter and licked at his finger more. Floros has somehow realized what he has meant about the “cock”. She walked around the counter desk so that she could come to him nearer. She held the man’s crotch and grabbed him harder.

    “You mean this, the cock?” She seized the size underneath his pants and confirmed with him.

    “Ohhhh… yeah. That’s it.” The seduction was obviously too powerful for him to resist this pretty and seductive alien. Now, he would not even care if she were an illegal immigrant or an alien as he never knew she was. Temptation has overwhelmed and obsessed his mind. He just knew he had to fuck her tonight. He has been so hard and so throbbing with Floros’ seizure and gentle massage.

    “I need to see it.” Floros went down and unzipped his jeans. She quickly took “him” out from his pants. He was a 7 inches and thick, circumcised cock. The cock was so warm and she has no doubt in grasping “him” and stroking “him” up and down. She did not presume she could find the candidate so fast after arriving at the earth in a short time. But there were no reasons for her not to give a try on this man.

    “Oh yeah, fuck! Suck me, suck my cock, babe.”

    “Mmm… you want that.” Floros tempted the guy so badly while she was still stroking for him.

    “Hell yeah…” She looked up to his eyes and her eyeballs gleamed at once. The man was immediately obsessed with the sex scenes. She did not instill sex scenes to his mind; instead, she stimulated and retrieved the previous memory of the sex where the man used to have with other women. She replaced the women in the hallucination and detected and reclaimed all the sex scenes where the man used to witness. Everything was supposed to be in fantasy but he could vividly feel he was having a real sex with her. In the hallucination, he felt his cock has been fellated and has been squeezed and massaged with her hot juicy tongue. As she drooled on his cock, the scene switched to his favourite position where she was riding on him on the chair. She pounded him so hard and he could feel his tight wet pussy wrapping him ever so firmly as he thrust and fucked her rigid cunt so bad. His world was shaking in this superb and humid hallucination.

    On the real side, Floros was still grasping and rubbing his cock, waiting for his orgasm so that she could taste his sperms to confirm his candidacy. Within seconds after this, the man ejaculated wads and wads of his seeds on Floros chest. She released his cock and immediately scooped some of the warm sperms for tasting.

    She smiled and realized he was not the one. She got up and wiped off the mess.

    “Thank you.” She grabbed the key on the desk and left the counter steadily.

    The man halted her by grabbing her arms. “Hey, you’re amazing.” He stuffed his cock into hs pants and zipped up. “Could we do this again? I could give you a free charge for your stay.”

    She smiled and replied. “No.”

    “Pardon me?” he raised his eyebrows.

    She gazed into his eyes as her eyeballs gleamed again. “That’s because you won’t even remember a single thing.”

    She erased his memory by ten minutes before. The man bewildered during the memory removal. He shut his eyes tight and held his head as he felt pain inside him.

    He would be fine. She reassured it and walked away.
     
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  2. jgem_86

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    hi, guys. ive uploaded my new story here. i hope this could be a better one for u all :) cheers.
     
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    i will release the part 2 by tonight. another couple more hours. do check it out. thanks for all your support. :)
     
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    Part 2 – Nighttime

    Part 2 – Nighttime

    “On 10th of July 2007, a local male resident in Melbourne has recorded an unidentified object travelled at a tremendous speed and hit a field nearby his house at 2.15 a.m. He was supposedly capturing the night sky of Melbourne but a high speed glimpse of light impacting on the ground has immediately grabbed his attention.” A male reporter was giving a news-reporting live on television. As soon as the prologue ended, the picture switched to the referred local resident as he was interviewed.

    “I saw that strong light that night. It was pretty amazing of how it hit the ground.” The picture then switched to his recorded video while he was commenting. “I went to the field but as soon as I reached there, there was nothing to be seen. I won’t believe my eyes if I didn’t record that scene.”

    The picture switched again back to the reporter. “The prime minister of Australia was however refused to give further comments about this scenario. He has also denied Australia is collaborating with NASA to investigate the case.”

    It then showed up the prime minister giving a speech in a conference room. “We can’t still confirm the object as there were no blueprints left behind the scene. The investigation would be carried out by the local Australian governments and authorities. There would be no involvement of outsiders, not even NASA. End of comments. Dismiss.”

    “Spooky… spooky… spooky…” A male bartender stood and leaned behind the bar counter as he watched the news on the television hung at the ceiling. He was aged 24 with short shiny brown hairs. His eyes were blue and he was moderately built with the height of 180 CM. He was so mesmerised with the news and he has almost forgotten he was on duty.

    “Spooky as if… we won’t be able to play cricket on that field for another couple of months?” Another two blonde young, fine-looking men approached him from behind. The field would be temporarily sealed for investigation.

    Kelvin looked back and he smiled to his friends. “Hi, Jon, Ash. What’s up, guys?”

    They greeted each other high five as part of their way of culture.

    Jon sat up on the chair at the bar counter, he raised his eyebrows. “Don’t get too excited with this, Kelvin. It’s a total disaster that they have sealed the field indefinitely and we won’t be able to play cricket.”

    “Yeah,” Ash agreed. “Without cricket, I don’t think I could survive.”

    “You’re a way too exaggerating, Ash.” Kelvin shook his head and sighed. “We could find another field, no worries.”

    “Unfortunately, that’s the best field we have. Damn that idiot alien! He is so good in choosing a place to land!”

    “Fucking alien’s invasion.” Jon mumbled.

    “It could be just a rock, a meteor, an asteroid or something. It isn’t necessary an alien.” Kelvin explained.

    Ash cut off the conversation as he interrupted. “Okay I don’t want to talk about the fucking alien or the fucking rock.” He turned his head to Kelvin. “When will you go back to Monash? You couldn’t be a bartender forever, could you?”

    Kelvin frowned as he did not like to talk about it. He has temporarily suspended himself at Monash to seek for a job outside, as a bartender. For him, obtaining a degree was not an impressive thing but trivial to be mentioned.

    “Well… may be another couple of months.” He replied unwillingly and he has never been confirming the duration of suspension, it was as indefinite as the duration of the sealing of the field.

    An obese man stomped to them and yelled. “Whitaker! Time for you and your friends to get out! I need to close the bar now. Try not to be late tonight!” He was the boss of the bar. He was a grumpy old man but sometimes could still be nice to his workers, depending on his moods.

    “We have to leave now.” Kelvin demanded soon before three of them walked out the bar.


    * * * *

    At night, the sky was covered with millions of radiant stars with a full moon stood high and proud. It was a superior day where the weather and temperature were mild to all.

    Floros walked solitarily at the middle of the street in Melbourne. The night life of the city has just begun with more teenagers came in flocks to the bars and the pubs where those places were the hottest and most common spots for the Melbournites.

    She has been eyed by the people while she was strolling along the street. That was because it was very uncommon for an Asian girl to be alone at such place, especially when it was at night. However, she has never been worrying about this much. She was more concerning on searching and scanning all the men to look for the candidate.

    “I need to go home now,” a middle aged drunken man walked out from a bar. He was so inebriated and he could not even stand straight. He was in formal attire as he just went for a couple of drinks with colleagues after work. His hairs were black and spiky and his prickly cheeks have turned him into a sexy family man. He looked slim and tanned.

    “I need to go home and have some sex with my lady, I’ve promised her.” He stammered unsteadily to his friends.

    “Ok, that’s cool.” One of his colleagues uttered. “Take care of yourself.” The other colleagues then headed the other way.

    “Will do.” He raised his chin up and walked away

    Floros was attracted to this man as she wondered if he could be the candidate whom she has been looking for. She has come to earth for more than a week. She has not been able to find another man ever since she did the man in the motel that night. The mission has never been easy, she would not try on every guy she met, instead, only certain men who would arouse her suspicion.

    She stalked at the man to his vehicle. As the man sluggishly and precariously reached his car, he plunged into his pocket to grasp the key. He left out his tremulous hand to unlock the car. Before he realised the existence of Floros, Floros grabbed the chance to push him aside where there would not raise an attention of anybody.

    The man was startled with a fine, young and beautiful oriental girl stopping him. He could not see a thing clear and before he could do anything. His pants have been unzipped and his prick was unloaded and completely swallowed by her.

    “Oh… almighty God, what’re you doing?” he stammered and moaned as he was fellated. He has been busy with his company’s business project and has not had sex for quite a long time. Therefore, he got so hard and his manhood turned to its full size within a short time.

    Knowing he was in unconsciousness, Floros did not pose any mind-obsession or mind-control on him. Instead, she just sucked his nice 7 inches cock without worrying anything. She massaged his prick ever so gently and also squeezed it ever so tightly. She switched the fellatio’s manners from time to time.

    “Oh… fuck… babe… you’re so hot.” The man moaned softly and enjoyed his penis being sucked by a gorgeous woman. He has not been able to have sex for long and he was drunk after all. That could be the excuse for him to go home late to fuck his wife. He was too horny to resist her and in fact, it was just too hard to resist her.

    “Mmmm…” Floros deep throat him and sucked him tighter and tighter. The man has finally come to his boiling point where he shot thick wads of his hot sperm inside her mouth.

    “Oh… fuck… man, gorgeous baby. Mmmm… good God…” he shut his eyes tight during the ejaculation. He has finally released and exploded all these long awaiting hot lava. It just that it was at a wrong target with wrong time and wrong place.

    His sperms and semen were quickly analysed. However, it came to another disappointment where Floros realised she was yet again failing to identify him as the candidate.

    The man rested exhaustively at the hood. He gasped deeply and he was still drunk. His mobile rang and he reluctantly answered it.

    “Hey, darling, I have been waiting for you here all night long. Where’ve you been?” It was his spouse.

    “I…” he looked at Floros as she smiled and gave him a kiss on his cheek, as a sincere “apology” to him for allegedly assaulting him. His wife was supposed to deserve all those hot sperms.

    “Babe, could you come and pick me up? I’m so drunk here.”

    “Where’re you?”

    Floros disappeared herself from the scene soon after she has “apologised” to the man. She needed to continue to look for the candidate.
     
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    could use a little grammar editing, but its very creative, i like the sci-fi aspect. good work!
     
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    oh yeah tq :) i promise to make the story as interesting as possible. and of coz, i will improve and work hard on my english :)
     
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  7. Viking1974

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    It definitely makes for an interesting combination, sci-fi and sex. It reminded me a bit of the movie "Species" (which I liked a lot). Also, the hallucination and memory whiping give the story a nice twist.

    I would love to read what will happen to Floros next. I think it might be nice to read about her getting some sexual education by an earthling...
     
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  8. exsqueeezemee

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    Well written , sexy, prose.I could feel the steam rising from the planet and want to get fucked by an alien.She has obvious writing talent that probably could be better served elseware , but I enjoyed it none the less.My senses were stimulated , every single one !!
     
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    Love sexy little scifi stories.Good elements of mystery and good build up. Bring on the next chapter.
     
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    Part 3 – Extra Sensory Perception

    Part 3 – Extra Sensory Perception

    “Oh yes, babe, you’re so hot!” A blonde long hairs woman was riding Kelvin on his bed. The room was dimmed and getting more humid as both the man and the woman were working harder on each other. Basking in the ambience of sexual odour with damp atmosphere had driven them closer to orgasm.

    “Mmm… oh yeah…” Kelvin relaxed and unwound himself on the bed, while the sexy and stunning blonde girl pounded on him harder and faster. She supported her frail body by placing her arms on his chest, as she moved her hip back and forth to heighten the sexual intercourse.

    Kelvin grabbed her backside and thrust her vagina stiffer. “Oh, I’m going to come…”

    The woman released her contraction where Kelvin unloaded his throbbing penis from her vulva. She laid down flat on the bed, while he stripped off the condom from his penis and kneeled before her chest. She briskly massaged her perky breasts and yearned for Kelvin’s hot sperms and semen all over her.

    “Oh… fuck…” Kelvin moaned and stroked himself hard. He has finally discharged his hot lava all over the woman’s chest. He breathed deep and gasped for air after the ejaculation. He rested himself naked, lied down on the headboard.

    The woman polished and scattered the sperms all over her breasts. She slowly gained herself up and climbed over Kelvin. She snogged him and he snogged her back.

    “You’re sexy.” The woman uttered.

    “Well, you too.” He replied.

    “I hope we could do this some other times again.”

    “Yeah, hopefully.” He replied cheekily.

    The woman slept on his chest and they chatted a while before she got up and dress up. She kissed Kelvin’s cheek and left the apartment. It was the second woman he has met from the bar and has spent overnight with him. It was unusual for him to have one night stands. But sometimes a man still needs sex and it is unavoidable and irresistible.

    It was nearly 9 a.m. in the morning and he could sleep for another couple of hours before meeting his friends for lunch.



    * * * *


    Floros meditated on the bed. She sat up closely and had her eyes shut. The room was pallid and muted with the windows completely covered by the curtains. She was motionless and remained silent for the next few minutes. She breathed supplely with her hands on her both laps and her hairs rested on the right of her shoulders.

    “Any progress?” a husky male voice vibrated Floros’s eardrums.

    “I’ve been trying hard, Vedoron.” Floros replied non-verbal.

    “It has been two months, you’ll need to speed up.”

    Vedoron, the head of the prophets of Debroin, was the most formidable person after the King and the Queen. His responsibilities were to keep up the faiths of Debroinians, plan the sacred mission, decide and predict the candidates from both Debroin and Earth, female Debroinian candidate to perform the mission as well as male human candidate to supply the seeds. He was also the advisor of the King and the guardian of the Debroinian candidate.

    He was conversing with Floros by extra sensory perception, stimulating the brains’ nerves and senses by transmitting the signals through the air and space where the signals travelled between ten light years distance from Debroin to Earth and reached Floros and vice versa.

    “I will. I will not let our people down.”

    “Excellent. Remember, you would be honoured and reunited with your family when you’ve completed the mission.”

    They “hung up” and the signal halted. Floros opened her eyes slowly. She realised she had to make haste as time was running out. She left barely 8 months to seek for the candidate. It was her mission, her destiny, to save her people.
     
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    hi guys, i have posted the part 3. im great for all your support. :) i would perfect the story for you all.

    i wish to tell u all that my stories arent just for sex. but it brings a lot other meaningful things. hope u guys enjoy reading. take care:)
     
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    Love how the story is progressing and the writing keeps improving. Want to read more.
     
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    Part 4 - Seduction

    Part 4 - Seduction
    ......

    I'm the type of girl to look you dead in the eye-eye
    I realize when it come to it you don't realize why I'm fly-y-y
    Seen you tryna switch it up but girl you ain't that dope
    I'm a Wonder Woman, let me go get my rope
    I'm a supermodel and mami, see mami
    Amnesty International got bankdrupt, I'm on top, on lock
    Love my ass, love my abs in the video of "Promiscous"
    My style is ri-dic-dic-diculous, 'diculous, 'diculous
    ……
    Heavy metal music was played and quivered in a bar. Men and women, boys and girls were dancing and shaking themselves on the dance floors. Some were drinking and smoking at the bar counters while some were gathered at the round tables.

    As the music amplified, people danced and hopped more vigorously and more rhythmically.

    Kelvin was not exceptional. Despite he was on duty as a bartender, he shook his body and head while filling up the glasses with beers for the customers. Ash and Jon were however jazzing with some racy women on the dance floor.

    The excessive salsa dancing had finally exhausted them. They began to slow down and walked back to the bar counter for some beers.

    “Too bad you got to work, Kelvin! It’s unimaginable how hot these chicks are.” Ash exclaimed as he got up a beer to drink.

    Jon grabbed himself a beer and uttered. “Yeah, I hope you could join us! These chicks are way too hot. Just look at their asses! Whoaaaa!!!”

    Kelvin smirked while preparing the beers. “There’s nothing to be jealous of! Guess what? I fucked a chick last night!”

    “What?” Both Ash and Jon cried in astonishment.

    “Yeah, a chick I met in the bar!” He voiced louder so as to fight over the extreme volume of the music.

    “Wow, cool. You should tell us this arvo!” Ash uttered.

    Kelvin broke up with his third girlfriend before he suspended himself in Monash. He left her because he found her unfaithful and bitchy.

    “Well, she was kind of approaching me first. Since I haven’t had one for so long, so I did her.” Kelvin explained.

    “Haha, yeah! That’s my man!” Jon patted his shoulder and drank the beer. Kelvin’s mates always thought he had been sarcastic and fussy all the time. He flirted with many women but he hardly had sex with them.

    “Would you ever try Asian chicks?” Ash asked in sudden. “Some Asian chicks are hot!”

    Kelvin sighed and said. “Apart flirting with a Vietnamese and a Singaporean Chinese, there haven’t been others!”


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    Floros was again walking alone on the street at night. She has been desperately and exhaustively searching for the candidate. She persevered her effort and vowed to find the man in short time.

    Strident music from Kelvin’s bar has drawn her attention. She approached the bar as she could feel a strong magnet which has been exerting a pull on her. She believed the candidate could somehow show up around there.

    Kelvin knelt on the bar counter and spread himself. For the sake of releasing his tension, he yelled. “EVERYBODY LET’S GET INTO THE PARTY!” Ash and Jon were standing aside and both of them ran amok with him too.

    Kelvin’s entire comportment was caught by Floros when she just entered the bar. The panorama did not seem to delight her.

    What a spoilt little kid! Floros thought in her heart. It was obvious that Kelvin did not impress her at all.

    Ash finally noticed Floros’s existence. He could not believe his eyes as he had never seen an Asian woman in this bar. Floros’s beauty has also attracted his attention, as well as the others who had noticed her.

    “Oh fuck man, what a hot Asian chick!” He grabbed the glass tighter as both Kelvin and Jon followed his eyesight.

    Floros was wearing a plain light green dress. She looked absolutely stunning in the dress where her figures looked perfect and attractive. Her long wavy black hairs and her dazzling eyes have caught many people’s attention.

    Jon raised his eyebrows and he was speechless.

    “Wow, she’s stunning. Indeed. I haven’t seen her before.” Kelvin said.

    “Shall I ask her for a dance?” Ash uttered while cleaning his throat. His eyes were dazzled and he was so looking forward for her.

    “Not likely. She is got by another chick.” Jon uttered in disbelief as a young white female approached her and tried to seduce her. He could not believe that woman was faster than any guy in this bar.

    “A lesbian just got her?” Ash said in disbelief.

    The woman closed her body up to hers and she touched Floros’s hairs and cheek. She brought her to the middle of the dance floor and they began to dance zealously. The woman tightly rubbed against her and she put her arms around her waist.

    “Damn man!” Kelvin exclaimed as he could not believe what he has seen. Both the women have become the hot spot of everybody in the bar.

    The woman valorously kissed Floros’s lips and she kissed her so passionately. Everybody stared in amazement with their mouth nearly hung open. Kelvin and his friends gazed at them and they would never want to miss such a hot scene.

    Floros managed to handle the kiss before she finally broke it off after few seconds. Not only because she was not a homosexual, but she also knew that she was not here for the women.

    Ash and Jon frowned. “Is that over?”

    Floros grinned serenely and paced to the bar counter for a drink. Every step of her has thumped the men’s heart. She leisurely sat on the stool, tardily stretched her petite and slim body.

    She opened her mouth and politely spoke to one of the bartenders. “Would you mind to get me a drink?”

    Her enthralling voice has inhibited the bartender’s response. He replied her with a tremulous voice and got her a beer. She smiled and received the beer from him. Kelvin, Ash and Jon were watching every step of her.

    Floros held up the beer as she drank some while scanning the men in the bar. The strong connection and instinct has told her the candidate would appear here, so she would have to be tentative all the time.

    “I think I would have to introduce myself, a little to her.” Ash uttered in red cheeks. He was drunk.

    “Yeah, me too,” Jon said as he followed behind Ash. “…wouldn’t want to miss the chance…”

    Kelvin frowned as his mates left him. “Hey, come on, guys!” He knew he has slight chance to get to know her as he was on duty. He used to flirt with a customer in the bar and unfortunately he was caught by his tyrannical boss. He could get busted if he got caught again.

    “Hi.” Ash approached her, followed by Jon.

    Floros turned to them and smiled broadly. “Hi.”

    “You were amazing!” Ash burped as his cheeks got redder. “I mean you’re really sexy.”

    Floros nodded. “Thank you.”

    “Shall we dance?” Jon asked.

    She did not reply. Instead, she leaned forward to sniff both Ash and Jon. Her act has definitely turned both of them on. It was exotic as she got up and placed her body on Ash’s. She sniffed his neck and stood in the middle of them as three of them began to shake their bodies.

    Kelvin sighed and he was jealous over his mates. He wished he could join them. However, he could not afford to loss his job just because he wanted to flirt with a woman.

    Ash put his arms around Floros’s as they placed themselves together. He nuzzled her nose and they danced like the Romeo and Juliet. Jon would not want to be neglected. Hence, he danced behind her and moved himself closer to her back. He wanted to impress her too.

    The entire scene was intensified as they danced their bodies closer to each other. Floros turned back and laid his warm hand on Jon’s cheek. Jon was certainly aroused as he shut his eyes and smelt Floros’s fragrance. He leaned forward to close his lips up to hers, but she retrieved herself in time before he could kiss her. She turned back and stared into Ash’s eyes. She coruscated her eyeballs and Ash was spellbound instantly. He grabbed her closer and wished to kiss her soft and juicy lips.

    Floros deduced both Ash and Jon were not the one she wanted. She shrugged off the men and steadily left them.

    Ash regained his consciousness and both he and Jon could not believe what had just happened.

    “Oh man, what did you do to her?” Jon asked in furious.

    “I don’t know.” Ash frowned and replied in bewilderment.

    Jon looked at Ash’s hairs and said. “Oh, your Mohawk must have frightened her away.”

    “What the hell are you talking about?” Ash flared up as both of them started having a spat.

    Kelvin watched aside and sniggered. He crossed his arms and fixated every single move of Floros. He knew that she was a very special girl. She has her style and stance which were very captivating.

    “Kelvin, get me another beer! This is so unbearable!” Ash yelled.

    He turned his head to Ash and Jon, losing his eyesight on Floros.

    “Right away, dude.” He turned back but she was nowhere to be seen. He frowned and desperately sought for her. It came to despair as he could not find her. He figured out that she must have left the bar.
     
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  14. jgem_86

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    Part 5 – The Seed of the Candidate

    Part 5 – The Seed of the Candidate

    Ever since the enthusiastic night in Kelvin’s bar, Floros has been the newcomer as well as the regular visitor there. She tried to make herself less conspicuous as it was an unwise idea to have many people knowing her existence in the bar. So, she would search for the candidate in the bar “anonymously” by dressing herself very differently at every night.

    Floros’s nightly emergence in the bar was not even known by Kelvin. Perhaps he could notice her in the bar fortnightly or lesser. Besides, it was a huge bar visited by hundred of people every single night. It was unlikely for him to discover her every time.

    As usual, he would stay at the bar counter to serve the customers, whereas he was unaware that Floros was sitting at the far left end of the bar, quietly and anonymously seeking for the candidate. Copious of men had passed her, but none of them was whom she wanted.

    A sexy and perky woman was dancing alone. She was a little plump with big boobs, about 170 cm tall with medium long blonde hair. Her apparel and skirt were tight enough to form her nice body shape.

    She was a little drunk and she had been here to hunt for sex, a slightly different motive of being here if compared to Floros’s. Kelvin had been targeted as she had been eyeing him for some times. She finally made a move to him.

    “Hi,” she greeted Kelvin with soft and horny voice. “Mind to get me a beer?”

    Kelvin noted and knew this woman was trying to seduce him. He has been encountering such situation hundred of times and he was good in handling it.

    He grinned to her and nodded. He filled up a glass of bear and placed the beer on the beer mat. Both of them maintained eye contact as the woman played her cherry lips and held the beer up. She sipped the beer while continued gallanting with Kelvin.

    She winked to Kelvin and got up from the stool. She grinned and walked to the bathroom. Kelvin understood what she meant. He followed her and both of them ambled to the destination.

    On the other side, Floros was sitting alone on the couch. She crossed her legs and scrutinised the men around the bar. The entire bar was quivering in heavy metal. The volume was absolutely deafening and the room was basking in dim, misty and fuzzy ambience.

    “Hey, where’ve you been that night?” Ash found Floros and he immediately greeted her and sat beside her.

    Floros smiled back politely. “Hi. I’m sorry about last night. I realised I’ve something to do, so I’ve to leave.”

    “Ah, ok.” He raised his eyebrows.


    “Mmmm…” The woman was gulping Kelvin’s penis. She knelt before him while Kelvin had his pants unzipped and his bulged penis fellated.

    “Oh, fuck…” He moaned in joy and stared at the woman swallowing his manhood inches by inches.

    “Oh yeah, suck me harder…”

    The woman enjoyed blowing the throbbing penis. She kneaded the warm hard tool with her soft tongue and ensured she had deep throated him. Her lips reached his zip and she held it for few seconds before she released it.

    “Oh…”

    She spitted on the penis and continued sucking him.

    His hot lava has finally reached its boiling point. He grabbed and stroked his penis and aimed at the woman’s face. Within seconds, he shot all his sperms on her. Besides dripping on the woman’s cheek, some wads were also stuck on the basin.

    “Holy shit!” he exclaimed after the ejaculation. The woman cleaned herself while eating up all the remaining fluid on hers.

    She stood up and smiled broadly to Kelvin. She threw herself into his embrace while Kelvin stuffed his penis into his pants and zipped himself up.

    He smiled and gave her a satisfied look.

    “I need to get back to work.” He said.

    “Alright,” the woman kissed him. “Can you ride me to your house later?”

    Kelvin laughed out loud as he deduced the woman expected more from him.

    “Sorry, I don’t think that’s a good idea.”

    “Why?” The woman demanded for a reason.

    “It was just a casual flirt. It won’t last.” He replied meanly.

    The woman’s eyes got red and moist. “Fuck you!”

    She hit Kelvin’s chest and pushed him away as she quickly left the bathroom. He has expected her reaction after the confession, but he never meant to hurt her as he thought she was thinking in the same way like he was.

    He walked out the bathroom several minutes later and got back to his job, before anyone could catch him slacking while on duty.


    While Floros was desperately seeking for the candidate, Ash was sitting beside her and chirping non-stop. He hoped he could make up with her and ask her for a date. Floros definitely did not appreciate that and in fact, she could not afford anyone or anything jeopardising her mission.

    She got up and politely excused herself for refreshment. Ash nodded and let her off. She walked to the toilet and left Ash.

    Far away from the direction of Floros headed to, Kelvin was noticeable and Ash greeted him. He greeted Ash back.

    Both Floros and Kelvin bypassed each other without notice. She could feel a strong magnet emanated from Kelvin. She halted for few seconds and turned back, staring at him. She refused to trust her instinct as he has depressed her during the first meeting.

    Nevertheless, she shrugged him off and proceeded to the bathroom.

    She gently pushed the door opened and walked into the bathroom. It was a male toilet and she did not even notice the sign board.

    The toilet was flushed as a man walked out one of the rooms while Floros was standing in front of the first mirror. The man was totally startled seeing a lady inside a male toilet. It shocked him more as Floros still remained calm with a smiling face.

    The man felt a little uneasy and quickly walked out the bathroom in embarrassment.

    Floros was barely bothered by the man. She looked at herself into the mirror, brushing her long wavy hair with her long elegant fingers.

    A wad of milky liquid stuck on the basin has caught her in curiosity. She knew it was a human’s spermatic fluid. She frowned and deliberately scooped up the liquid with her index finger. She tasted it and assessed the liquid.

    She gleamed her eyes in blue as she looked at herself in amazement into the mirror. The assessment has yielded a positive result to her.

    The seed of the candidate... She uttered to herself while she hung open her mouth. Bewildered, she has finally identified the candidate’s seed.

    The door was flung open as a drunken man dashed into the bathroom. He was astonished seeing a woman in a male toilet.

    “Oh fuck, lady! What’re you doing in the male toilet?”

    Floros gazed at the man with a rigid look. Her eyes swelled and still gleamed in blue.
     
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  15. incethegreat

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    amazing story hun carry on what u r doin ur great at it with ur wild imagination, i fink u shud make a book see how it goes ;) take care xxxxxxxx
     
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  16. sub2k1

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    Part 5 was pretty kinky. I like ur imagination but your grammar does need some correction still. However it comes down to a matter of choice, writing for a forum is one thing. It really doesn't make a big difference but if you need some suggestions for corrections, let me know :) I'd be glad to proof-check ur posts.
     
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    jgem_86 Porn Surfer

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    Yes, I appreciate that. Thank you.:)
     
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    You're building up the tension very nicely. I like how you've made it a real story with real characters. Keep it up!
     
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    Part 6 – Candidate’s Revelation

    Part 6 – Candidate’s Revelation

    “I swear I won’t quit this place if I don’t get trashed tonight.” Kelvin chuckled as he gulped more beer.

    He finally had his off day, and he would be celebrating a little with his mates, Ash and Jon. He always loved drinking and he was a good drinker, he could easily drink some ten tins of beer.

    Ash and Jon found the whole situation a little unbearable. It was indeed Kelvin’s day off, but there was no way for him to ruin it like that. Simply the wisest idea for them was to stay awake and peeping some racy girls.

    “Hey man, you don’t have to do that.” Ash said. “There are other better things to do than getting drunk!”

    Kelvin smirked and opened another beer, he sipped up and said. “Damn you, Ash. You should know that I love drinking and tonight is my chance!”

    Both Ash and Jon shook their heads as they found it a little exhaustive to persuade him to stop spoiling the fine night.

    Floros was spottable in the middle of the bar. She has been more desperate to search for the candidate after identifying the seed in the bathroom.

    “Oh, it’s her again! My little Asian princess!” Ash cried and both Kelvin and Jon looked up. She was heading towards them without noticing them sitting at the far end.

    Ash got up immediately and greeted her.

    “Good day, lady. How’ve you been?” Ash approached her and grinned broadly.

    Floros showed a positive response. She was so eager to know the candidate. She knew she was so closed to him, but where he had been in this fuzzy bar.

    “I’m… very good. Thank you.” She pondered a while.

    “That’s great!” Ash uttered pleasantly. “Well, if you don’t mind, I hope you could join me and my friends.” He pointed towards where they sat.

    Floros gazed at the direction where Ash has pointed. Apparently, she saw Kelvin again. She agreed to join them despite she was not keened with them. Besides, she knew there were not many “hideouts” tonight as it was a full house where nearly all the seats were occupied.

    She sat right next to Kelvin. Kelvin and Jon greeted and ushered her passionately. Kelvin burped as he drank too much. She found it a little unpleasant. However, she still had to endure it. She had to be cautious without uncovering her identity. While pleasing with the guys, she was also studying on the men in the bar. She needed to deduce whichever man has left the spermatic fluid which she has tasted in the bathroom last night. By then, she would be on the track of accomplishing her mission.

    “So you came here pretty often?” Kelvin asked in an inebriated manner.

    Floros turned to him from the crowd. She answered him graciously with a mere smile. “Yes, I love this place.”

    “Excellent! This place is amazing!” Kelvin said with dazzling eyes, as his ebriety got tenser and more blood was pumped and rendezvoused at his cheeks.

    Floros smiled as she found him ever so appealing while he was getting drunk.

    The music was getting more ebullient as everybody began to shake themselves more vigorously. Ash and Jon wobbled their heads rhythmically while observing the racy girls. The disco lights moved in the pattern of the music, created an ambience of fuzziness and ecstasy.

    Kelvin was however drinking non-stop. Ash noticed it and whimpered as he was so objectionable with Kelvin’s attitude.

    “Would you please stop drinking? You’re such a spoiler to this party!”

    Jon agreed and said. “Yeah, Kelvin. Why can’t you just try to make up with some girls here?”

    Kelvin looked up at them as he burped again. “Can’t you all see there’s a beautiful girl sits right next to me?”

    Floros raised her eyebrows and crossed her legs. She merely shook her head as she found the whole situation a little unbearable and embarrassing. She could leave if this persisted on.

    Ash and Jon looked at each other as they were speechless. Kelvin was somehow true with what he has said.

    Kelvin smirked as he held up the beer glass and sipped the beer.

    “Besides, I had sex again last night, right in this bar.” He blurted as he was proud of what he had said.

    Both Ash and Jon dropped their jaws in disbelief. Again? In this bar, where?

    At the meantime, Floros was immediately alerted. She started to link up what Kelvin had said and what she had encountered in the bathroom last night. She had a lot of assumptions. She frowned and paid her full attention to Kelvin

    Kelvin reminisced about the fellatio he had last night. Ash and Jon were totally impressed and turned on by the idea.

    Oh the other hand, Floros was astounded with Kelvin’s confession. This is the man? The candidate? She was surprised as she had never expected Kelvin was the candidate.

    “Well, I didn’t mean to hurt her feeling.” He chuckled and sipped more beer and continued to defend himself. “I thought she was trying to seek a little fun with me.”

    “Huhu!” Jon clapped his hands on top of his head, cheered for the way on how Kelvin ended the flirtation with the woman.

    “Holy crap, man! You’re such a philanderer!” Ash uttered in smirk.

    “Cheers!” He held up the beer and toasted to Ash and Jon.

    They seemed to have forgotten the existence of Floros as they continued cheering and drinking. Now, she needed a perfect plan to get rid of Ash and Jon, so that she could spend some times with Kelvin and confirm his candidacy.

    She had a plan in her mind. She could set them up by fuddling them.

    She held up a beer glass and said. “Well gentlemen, shall we drink up?”

    “Yeah…” They agreed and toasted.

    “Whoever first drunk and collapse would be the loser.” Floros said.

    “Yeah, that’s my lady!” Ash said in excitement as they gulped for more beer.

    Floros gave a very satisfied look as she drank up with them.

    Debroinians were simply strong and would never get intoxicated by any food and drinks on Earth. Sturdy antibody built inside their bodies had also enabled them to suit themselves on Earth regardless of any situation. On top of that, they would not get infected of any disease or any plague.

    The plan was slowly bearing fruits as Ash and Jon had eventually collapsed on the sofa. Kelvin, despite being the best drinker here, had also lost his ground. He could not afford to drink more and he started talking in dottiness.

    He shut his eyes tight and had his fingers pressing hard on his temples. “Arhhh… This feels so good.”

    Floros gently patted and massaged his shoulder as she whispered. “I think we should leave now. I could escort you home.”

    She gazed at Kelvin’s eyes as her eyeballs flickered, stimulated his brains so as to follow her wish.

    “Yeah, good idea.” Kelvin cooed in extreme red cheeks.

    They got up from the sofa as Kelvin was partially supported by Floros as he was too drunk to walk by himself. They toddled to the exit, leaving Ash and Jon in the bar.

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    “Oh, weighty man.” Floros gasped as she threw Kelvin onto his bed.

    Kelvin was very smashed due to high intake of alcohol. He was barely awake as he groaned softly.

    Floros sat beside him on the bed, pondered how she should confirm his candidacy. He was wearing blue jean and blue buttoned shirt. He unwound himself on the bed, one of his favourite sleeping positions, a starfish sleeping position.

    She gazed at him and made her first move. She put her hand on his crotch as she gently massaged his penis underneath his pants. That was the preliminary warm up.

    Let’s get rid of these annoying clothes. She whispered inside her and started unbuttoning his shirt. By placing her hands on his stomach, she moved up to his torso then to his chest. Her hands split to both sides and reached his shoulders. By then, she held up Kelvin and removed his shirt.

    She gently put him down after undressing his top. Now, he left only his pants whereas his body was completely exposed. Kelvin did not have a perfect built body with six packs; yet, his body figure was still good enough to make women dribbled. He was a typical white male with white and fair skin.

    Floros moved on by unbuttoning his jeans and unzipping him. She definitely could not lift up his hips to undress him. Hence, she gleamed her eyes as she sent a reaction to Kelvin so as to move his hips. Kelvin groaned as he lifted up his hips, she immediately pulled off his pants and left only his light blue brief on him.

    She climbed onto him as she pulled her skirt up and sat on top of his penis. She gently massaged his penis with her vagina by pulling herself back and forth. She undressed herself as well too, so that she left only lingerie on her body.

    Now, she needed to concentrate. She gleamed her eyes once again as her pupils dilated. She penetrated into Kelvin’s mind and stimulated his sexual fantasy. Within seconds, she saw Kelvin’s favourite fantasy.

    In the fantasy, she saw there were couples of women surrounded him. The women were sexy as they were wearing only lingerie. They kissed and fondled each other. Kelvin was lying in the middle of the bed with his penis bulging and throbbing underneath his brief. He was having a French kiss with a woman, while the rest were fondling and touching themselves, as well as his body. One of them was rubbing and sucking his nipples, while another one was stroking his penis. Besides, there was a pair of women kissing and touching themselves, a lesbian performance specifically for him to tune up the entire sexual scene.

    It was an orgy. Oh, filthy kid! Floros exclaimed inside her. However, she still moved on and slowly approached him. She realised she had to complete this mission, rationally and endurably.

    Kelvin could see Floros’s silhouette approaching. He grinned as if his queen was coming for him, as the rest of the women, acting like concubines, would have to give way for her.

    It was a very vivid dream Kelvin ever had. Floros climbed onto him and buried her face into his crotch. She sniffed his odour and then licked up his protruding prick. Kelvin moaned for that sexy tease.

    She slowly got up and sat on his crotch. Then, she lowered her body to him and they kissed passionately. The rest of the women would have to watch and touch themselves, serving the man at the side.

    Floros broke the kiss off and she went down to his crotch. She pulled down his brief and retrieved his long throbbing penis. Without hesitation, she swallowed all the length deep into her throat. She sucked him hard and massaged his prick with her soft tongue.

    Kelvin looked down and very satisfied with how his “queen” blowing his manhood. He could feel his nut sacks were grabbed hard from time to time. He loved to have his penis engulfed while enjoying some lesbian performance and kissed by some other women.

    Back to the real world, Floros was fellating Kelvin’s growing tool. It was not the best penis she had seen among the humans. Kelvin’s penis was about 6.7 inches and he was uncircumcised. Despite all these, he had nicely trimmed his pubic hair.

    Floros’s fellatio was just too perfect for Kelvin to hold his eruption. Not long after that, he had finally had his first ejaculation inside her mouth. Floros could sense that before he was coming. She swallowed and sucked every drop of his fluid. The result of the analysis was positive as it matched the pattern.

    She was satisfied as she had confirmed Kelvin’s candidacy. Then, she immediately preserved all the seed he could release by swallowing them up. This was her ever first seed accumulation from the candidate.

    She did not slow down or stop, she continued her job as she managed to assemble more spermatic fluid from Kelvin. Kelvin had four ejaculations that night, he was completely exhausted after this. Floros was not exceptional too, she did not leave and yet she fell asleep beside him. She thought she could have a short break first before leaving his apartment.
     
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  20. anonoz

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    Loving the story, it shows lots of imagination. Some of the grammar still needs a little work but that doesn't detract from the enjoyment. Keep up the good work, I want to read more.
     
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