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  1. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Chapter One

    The summer days were always warm. It was especially warm on this particular day. David had drove three hours to see his love, he was only a few states below her, and had been busy for several weeks due to school. She did not care, however, she just enjoyed his monthly visits and stays. Usually, they would have a hotel all to themselves, whenever they wanted private time, of course. Being these two were like forbidden fruits, cannot be eaten nor touched. Of course, though, because he is six years older than she is. Their love was hidden from the rest of the world except a specific few.

    To them, this was taboo, but they didn't care, as long as the rest of the world did not find out. Love is funny in a way, it has barriers, and even though they have not anything sexual with each other yet, their relationship was still an illegal one. David imagines his love at her doorstep, waving at him as he drove into her driveway. He sighs happily, awaiting her. There weren't many cars parked outside as his GPS showed the ending point of his destination.

    Brittany stood there, a warm sultry day, and David just drove in. She had waited for him for months, and so has he. He turned to wave, almost immediately rubbing his car against a crimson-parked Chevy. He pushed the paddle down to brake, just in time, too. David put his busted old Accord to park, rolled his windows up, and got out. Brittany, in exuberance, tackled David onto the floor; she wrapped her legs around him and him, being on the dusted and heated cement only acknowledged
    love from her. She got up then tugged at his hands.

    "What," he smirked a smile while tugged him inside her house. It was cooler inside, at least ten degrees cooler. He stared all over the place, her house was huge in comparison to his own. Damn, what a rich hoe, he thought to himself.

    Brittany was still holding onto his hand while all of a sudden, he felt a growing sensation within his boxers. His heart began to race, he only knew one thing right now, it was fucking, it was all over his head. But no, he stopped himself from having more of those immature thoughts and continued to follow his baby to the backyard.

    "Davie," she did not look at him, instead, she was looking up at the sky. The sky was covered by white clouds, while blue hue saturated the rest of the heavens. "I'm glad you're here," she turned around. "I missed you, and wanted you for so long."

    Blushing already, he turned aside. Didn't know what to say, he laughed in a giggly tone.

    "What?" Brittany was confused, but so was he.

    "Sorry, just nervous, that's all," he replied.

    "Aww, you're so fucking cute." She walked closer to him, and with each step she walked closely, his member grew by an inch. Inch by step, and step by inch. Brittany noticed the bulge around in his jeans and chuckled, "David, what the fuck?"

    He laughed, he knew she saw it, it throbbed passionately and lustfully inside his boxers, waiting to prey on her tight pussy. David stopped himself again, even if she would instigate, he wanted to love her and not use her for sex. He breathed out suddenly. Nervous, he tugged at her hand this time and pulled her inside the house.

    They were in the kitchen, she offered him something to drink, but in his mind; his thoughts, only one thing came in mind: her cum.

    "Water is cool, I guess," David finally answered and she went across the room to get a bottle of water. He spots her tiny butt, but it was very round and tight. The black-haired boy bit his lips without realizing and just as he did, Brittany turned to him with the water and notices it.

    Naughty, she thought, that was a big turn on for her. She gave him the water, but did not stop there, she sat on his lap. His lap, which anchored his throbbing full-sized eight inch cock. She moved her ass on top of his erect member and massages it. Her soft skin rubbing against his jeans, he felt the friction and pressure of her body. All he could think of is ripping off those pink shorts off and injecting her with his cum. He inhales deeply while she wraps her legs around him, he blushes again, his long hair hiding his face; he turns to the ground. Lovely tiles, he thought to himself, I wonder how they would peel it from the ground without destroying it. David tried to go off in his own world, but his dick won't let him. He continually throbbed, then at long last, he moaned. "Oh God..."

    Brittany stopped, then smiled. She stared at his dark eyes even though his hair blocked most of them off. His black set stared right at hers. They did not talk for several minutes, his cock still felt her pussy, David wanted to pull his jeans off and let her ride it for real.

    He could not take it anymore.

    David pushed Brittany down to the very tiles he had been staring on, she lets off a sudden burst of scream but complies. She did not resist his force. His strength pushed her down hard wraps both legs around her. She blushes excessively while he spreads her legs with one hand, then slowly, slipping his hand into her panties. A sudden urge; a warmness rather, swelled within her. He began to rub her gently, while from her buttocks felt the cold tiles. David kisses her neck; gently nibbling on it, leaving a mark. A reddish mark in which she would have to hide from her mother when she gets back from work.

    "Take it off, take it off, David... FUCKKKKKK ME," she was literally screaming, then.
     
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  2. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Chapter Two

    The sun peered down to the window, the sills were laced, flapped when the summer breeze blew in. Brittany slipped her tight pink shorts off and began stroking her clitoris, it was an amazing sight to behold. David nuzzled her face and bit her neck playfully some more. Her curvature was being well groomed and touched all over by David's manly hands. His veins were purely the color of teal. The surface of his hands groped her thighs, higher and higher; she let out a soft sullen moan. A moan that reminded him of the many times they had phone sex together. A moan that erect his penis further more. He got up, but not without her. David picked Brittany up; her shorts were around her ankles, and her panties: drenched.

    The black-haired boy carried his love to her bedroom, of course, he did not know where it was and went to the bathroom instead. He paused then lowered her. With her pleasing and peaceful pair of orbs, she stared at his dark and looming eyes. Her heart raced; she does not know whether it be lust or love, but yet, she stared. He did the same, in pure silence. He lowered his head a bit, as he was taller than her, to give her a kiss on the nose. She giggled like a Japanese schoolgirl. David paused again, holding her close; but Brittany had other plans. She unzipped his jeans with her feminine and small hands groped his full-lengthy member. She bit her lips excessively, as if she wanted to wrap her mouth around his eight-inch cock. Brittany played with his pubes before holding his penis like a chopping knife and stroked it while she leaned up against him.

    He grunted, in a feminine way more than masculine, then let out a groan. David rolled his eyes back as if an orgasm was about to break, then closed his eyes. The boy reopened them to look down at his girlfriend, on both her knees, gently stroking his cock with her right hand while her left held his thighs closely. Brittany pierced his flesh with her nails then scratched his legs a little before he notices it with a sound yell.

    Slowly, she wrapped her luscious lips around his throbbing cock. David did not comply, however, not in the sense of slowly, anyway. He jammed his dick right inside Brittany's mouth and held her hair up. She pressed her hands on his thigh area to push off but he would not allow her. David continued to fuck her mouth as if he was fucking her fuckhole. More groans and moans came from the boy, while his lover gagged more and more; saliva and juices mixed, precum ejected from the head of his cock while saliva poured down her mouth, then onto her bathroom floor.

    Finally, she managed to pull free. Her mouth; gaped, Brittany tried to speak but David's cock throbbed in front of her face. She glanced upward, similar like a kitten to her owner. She kissed his dick with a muah, then slipped his member inside her salivating mouth.

    "Brittany," David said all of a sudden while his love sucked on his dick. "I love you." And with this, she paused, stopped sucking but started to lick his knob, then peered upward at him for a second time, she held his dick and stopped licking. Brittany gave him a weird look, and thought to herself, "why do you say this all of a sudden?" Her heart was melting, then David got on his knees, onto the same level as her.

    "Brittany," he said once more. Silence. "Where's your bedroom?" he asked.

    She did not point, did not say a word but hinted with only her eyes, then she said, "mom will be home soon," but David did not care. He grabbed her hands, stood up, and tugged her to her room. Her black tee and pink shorts were just sexy. Her pink laced panties matched her shorts. David threw his girlfriend onto the bed then grabbed her ankles, forced her to him further more as he rubbed his dick around her thighs.

    "Stop fucking around David, I want that cockkk," she had such a whiny tone to it. He held her firmly down, spread her legs a bit, then rammed his eight-incher deep inside her. She panicked at first, then calmness overwhelmed her; she felt safe. David nibbed on her neck while they had intercourse, her saliva still flowed around his cock, which lubricated his being while inside her. She was so tight, her muscles contracted and let off a scream. David grabbed Brittany and plopped her upward, she squatted down on his thick cock and let out another moan.

    "Dav... Waveeeee....." more and more, he thrust inside of her, and more and more; she screamed of pure pleasure. Pure joy. Pure ecstacy. "Fuck, oh god," Brittany yelled. "Fuuuuuuuuuuuck..." her pussy was creaming, juices flowed down on his member. "I'm--"
     
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  3. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Chapter Three

    She backed herself down on top of his erect member, David moaned not once but twice. He grabbed her swaying hair and rubbed her clit, whispering dirty words into her satisfied ears. She opened herself, as did he, and let his voice trail into her orgasmic veins. Brittany turned her face a little to see her lover with the corner of her rolling eyes. "David, I want you, so bad," she said, as if she haven't had him already. He traced his fingers around her pussy and spread her more. She screamed, then giggled, and looked back at the closed door.

    On the other side of the house, the doorknob started to twiddle as a key entered her glorious hole. It slid inside of her enveloped hole as it did Brittany, penetrated by her love. It was her mother, she opened the door and called Brittany, a thunderous roar. "Oh shit," Brittany quickly got up from her lover, grabbed her shorts below her ankle, and pulled them up. "David, hide," she said. With no reply, David complied. Her room was a mess, everywhere could have been his hiding spot. The closet was filled and littered with random junk from unwashed clothes, to softballs, and books. David grabbed his jeans and whatnot and hid behind her door. It was still closed, though.

    Brittany's mother opened the door to her room, it almost hit the boy on his nose. Frankly, it didn't. False accusations on her face, Brittany's mother noticed. She surveyed the surroundings but came to the conclusion that someone had been in the room. Somehow, in an ordain manner, she knew. Brittany fixed her shorts and got off the bed. Her mother eyed her as she walked out of her room. A clever scheme it was; this made her mother follow her as Brittany screamed, "there's no one in the house since you were gone. Why are you so paranoid? God!" Her mother, still yet to believe her, took a commanding stance and replied, "...your bed looks like there had been an earthquake..."

    The young girl shouted yet again, "you're being fucking ridiculous, God."

    "You know, I do read your AIM conversat--"

    "What the fuck? Are you stalking me?"

    "I'm protecting you."

    "I don't need your protecting, I'm grown up."

    "...you're still my babygirl."

    Babygirl, this was what he calls her. She blushed a little because it was her mom who called her that. Her mom did not notice. "Well, I'm leaving the house tonight, just no parties, I'll know," her mother exclaimed. "Got it?"

    The girl shrugged then nodded. As her mother left the house, she went back into her room, David was under her bed of all places: behind the door, closet, or even out of the window. But he was under her bed. He frightened her by pulling on her leg. "Oh God!" Brittany yelled, putting a hand over her mouth as if her mother was still in the house with her.

    David crawled out beneath her and sat on her beg. He looked at her intently; his heart raced as so did hers. He sighed, then she sighed with him. He smiled wonderfully then laid right on his back. His love besides him, he felt as though he was in heaven: it really was God sent. Funny, he was an atheist. God basically meant nothing to him. David stared right up at the ceiling and sighed once more. Brittany laid her head on his chest and heard his throbbing heart while sticking her hand down his pants.

    As if electricity shocked him; David almost jumped but instead, twitched his hips towards her. He smiled. His unerect cock was just a little bit over two inches, but as more and more Brittany felt up on it, it quickly grew in the matter of seconds.

    "Brittany," he muttered.

    She looked at him with an innocent face, "nya??"

    "Come with me!"

    David grabbed her hands and pulled her up from the bed. They ran out the door and David pressed the alarm to his car. It beeped. He opened the door for her. No one had ever done sweet things for her like he did. He sat in the car with her; it was a brilliant night.

    Brittany stopped him, "I have to turn off the lights and shut the windows and stuff silly," she giggled then done all of those as so and plopped back into his arms -- his car.

    "Where do we go to the park from here?" David asked.

    She obliged to his question and told him. It would have taken them ten minutes to get to the park. David pointed to the back, "there's a sheet of blanket and a sleeping bag." Confused, she replied, "oh?" He nodded without saying a word and started the engine. A warm sultry night, a maroon-colored car parked by the side of the curb; David stepped out of the car followed by his love. The air was warm but the breeze was cool; an ambient balance to it all. Brittany scratched her arms then sped-walked to David's side. She clung to him like a little girl clinging to a teddy bear. David held her waist and smiled, then kissed her forehead.

    "Brittany, you're so gorgeous."

    Even in the pale light; her blushing could still be seen.

    "David, hush. You're beautiful."

    "But I'm not," he answered back, "always second compared to you."

    "Hahahaha," Brittany laughed.

    Her laughter is like an angel's. No, it's better than that. David thought. "Let's watch the stars."

    "Aww, Davidd..."

    They both picked a beautiful tree to lay against on. The tree was lush. The breeze felt like autumn to David as he slipped inside the sleeping bag next to his one and only. His heart raced, but now only mildly. The park was surrounded by a looming city; the lights pretty much blanketed the skies. The stars could hardly be seen but in this night - the stars shimmered beautifully - David kissed Brittany's cheek and laid his head against hers. She felt a calmness overlapping her sensitivity. She felt as though she was home, and yet, she felt something missing. David could not be with her all the time. He had a home to go back to. The air became colder and colder as the night went on and David wrapped the blanket on both of them. They continued to gaze at the distant stars.

    "David?" she said while smirking a little.

    "Mmm," he half-replied.

    "I love you so much."

    He smiled followed by a long sigh. He was speechless, finally. He had the same feeling as she had; love. It wasn't lust. Sex could come later on in his mind.

    "I fucking love you," David finally replied back and took a deep breath. "I want to marry you, but I know it's too soon."
     
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  4. XxXdummyXxX

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    fucking hot man keep it up
     
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  5. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Thank you, I will definitely will.
     
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    dude im a huge fan of ur work as u might of seem ive commente on all ur stories i especially liked the rachael sieries and i understand the person u wrote it ror got banned but can u please please continue it because its the thread i cum 2 (the cheesey pun was intended) and would really appriciate if you did that please and i thing the 2nd one was great were she raped him x] so yea keep up the awesome stuff coz ur the best author of the erotic kind i know and also u rock!!
     
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  7. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Haha, thanks. I know there are way better authors than I, as far as Rachael is concerned, that story is done and over with. This and Perverted Dad will still continue on.
     
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  8. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Chapter Four

    It started to rain; the leaves from the trees blew in sway. The grass sweat with hazy gusts of wind, the rain poured on both of the lovers violently. "Fuck" David said, running to his car, "c'mon!" he suggested his girlfriend to come along. She followed him. They sat in the car, very quiet, while the outside poured down relentlessly. "I overslept. I have to go today."

    Brittany said nothing except turned her face to face the rain outside.

    "Brittany?" David said.

    "Hm?" she nodded.

    "Nothing," he said. David drove Brittany home, just around a vacant corner so her mother doesn't see her un-met boyfriend's car. "I love you."

    "I love you too," she said and opened the door then walked to her house. David's eyes kept focused on her. Something seems so odd this morning. He suggested. What is on her mind?

    ***

    Two weeks later.

    David sat down at his computer and browsed the web and sees Brittany online on his AIM buddy list. He types “hi” to her and gets a “hi” in return. All the standard, but something was up, David discovered, when Brittany asked him what would crush him about her. David thought about that, he would have never suspected anything; he was oblivious to the fact that his girlfriend was a slut, yet she did not want to reveal anything to him. His love for her had been blinded.

    "Well, I don't know," he typed, "maybe if it was you cheating on me?"

    "Well..." she replied in the IM box.

    David's stomach turned sickly. "Uh, what?"

    "David, I didn't mean to, it just happened --"

    "What?"

    "Me and Jx..."

    Jx was one of her friends who she hung out with frequently. His eyes were on fire, David's heart thumped with rage, his nose flared. He did not type back for awhile then Brittany continued.

    "I objected..."

    "So it was rape?" David asked."

    "..No.. I didn't consider it that but it was NOT mutual.. but when he was inside me. I just.. gave up.."

    "It's not rape and it's not consensual, what the fuck?" David typed. The boy sat in silence. Silent until it was 3AM morning, but she was already gone. He got dressed, put some cash inside his wallet; grabbed the car keys and walked out the door. He left the computer on, but with an away message, "I loved you."

    The car's engine started and David glanced over at the GPS; telling him every which way to go -- to the destination of his once loved -- to end it all, with murder in his eyes.

    He continued to think back while driving to Massachusetts, when she had cheated on him. He knew it was recent but of course, Brittany only told half the tale.

    ***

    The long night has vanished over the horizon. David’s car parked in front of his lover’s. He looked up the window; there were no signs of any life. He drove around the corner, the same corner they had always gone to, to avoid her mother. His fatigue was hitting him. His eyes drooped, maybe just an hour of sleep. He thought to himself. And with that, he fell into sleep only to fully wake up at 8:00AM.

    “Fuck,” he calmly said looking at the clock, his car provided heat for him throughout the night. He wore his hoodie and walked to Brittany’s door. He did not expect it to be open, and had surveyed the surroundings. His lover’s mom’s car was nowhere to be found. His assumption would only be that she had left for work.

    Hmm. David thought once more. He looked up from the ground to her room. It wasn’t reachable distance for him to jump and crawl his way up and yet; he had done so. There were little hanging bricks which David used to climb. It was hard, it had overweighed his shoulders but he must see her himself to make sure. He must confront her; he needs to.

    The window.

    The window had its beautiful coursed white, inked with adorning patterns. David peaked in. She was still sleeping; he held his weight in and pulled up toward the window more, leaning towards the side of her bedroom. She slept so peacefully. Peace. Peace was not on his mind. A strange numbness coursed through his very being again, mesmerized by the fact that she; his love had slept with someone else besides him.

    For all he knows; she lost her virginity to him instead of David.

    “…Jx…” Brittany had murmured in her sleep, yet David heard her. He couldn’t hold it any longer.

    He pried the window open, it wasn’t locked at all. David leaned in.

    Brittany turned.

    Her eyes, they widened.

    “David…”

    He hushed her. She tried to break free but he wouldn’t let her. His force stronger than hers; he forces her to remain shut and in bed.

    “Tell me,” he exclaimed, knowing that no one was home, “how … I don’t get it, Brittany. I was… I am still in love with you, yet. Yet you do this? You did this, why?” he did not let go of her, “seriously, we have known each other for two years. Two fucking long years and you do this to me?” he lets go of his hand on her mouth and lets her loose.

    “You fucking came here all the way here, here, MY house, for THIS? Are you fucking crazy?”

    “I was fucking crazy in love with you, weren’t I?”

    She was speechless; she couldn’t find the words to save her.

    “Well, I drove for miles to see you, say something.”

    She would not.

    “BRITTANY.”

    “Yeah. Yeah. I’m sorry, okay? I’m sorry for what I did, if you want to break up with me, that’s fine.”

    “We’ve broken up a lot of times before, if we break up again, this would become our third time. And this isn’t just a break up as in… a break, it’ll be a break forever. Tell me, why’d you do it?”

    “I just did, I don’t know, I—“

    “It was consensual, I know that already, but, I want to know more. What happened? You said you objected? What happened?”

    “He tried again and again… and when he was…”

    “When he was inside you, it felt good. Too good to stop?”

    “…yeah.”

    David slapped her across the face. “WHAT THE FUCK? YOU HAVE A—“

    She intervened.

    “We hadn’t talked to each other in weeks then, you were mad at me.”

    “Out of spite.”

    “What does that mean?”

    “Spite… just, forget it,” David walked off.

    “David.”

    “No, you’re dead to me.”

    “David.”

    “What?”

    “I lost it to him.”

    David turned; his face red, fists clenched tightly. He said no words but she could look into his eyes and can only see one thing: hate. He opened his mouth but it was more of a jaw-drop than vocal. He sighed once then one more time.

    “You lost your virginity to him.”

    “….yeah,” she answered; at least to her; she told him.

    “Tell me where he lives.”

    “What? No.”

    “Tell me, WHERE DOES HE FUCKING LIVE?” David screamed into her face; he took her hair and held it tight.

    “David… David… you’re hurting me, OW… Daviiiiid.” Her moans and groans, everything was synchronized, it was a symphony; his orchestra.

    His teeth grinned until the gums bleed. He yanked at her hair, bashed her head against the wall. Forcefully; he demanded her to tell where the boy she had been sleeping with.

    “It’s,” she said as her face gets smacked against the wall, “just,” and once more. “one time, Daviddd…” she stopped as he pulled her hair, she couldn’t continue to talk, instead, she screamed. He pulled her hair which forced her to move with him from her bedroom to the hallway.

    “Tell me,” he said subtly, “tell me now.”

    He forced her to look at the stairs as if he was going to throw her down. She gasped, then spoke with blood in her mouth.

    David kneeled down to kiss her. Their blood smudged with one another; she whispers to David the address he wanted.

    Inside her closet; he tied her up and socked her mouth.

    “Laced stockings, oh, you whore,” he chuckled a bit before leaving.




    The destination, David’s face is still grim. He smirks a little, a bit psychotic on his behalf. He knocks on the door. No one answers. He knocks again, but this time harder than the previous. Still, no one answers. He did not give up; however, he went into the back. There were no cars in the driveway, and surely the boy wouldn’t have been home. It doesn’t matter to him. To David; he just wants death to the boy. His mind was shattered from the thought of these two fucking on her bed. He took her from him.

    David finally finds a way to sneak in, in from the backdoor. It was odd that the kitchen door was not closed. He guessed it was a good neighborhood, then, people would not care so much about crimes.

    Jx walked out of the bathroom, David catches a glimpse of him yet the boy did not notice him back. David walked closer, inching his keys out slowly so it doesn’t daggle.

    As Jx walked out of his room, David catches him by the throat with his key.

    “Struggle and you will die.”




    Brittany continued to try to knock her head on the closet door but David made sure that she couldn’t. Her neck was tied to the chair, so were her hands and legs. She was trapped in there until he finds her.





    Jx was tied in his kitchen; he was only to talk as he wasn’t socked but he was immobile. Slowly, the cold metal tip slid deeper into his flesh. The golden key continued to cut into Jx’s throat.

    “So tell me, how does it feel knowing that you took her away from me?”

    Jx was silent.

    “HOW DOES IT FUCKING FEEL ASSHOLE?”

    David punched the boy’s head and only then did he groan.

    “Fine, don’t talk,” said David, walking to the kitchen cabinets. “Oh, hey, look. A knife.” He rubbed the tip against his finger and pricked it. It bled a little and this enticed him more to slay the beast whom slept with what was his. “Last chance.”

    “I’m sorry, I’m sorry. I had no idea, I. She said she was single.”

    David stopped. His eyes tearful and he felt remorseful but only to himself. Brittany never claimed him as hers. He took the knife and slit Jx’s throat. One quick swipe ended the boy’s life. There were no screams except the empty sounds of the blood pouring onto the floor.




    David went back to Brittany’s house, went back in the same way he had done so a few minutes ago. He opens the closet to find her still struggling.

    “You never wanted me,” he said while taking the sock out of her mouth.

    “That’s not true David.”

    “He said you told him you were single. You’re shit to me.”

    She couldn’t find any excuses.

    With the same knife he used to slit Jx’s throat; he jammed the knife deep into her heart. Brittany struggled even more; she screamed so loud that David had to sock her again. The knife plunged deep into her heart.

    David felt her heart beat no more.

    “I loved you,” he said then plunged the knife into his. No screams, nothing – it was all but a fantasy: a dream, a Forbidden dream.
     
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  9. tyciol

    tyciol Sex Lover

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    Wow, that was an incredibly brutal story, it really made me scared, because there probably are guys who act this way... this is why we need to train Judo, to disarm knife-wielding crazy jealous guys.
     
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  10. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Because girls can be bitches too. LOL.
     
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  11. Primeval

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    Harsh, real and a good read.
     
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  12. madman8586

    madman8586 Newcumer

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    Good story!
     
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  13. Enigmatic2211

    Enigmatic2211 Porn Surfer

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    Wow good stuff.
     
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  14. Altic04

    Altic04 Porn Surfer

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    wow that is a good long story is it at all true or completely made up
     
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  15. sir cumalot

    sir cumalot Porn Surfer

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    XD would karate do :O ??
    ive known girls like that:(
     
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  16. Lunalupo

    Lunalupo Porno Junky

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    Great story. Deserves page one exposure.
     
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  17. hotjohn4321

    hotjohn4321 Porn Star

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    Keep writing

    Good story line keep it going;)
     
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  18. ELaken-Palmer

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    Just about the oddest (and yet best) story I have ever read on the forums! Written with a great deal of style... hard to follow and yet easy to understand. What a great story. The passion of the two lovers in both their love and then their hate. What a story!

    Of course FIVE STARS for this! :awesome:
     
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  19. Larry Moen Curley

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    i thought that this was a good story. some of it was way above my head but it was a great plot. do write more stories.
     
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  20. ThunderedEchoes

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    Awh, thanks guys. :) I've been too busy lately to write something... nice.
     
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