Authors note: This is a very short story that was written in a rush during my lunch break. I know there are errors, and it is quite simple, but I was trying to give people who may be unsure about what to write about some inspiration. It is, (I think.) an example of both of the themes. If not, I am prepared to suffer
Miss Hush's correction.


KAW -7 Busted (A non-entry)

I feel a shiver as I lock the door, and turn to look at you laying on the bed. I'm under no illusions why we are both here. Sex. Nothing more, nothing less.

I'm not going to make excuses, I'm not going to pretend that this is anything more than raw, animal need. I want the release, and I want you to give it to me.

There was a time when I was ashamed of the time we spent together, I felt like our relationship was dirty. I had moments where I felt like I was cheating on my man, even though he knew about you from the start. I should have known better. I couldn't keep you a secret from him. He has even watched us together and given his blessing. He knows that you and I will never compare to what he and I share, it's just that sometimes I need what I need. No strings, no commitment.

I undo my towel and let it fall to the floor. I lay down on the bed next to you, and reach out to take you in my hand. As always I love the feel of you. Soft, supple skin, so smooth to the touch, but also the hardness underneath. I run my fingers over you, feeling all of your intricate textures and curves. I want you... But I think you already know that.

I suck in my breath as you go between my legs. With no foreplay or build up, you are playing with my clit. The sudden touch stokes the fire that has been building in me all day. I can feel the excitement as you stroke downwards, and slowly slip back up. Your head lightly separates my lips on its way back up to that magic little button above. I sigh contentedly.

I know just how to turn you on. Using my fingers, I press against you. The reaction you give is almost instantaneous. You start to tremble and I am rewarded with your wordless response...

"Hmmmmm. "

I feel like such a slut when I am with you. That hum you give affects me like a bell and Pavlov's dogs. Instead of salivating, it is other parts of me that get wet.

My back arches, my hips coming off of the mattress to press harder against you. I spread my legs farther open, allowing you full access to me. You keep up your steady rhythm, first down my crevice, then almost penetrating me before sliding up to tease my pearl. I am trying not to moan, but the feelings that you are giving me make that task difficult.

My mind is torn. The teasing you are giving me is making me pant with desire, however I want to feel you inside of me also. I am going crazy with lust. My body is flushed, and my breathing is becoming rapid.

When I feel like I can't wait any longer, you slip lower, then enter me slowly. I close my eyes and let my head fall back onto my pillow. My teeth close over my lower lip, trying to bite back the groan that is threatening to escape. When you are inside of me fully I feel your fingers come in contact with my already sensitive clit. I know that you are going to make me come.

In seconds, (or is it minutes, I no longer feel a sense of time.) I feel my body start to tense. The feeling of you moving inside of me, not just in and out, but the way I can feel all of your movements. I grab you tightly, knowing that you won't stop till I let you go.

The moment I have been waiting for is here. Words will never do it justice. It feels like electricity, like waves crashing on the beach, like the big high flying fireworks that go boom and then send sparks in a thousand different directions. My legs involuntarily clamp around you, my back raises up and forces you deeper inside of me. One second I cannot seem to breathe, and the next, I am gulping in air like a drowning swimmer.

You are relentless. You keep moving, keep teasing me. My body goes almost limp, and still you won't stop. I finally have to pull you away, my breathing ragged. My body is all full of tingles, there is a small twitch on the inside of my thigh that is fluttering with every beat of my heart. I realize that I am glistening with sweat from my exertion. I let my body relax, my breathing, and the occasional twitch my only movement

With you by my side, I bask in the afterglow. I don't love you... that is much too strong a word. I appreciate what you do for me, but I know that you will never be the one who cuddles me on the couch. You will never hold me when I cry. I will never think of you when I need a sympathetic ear. That's alright, I know that you don't think about that either. You couldn't care less about my feelings. You are here for one purpose, and when you accomplish that, you will go away, not to be seen until our next rendezvous.

The rattling of the doorknob yanks me abruptly from my thoughts. The knock on the door sends my heart into an all new frenzy of flutters.

"Hey K! Why is the door locked? "

My roommate's voice makes me jump out of bed, and I knock you to the floor.

"I... I... Hold on, I just got out of the shower!" I frantically grab for you, but end up kicking you instead. Being kicked like that must have turned you on.

"Oh my God K! I can hear it vibrating!" Her laughter makes my cheeks burn with what I know must be a deep red glow. "You horn-dog! You are playing with your rabbit aren't you?"

I hang my head... BUSTED!





A short tale about Masturbation,

And my Jessica Rabbit Slim Vibe.

 

Very clever!

I'm so enlightened on what to do now!

 

Well done. It wasn't difficult to figure this one out, but, it was the telling of the tale itself that makes it a very good read. I do believe that you got nailed, I mean, nailed it well, hitting both themes.

This should prove to be a fun KAW!

 

Well played!

 

Well done. I had a notion about the vibrator from the start, you pretty much sold it away. As far as mistakes, I could only detect one (maybe)

Shouldn't: "Her laughter..." read "His laughter..."? I enjoy the way you write the erotic descriptions. Maybe one day, I'll achieve a higher quality myself.

 

Ok! I understand your roommate to be female, since you share the same locale. Sorry and thanks for the enlightenment.

 

I think this non-entry is everything KAW-7 asks for. Perfectly personifying the rabbit as a lover that we automatically think of as human. Such a powerful way of describing the sex act via the use of metaphors. Scintillating descriptions of motion and response both internal and external involved in the passionate process. That's everything required and more. If the rules were different, Miss K could have won this KAW after winning CAW 27. I've grown out of the "surprised jaw drop" response to Miss K's writing. She is a great writer. One of our best. Fact.

 

Nice, enjoyed this one, I agree it was pretty obvious what is was about. Very well written, super easy to follow
And in the theme of this Kaw. Nicely done.... thank you for your time and effort ♡♡ it

 

What I find most fascinating is the rapid improvement in her technical writing skills. She always told a good tale, but her first efforts were littered with grammatical issues. Now, however, her writing is almost technically perfect. I've always maintained that you can't teach someone how to write, but that a writer can improve the technical aspects of their offerings. Miss K has certainly done so. Very impressive transformation.

 

Competition "half-way/2-weeks left" bump.

Hush....an alias

 

Your telling of the story brings the reader right into the action. Her feelings can be felt and understood by anyone that reads it. Well done Miss K. This was an excellent submission.

 

I loved that and I must say it was what jumped straight in to my head, its what I was going to write about.

Extremely well done and I didn't notice anything untoward and it didn't feel or seem rushed in any way except the rush toward the items use.

I have to disagree with Norton and Horse, I'm not surprised by the quality of your writing, it's what brought us together in the first place (more or less) . I've always said you were a fantastic writer and I have said before at least one of your stories in my opinion should have won earlier comp.

Effortless top draw material covering both requirements in my opinion .

Thanks for the great work K as usual and for giving us a thrill. Don't get out of the blushing habit , it's endearing

 

Loved this tale...reminds me of myself

 

I've read it when it was posted, and, it's good. I figured out where it was going fairly quickly, and it amused me a bit. Good job

 

Bump for Reading Phase grouping.

Hush....an alias

 

Excellent work! You nailed both themes perfectly, in fact I believe that unlike my hedging pseudo-offerings, your personifications were more inline with what they are all about, and your description of a single sex act met that criteria perfectly as well. A wonderful contribution!

Thanks so very much for supporting this competition by taking the time to write a non-entry!

Hush....an alias

 

21 hours left till voting bump for competition grouping!

Hush....an alias