Wow what compelling writing. Very affecting, especially the control/passive issue. Please keep going!

 

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Really happy that you have posted again. Hope everything is well were you are at? I must say I love that you are willing to share such personnel details of your life with everyone. On the other hand I am really starting to hate that prick Danny. I know he is your brother, but I really do hope something bad happens to him, like an getting his ass kicked or thrown jail.

 

Welcome back, BB! Thank you for continuing your story.

 

So happy to see a post in here that wasn't just a bump.

FM

 

Excellent

Very glad you are back, this chapter is excellent, can't wait to read more...

 

Thank you !

Thank you Bella for you writing! I enjoy it. After the pause, it is like seeing old friends again. :rose:

 

Great read belle...more pls and thanks

 

Supp Baby-Bella? Woah Gurl.

Thank you Bella, sooo very much. I wasn`t going to come through and comment, through fear of looking silly, and merely repeating what has already been posted already by ``Us`` your pervfanclub! I find you somehow managed to tick all the boxes required to get not only my throbbing attention, but also the empathy and support of my other `Head`. Your strong use of focalization guides your reader, whilst allowing adequate freedom regarding his own cognitive representations or imagery. It really was a rush to encounter your thread Gurl. It could certainly stand-up and be well counted amongst some of the best incest stories that I`ve personally experienced, not just here on XNXX, but on the interwebs as a whole. (And like everyone else here, I do not say that lightly!)
The Authorial wizardary required to lead ones audience so effortlessly through the emotional ups and downs pertaining to the sexualization of a child, and the clarity in which you articulate your inner-most thoughts. The no-holds barred honesty you utilized in assessing your traumatic, yet ever so sensual experiences combine near seamlessly to present a work both`Smacking` with Authorial credibility (A credibility way too often substituted nowadays in favor of some illustrious imaginings, or even the sheer impatience of the Author ), and yet heavy still in ``Pulling-power``or fapworthiness. I better let you go, I`m blabbering too much! just wanted to say for myself, what everyones been saying for months... Damn good job Gurl, and do keep up the good work. You are truly literary Ninja! HAI!!:rose::rose:

 

Amazing.....by far one of the best stories on here

 

very hot

very hot one remeinds me of my past , having given enjoyment to many sweet soft young fresh smooth smart little cute tight tiny virgin pusssies

pussies interested PM me or gmail: angeluwish

 

I actually read the whole story in two days. If it wasn't for this story I saw on here then I'd probably never came back..

I can't wait on the next part, that will come, I hope.

 

More, please..

 

Is there

Bella

When or if will you be posting more of your story? I have been following it from the first and as I have posted before it is great and the best I have ever read on this site or any other. Just want more of a well told story.

 

I'll always come back to read your story.

It seems like only yesterday that you e-mailed me that first chapter, and asked if I thought it was good enough to post.
Now with all the positive feedback you've gotten I'm sure that even you would have to admit that I was right, and that you do in fact have a talent for telling an emotionally engaging story.
Now I know that your natural modesty keeps you from tooting your own horn, so please, allow me..
TOOT-TOOT!

I hope that you're working on other things as well.
We wouldn't want talent like yours to go to waste.

 

So hot,please finish the story,xxx

 

very good story. looking forward to more.

 

SO good, wow

 

Bella. Love your story. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to the rest of it.

Nicko88

 

Bella hasn't been here for months.