I am currently trying to write my first erotic story.I have written the starting/intro/overall idea for seven stories. Please read through them and let me know which one you'd most like to see completed.

a) Flight 321 engines failed, and the altimeter began to spin, letting the captain know the ground was fast approaching.
"this is the Captain speaking, were going to crash!"
"yep" Dave agreed, unzipping and reaching into his pants "one last time"
(part 2 would include the easy blonde flight attendant)
(part 3 the Japanese twin flight attendants)
(part 4 his mother and sister seated next to him)

b) Soap splashed off John's K-car. John admired the shine of the custom name plate. Its gold letters shone like the brass work on a British tall ship. It had cost him 600 bucks but it was worth it. He wanted the world to know "Sandy" was more then just another K-car, she was special. He finished hosing her down, and carefully drove her into the garage, closing the door behind them.Exiting her, and gently closing her door, he walked to the front of the garage. running his hand along her red paint. "I love it when your freshly waxed" John gasped out. picking up the bucket of grease, he about to show sandy how much he truly loved her. "I think I'll start with your rear, today" he told her.

c) Huddling behind a bush Ann grew angry
"dam him, dam him, dam him!"
This is what I get for dating a coworkers, Ann thought to herself. She was a 24 year old, blonde veterinarian. She had being checking on a male gorilla after work hours. when he vengeful X locked her in its cage. Everything was going well so far, the 800 lb silverback gorilla was still sedated from her tests. but he'd be waking up soon, and they never woke up happy. She looked at the dart her X had shot into the gorilla before leaving. I wonder what that was full of. her face went pale, in small writing she could just make out "liquid Viagra". The silverbacks breaths increased, by the sounds of it he was about to wake up. By the looks of it he had morning wood, only it was far from morning.

d) Darcy checked her watch, it was just after five. Her husband of 8 years should be coming home soon with the lube. It had been almost a week since Darcy was shrunk by his strange ray gun accidentally. Although he worked tirelessly trying to reverse it, she still remain just over 16 inches tall. "I'll be gosh darned, if this will affect our marriage, I wouldn't want him seeking out other sources of sexual relief, plus his 5 inch cock will finally be enough to fill me..." she thought to herself "...maybe we won't need the lube after all" as her wetness soaked into her daughters Barbie’s panties.

e) Greg stuck his hands in his pockets and waited. The revolving doors of the eating disorder clinic swung round, as yet another model checked in. he wondered if any of the girls were desperate enough to fall for his "all protein diet". Adjusting his underwear he set off to find out.

f) it had been years since he found himself back in his own bed. Billy-bob sat on his pouch, cringing at the memory. He had been checking on the cattle fence on the north side of his ranch. When a beam of blue light seemed to pull him into the sky.Many month of strange sexual testing ensued, mostly involving anal probs.
"huuuwiiiiieeee" Cried Billy-bob as an Alien spacecraft came crashing down to into his barn. Getting up from his rocking chair, he spat out the last of the tobacco and checked that his double barrel shotgun was loaded. Although Billy-bob was not very well edu-ma-cated, he had some "scientific" experiments of his own to perform on these aliens.

g) The sun had just finished setting. Shelia’s coffin lid slid open, she headed straight to the washroom. Taking out her makeup bag, she immediately applied a thick coat of foundation to cover up her paleness. To add some life to her face she used lots of blush. She did not have many eye brow hairs remaining, so she highlighted those an eyebrow pencil. Although it was hard to do makeup without a reflection. She was sure after hundreds of years of experience her face looked flawless. She headed out into the night. She figured she'd check out the Glue Factory a new club in town. The music blasted away as she stepped out onto the dance floor. It didn't take her moves long to attract a mate over. She started to warm him up, by grinding her cold body against him. When, his little friend came out to play she yelled into his ear lets get out of here. She walked with a seductive swagger that seem to promise, her more then eager followers the best head of his life. Little did he know, it would be the toothiest back alley blowjob he'd ever receive.

Xgamer

 

Story C sounds like a good start.

 

oo thanks! hehe feedback is allway welcome !


Xgamer

 

hmmm, id go w/ c or g

 

definately.... C

 

i think b and c

 

f or d because I like weird stuff. XG do you think EYE AM WEIRD TOO?:rose:

 

I liked E..

 

purr glad to see.. you used your first and only post on me ty, you are to kind...

I wonder who you really are...

No your not weird and thank you ZY..
I'll talk about the stories in a few days... give me handful of favs the inside scoop

Xgamer

 

me = my
favs= fans

Xgamer

 

i say d maybe c

 

I dont like any of them...

 

thanks for the the bump, my stories.. are.. and aquired taste...

 

Are the Japanese twins lesbians? If not..C

 

its accually a joke dude.. the plane is crashing... how the fuck would he have time... to..
nevermind.. people just don't get me..

Xgamer

 

I got that, the plane is going down in the first story, how can there be parts afterwards..but..japanese lesbian twins :mrgreen:

 

Hell yeah.. well I guess it could crash on a tropical island... and only females survive... now were talking... and theres only this strange new tropical fruit... to eat.. and what it does is make em horny as fuck... yeah yeah! this is gold! okay.. there twins.. but not identical... like the swedish ones(who are also on this island with him)

Xgamer

 

Dude..an island of only chicks eating fruits that make them horny beyond their comprehension..I'd so read that. It should be turned into a movie too..with asians !

 

I think I would like G the best as far as a sex story goes. I don’t think I would enjoy B as a sex story per say, but after reading the intro I know I don’t have the willpower not to read the whole thing if you wrote it. I think that’s a good thing.

 

A very...............slow..........crash?
A very..................quick..............shoot and recover?
A very.....................alien....................from story F?

I'm sold