Styxx

Just finished reading "The babysitter came too" again. http://stories.xnxx.com/story/12884/The_Babysitter_came_too
Loved it again, love it still, and for the record, I only found one typo. You should keep writing forever.

 

Thanks again Don

I can't think why he would have left such a message. It is possible that someone used his handle. Most of the authors on here are supportive and a thread such as this just goes to demonstrate ecactly that.

Cheers.

PS, I have enjoyed phrenetic Ice's work as well as the author. For pure stroke stuff, scouting4girls is hard to beat and shaggybob5 constructs some very good stories that carry a very good average.

 

More creditable authors

Wantsomefun has a series well worth reading. "Girls at the store" has some interesting scenarios.

El Hanes is worth a read. has a couple of series and recommend Maeghan Wrist series.

Styxx

 

i believe it is possible to type anyname into the username box for leaving an 'anonymous' comment when someone is not logged in. so it may just have been a poser who dislikes you and fbailey

on another note, I very much agree on el hanes. just wish he would put out another story soon. also another, he's only released one two part story, but 123FakeStreet is very good.

 

nice

 

According to the authors listing on XNXX stories, el hanes has posted 45 stories. Check out the listing at: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile63204/el_hanes. Looks interesting, but no stories since Aug. 08. Maybe another who gave up.

 

That's the problem...

Without encouragement, Authors will move on to other sites where they can publish their stories and get regular feed back. I publish on several sites including storiesonline. I find the feeback from there is rather more encouraging and engaging.

 

Sorry it took so long to reply, but I have been deeply involved in the e.l. hanes stories. What an imaginative writer. A great loss to us all that he was not encouraged to continue writing on this site. Same story, different writer. Happens to too many. That's why I am trying so earnestly to encourage writers on this site to continue. Even the mediocre writers will improve and become a point of great interest to someone. If the writer quits, no improvement or interest is possible. It behooves us all to do the same.

 

Thanks

You are to be applauded for the effort and I am sure many of the writers on here appreciate it. I do.

 

intresting.

You know, I am sort of new but I have writen two stories called Our Secret. the problem I had was not so much that there was negitive feedback, deserved or not, but that there was a suprising lack of feedback. The comments I got where good but felt that the lack of response made it difficult to keep writing.

anyhow, I posteded both stories on one thread called Our Secret. I try and post some when read, which I admit I dont do as much as I write. I would have to agree with the list though as they are the better authors I have seen on here when I do read.

 

Like I said in an earlier posting, I normally don't care for reading stories on a Forum thread. Mostly I concentrate on those that are posted on the Stories side of XNXX. I will try to find your thread and check it out, but whatever you do, don't be discouraged by lack of response. Keep writing. Thanks.

 

Dear fantasyra

There is no such thing as a better author. Every one of us has an imagination that is different, not better or worse, just different. There are hundreds of readers to each author and what appeals to one, is really not appreciated by the next. The reader is just as different.

Some writers have a greater lexicon than others, some are better at sentence structure and some are way better with puncuation than I am, but every author has a value and is a part of the whole that is XNXX.

Keep it up and good luck.

 

Couldn't have said it better myself. What a nice way to explain things to a young (starting up) writer. Thanks. By the way, your puncuation is fine.

 

Mark Twayn

Must read: everyone reading this must absolutely read Mark Twayn's latest story http://stories.xnxx.com/story/17404/Adventure_in_Paradise.

Great read - lots of love, lots of sex, one of the very best I've ever read.

 

Doesn't surprise that I didn't make your list. Story of my life!

Has even ONE person thanked me for getting the edit time changed to 10mins from 5mins thanks to Prince LeMark?

I am not bitching and moaning about it, just expected it.

 

Cheers

I work hard enough at it and still get the green wavy lines all over the place. I think I must have forgotten the rules of English Comprehension, or never learned them in the first place. So frustrating when you write a line only to see the green promt telling you the sentence is not right and you haven't the first idea why it isn't.

 

Oh yes!

Mark Twayn's latest is very entertaining, well worth a read.

 

I have the same problem

TO STYXX: I feel your frustration when your computer tells you you have written something incorrectly. I use Microsoft Word and I've been told that many people remove the Office Assistant because it is so often wrong. I find the assistant very useful, but I often choose to ignore its advice.

TO DON: Thanks for keeping this tread alive. You seem to be one of the most informed, well-read sex story readers I've ever known. I think its great how you encourage writers to NOT GIVE UP! Thanks...

 

Read my stories.. they are excellent

 

TO STYXX: Your punctuation is better than my spelling.

TO JACKASSTALES: Thanks for your comments - you are very kind.