1. RelentlessOblivion

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    Author's Note: This is the first story I've written so constructive feedback is encouraged and appreciated. If I get a strong response I may turn this into a series.

    Introduction
    Casey has felt this way for some time now and tonight she makes her move.
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    Melissa and Casey had been best friends since kindergarten. They went to the same primary and high schools, slept over each others houses, talked for hours on the phone, and even wound up room mates at university.

    When Melissa was freaking out about the stress of final exams Casey knew exactly what to say. When Casey needed to vent about how unfair her parents were being grounding her for flunking Maths Melissa was the first person she'd call. Melissa's first boyfriend she told Casey before anyone else, and Casey promptly told her he was a jerk (she was right too). Most importantly for Casey though; Melissa was the first person she came out to, the most understanding, and the most helpful.

    Now their studies were over, the two best friends had somehow managed to land jobs at the same law firm and decided to rent a two bedroom apartment together. It was close to the firm which woulod cut travel time, meant they could chat and hang out without breaking the bank with phone bills, avoided the stress and awkwardness of renting with someone new, and saved each of them the struggle and loneliness of living alone. The girls had an official housewarming party in a couple weeks but to celebrate their good fortunes planned to share an expensive bottle of wine, order some pizza, and watch an episode or two of The Office, pretty much the only TV show or movie they could both agree on.

    Melissa, 24 and the older of the two, was a fan of classic horror films. She could spend hours watching the greats like Nosferatu or Alien. She had long black hair, stood 5'10", wore dark clothes with a touch of goth about them, and adored heavy metal. She was usually a bit flirtatious and very energetic. One sure fire way to earn her wrath though was by calling her goth. Just suggesting the idea would earn you the famous Melissa death stare.

    Casey, on the other hand, liked rom-coms, pixar movies, and docos. She was 23, had shortish red hair and generally wore slightly revealing outfits. She liked to show a touch of cleavage and anything that showed off her cute butt. Quick witted and with a wicked sense of humour it could be difficult to talk seriously with her at times.

    Casey was excited about tonight. No dorm mates for the first time in forever (they'd moved everything but their beds the previous afternoon), no friends popping by unannounced. no interruptions. She was a little nervous though. She knew, or thought she knew at least, Melissa was bisexual (Melissa would call herself bi-curious if anything). Casey hoped if it went badly they could stay friends. No, she wouldn't think like that, everything would be fine. If Melissa wasn't interested their bond was strong enough to survive anyway.

    Melissa was a little intrigued. Something seemed different about Casey today. She was much more shy then usual and missed the chance at some one liners she normally would have nailed without batting an eye. It was as if she was distracted by something. Melissa had an inkling Casey may have a thing for her which was fine. She was curious after all but if it was true how would she react? Melissa decided to leave it. If things went there she'd make up her mind in the moment not beforehand. Either way she'd still be Casey's best friend.

    7:30 finally rolled around, graduation ceremonies were done with and the girls parents had even done them a favour moving the beds for them while they got ready. They'd hung around chatting with friends and their family and now finally could go to their new home. ?Hey Mel you sure 1 bottle is enough? I mean we just graduated and I KNOW how much you can drink when it's time to let your hair down" Casey said. "Don't worry I'm not in that mood tonight Kay I just want to relax tonight" Casey was having second thoughts now. Would Mel reject her? Would more alcohol have made her act differently? Should she just drop the idea? No she liked Mel, really liked her, and Casey had known for too long not to take this chance. Who knew when the next good opportunity might be? There was only a short window before they started at the law firm and that would make things even tougher. It was difficult enough keeping up with studies let alone all the duties they'd have at the busiest firm in town. She had to do this. Tonight. Casey swallowed hard, her resolve renewed. "Oh cool so this time I won't have to help you into your bed?" "Well if you really want to..." they both giggled and to Mel it seemed the old Casey was back.

    "Well that was quick" Kay said hearing a knock at the door. "Yeah I ordered the pizza while we were in the car. I'm starving and couldn't stand a long wait." "Oh? and you didn't even ask me what I wanted? Nice to know you're the boss now." "Well I did graduate before you..." "By what a minute?" "...besides you always say the same thing something spicy like you." They giggled again as Casey lightly tossed a cushion at Mel.

    Kay got a couple of plates and poured each of them a second glass of wine while Mel payed for the pizzas and brought them inside. "Now who's being bossy? Maybe I didn't want another wine huh?" Mel jokingly said. "Who even said it was for you? Maybe it's so good I want two glasses to myself." giggled Casey.

    An hour later, part way through a second episode of The Office (and most of the way through the wine) Casey saw her change. Mel had shuffled closer to her and turned her head about to speak. Before she could Casey moved in and passionately kissed her. Mel returned the kiss for a few moments before breaking it. "Kay? Kay what was that?" Mel said slightly shocked but mostly excited. "Mel I like you a lot. I've felt it for a while now and I...I had to take a chance I'..." "Kay it's fine, no really". said Mel as she hugged her friend tightly. "Actually it's more then fine that kiss was fucking hot. Better then most of the guys I've been with." "Really? You're not upset or anything I...I just thought..." "Oh sweetie I was just surprised is all. I'm actually kind of curious about it. Shh if it'll make you feel better..." Mel trailed off as she went in for the kiss. This time there was no hesitation the two hugged tighter and held the kiss for what seemed like hours.

    "Mmm Mel you're a great kisser you know?" "Th-thanks Kay oh and you ARE the best kisser I've had...wow". "So umm do you want to leave it there or go for this properly Mel?" "Oh what the hell I need to get off somehow". Mel said pausing the DVD "Might want to switch that off babe I don't think we'll need any more entertainment tonight." "Err ok Kay give me a sec." Mel surprised herself reacting like she did. Was she really going to go through with this? What would it mean if she did. What if she backed out? She decided nothing mattered at this point, nothing but satisfying her curiousity, her needs.

    "Oh hang on Kay which bed should we use?" "Ummmm is your's ok? It's way more comfy". "Absolutely" said Mel now even more excited about what was to come...

    To Be Continued
     
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  2. clarise

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    we need another chapter write away!!!! So sweet when puppylove turns to the real thing!!!!
     
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  3. RelentlessOblivion

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    I think I'll re-write and re-post this one first after getting some valuable feedback first. Sadly I won't have a chance to do any more writing for around a fortnight.
     
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    whatever i don't see nuthin to improve but I'm not l'autour incroyable
     
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  5. RelentlessOblivion

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    Well thank you for the kind comment.
     
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    sorry I'm just not much of a critic. I write sex stories for forest creatures. and deer expecially.
     
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  7. RelentlessOblivion

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    Haha well that's creative
     
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    (shruggy)

    jusst meating a need.

    i'm always suprised how many peoples around here are deer.
     
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    Well done, I can't find anything to improve on but I'm just a simple fellow. Can't wait for the next installment in line
     
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    Thank you for the positive feedback. I'll be continuing the story after I get back from a short vacation. Excited to get cracking on part 2.
     
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    i liked it. i would read a part 2.
     
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    HI XXX
     
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    The story good
     
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    Waiting for the good part.
     
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  15. RelentlessOblivion

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    Re-writing that part is taking longer then I hoped, life keeps getting in the way, hopefully when it's done part ii will be worth the wait.
     
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    Be waiting !!!
     
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    I ADVICE TO DRINK THERI DAILY PROTEINE
     
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      I advise you to turn caps lock off, and spell words correctly. Using the right words is also recommended.
       
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  18. Josef.K.

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    A Gr8 lead up to what is going to be described in graphic detail in subsequent chapters.

    The problem is reading your text in this full-screen format. Is it possible to post in the format used in the "Sex Stories" part of this site?
    Many thanks
     
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      I thought I had. Guess not, I'll see if I can figure that out. Thanks.
       
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