OK so I've had a think about this one and it's my winner. I really liked that first one but this is better- even though that one is still bloody good and whoever wrote it is entitled to swagger round the place doing Hemingway impressions and drinking too much for at least eleven minutes- ten isn't enough.

Just gotta find a third- as they say in the swingers' club - apparently

 

What's a bitch is that no one is reading these great stories. People worked hard to give us something to enjoy. Read and vote!

 

I thoroughly enjoyed the story it was well executed and easy to read with a good flow. The writing was very descriptive and I didn't notice any errors, if there were my interest in the story masked them.

It was a great concept and I recognised it as almost mirroring a real life tale of love and murder of a wife on her honeymoon.

I would have loved to have known what and circumstances that led to Jillian being imprisoned. I would not be happy if my significant other couldn't tell me apart from someone else. Even twins aren't that exact in every detail and no two people kiss or have sex in exactly the same way. No I think if he wasn't locked up I may have killed him for that fact!

I loved that they were both scheming rotters who got their just desserts and I thought the final twist at the end was great and as I said I really enjoyed reading it, we'll done.

Actually I'd have loved it to have been a bit more detailed, more about whether he did notice any differences, what he thought about her bitchy episodes etc and as i said, more on the sisters before the beginning.

This was one very enjoyable read, very good writing.

Good luck with your writing and on the comp. Luvs xx

 

Brilliant, the only thing I can say is "Why isn't there more?!"

 

Welcome back! I wondered what happened to you two. We need more of this kind of story on the site. Excellent job.

Now that you ARE back, write some more!