Help from a good writter is needed
:arrow: Like the tittle says I am looking for a good serious writter interested in helping me. This happens because I really dont have much exp. in writtin stories,my english is not very good (is not my 1st lenguaje), and somehow I am having some trouble in developing my stories. Because of this I have constant repetitions of words, lack of details (a crucial part in making a good story!), small or 'not so good' descriptions of the situations feelings etc; and last but not least...grammatical errors :? which i know that readers are very rough when it comes to that!hehe
:arrow: Someone important suggested me to kept writting and then asked someone to edit it.That is a great idea indeed but I feel more comfortable if someone could help me on my first story. Yes only on my first story (or maybe on my second too), eventually I need to learn how to write.
:arrow: :arrow: (If someone accepts) the story will be posted under my nick (since it is my idea) but a big note will be put at the start of the story and at the intruduction!.
:arrow: The categories in which this story may be are: (!) 'Young' (the girl should be atleast 16)
(!) 'Fiction'
(!) a lil' 'Incest' (the characters are cousins)
(!) maybe 'Blowjob' because SHE gives him some nice oral pleasure!
(!)and a little of 'Romance'
:arrow: We should communicate via PM
:arrow: :arrow: I think thats all I have to say for the moment any questions etc feel free on pming me.
:arrow: -HappyText

 

im not much of a writer but if u send me ur drafts ill read them, edit them and give u back some feedback

 

:arrow: ok. someone else?

 

wait do you want someone to co write or just edit, give you pointers things like that?

 

co write

 

well ive never written one of these kinda of stories before but i am a damn good writer so ill be willing to help you

 

:arrow: good then I should PM you with some of the ideas etc to see if you accept

 

Off the subject for a sec . . . baller, why haven't you submitted any stories?

 

i dont have any good ideas plus i dont know if theyd be any good theres a big difference between writing about sports and wirting about sex im guessing

 

Ah, okay.

 

ya know what, what the hell ill write one

 

Good for you!

 

okay same question to you Rain how come you haven't written any?

 

Okay I figured I would shamelessly self promote myself in here since I first said I was writing a story in this thread

Check mine out it's called

"Sometimes Dreams Really Can Come True"

 

Simple...it's hard. lol
I'm trying, I just don't like anything that I've written.

 

You know, Rain, Virgil wanted to burn The Aeneid. Go ahead, take the plunge.

 

Yeah writing is hard just keep trying and I'm sure you will do well.

 

Well maybe I'm not the one to be passing advice, because my stories don't get much attention but write the whole story first, then go back and reread it to see if it makes you horny! If it does, then go back through, and correct grammer, spelling Ect.

Doc.

 

Great story!!!
Doc.

 

No one can help you on the first copy or it is not your story..