Weren't you before?

 

again u leave me waiting for the next post

 

morrreeeeee

 

Please more. great story

 

when can we get the next part ?

 

Pretty soon, probably. In the next couple days. Not a lot of time for writing, have I...had, but when I find some time, writing the next part will fill it.

 

yay

 

Next few days was a bit off. It'll be a minute before the next part is up because, frankly, I got NOTHIN'! I have no idea what to do next, I don't know what to do about Eric and Cammy's newfound fondness and I don't know what to do about Rose finding out about it. The writer in me says she'll be mad while the guy who wants to write a good sex story wants her to say she doesn't care if he's a virgin when they eventually have sex, and both make good points.

Anyway, please wait a little longer, and sorry for the delays. I might write a one-shot or something to get my mind running again.

 

this could be a turning point for if you want to fork the story. one going with mad and one going with not caring and they could both lead up to individual things. she could also not mind and they could just share him ; )

 

I like the way you write, not too detailed. The part i'm less happy about is the injection of that semen. It's just not my fetisch.

 

Oh. My. God.

I just read this whole thing tonight, and I love it!

Write more, please!!

Also, can you give Eric a penis size? It makes the story a lot hotter for me for some reason.

 

I've still got nothing in mind, so I'll just do what I usually do in this situation: start typing and see what ends up on the screen.
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I caught my breath and stood up, catching my pants as they started to fall. I'd just kind of had sex, I wasn't paying attention to details like that.

Oh, my God. I'd just had sex, in a way. I cheated on Rose!

"Cammy, uh...listen, about what just happened...," I started. Cammy turned back with two different emotions surrounding her nose.
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What have I done? Why did I just do such a horrible thing to maybe the best friend I've ever had? And why, for some dick? I'm a terrible person. What will I do about Rose? Just thinking about her and her friendly eyes and adorable sweetness makes me sick. With guilt, not like...yeah. God, I feel like...no, I am crying!

Eric wants to talk to me about this, but I don't want him to feel more guilty than he already does. His voice is hesitant and shaking, and if he sees me like this I don't know what'll happen. I turn my headback with a little smile and hope he looks at my ass instead of my eyes. He doesn't.

"What's up? If you're thinking about doing it again, forget it" I tell him. Not even a smirk.

"No, I'm not. I'm thinking about what to do about this with Rose."

"Oh." I turned all the way around and lost the smile. "Well, she..she wouldn't have to know." He looked at me like I was the only one to blame. "No, I mean, uh..." I can't look at him anymore! Whenever I do, I think about how handsome he is and the temptation wells up. "You're right. She has to know what happened. God, she's going to hate me!"
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I looked away from Cammy. Crying women always make me feel bad and Cammy was crying harder than most. As much as someone who thought they were about to lose someone they loved and knew it was their own fault. I had thought for a while now that Cammy wasn't satisfied with being Rose's friend, but the way she cried without even trying to get control of herself. I sighed and tried desperately to make myself not do this.

"it was my fault. when she asks, you didn't do anything."

"What? Eric, no, you can't. It would kill her to think that about you."

"Look, she can either hate both of us or just me, and if you can still make her happy then.." I swallowed hard and thought for some reason I could make myself not cry by blinking a lot. "..thats what i'll do."

And with that, I lost my first love. But I had saved another, and at least this one wouldn't be half-stupid.
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I wonder where Eric and Cammy are. My watch says its only been a few minutes since they left, but it feels like something happened. Maybe I just worry too much. But its not like its weird to worry about your good friend and the guy you love, is it? I sit down under a tree and look up at the sky through the branches. The gentle sound of the lake make me smile as I remember Eric telling me about how he swam it to get here. Nobody in my school can say that about their guys. The closest I've heard was a guy promising to score his girl a touchdown. I know I shouldn't laugh that the next day I heard he didn't, but he was so sure of himself.

Eric was different, though. I didn't doubt him at all when he said he would come, but I was still so happy to see him again. Just remembering being with him that night makes me feel warm, like being wrapped in a blanket and watching a blizzard through the window. I wish he would come back. Sitting here with the cookies mom sent with he and Cammy sounds so nice.

Oh, no, I forgot about Cammy! I'm such a horrible friend.

Considering that we'd met when she basically molested me, I've really grown to like her. She acts a little more tomboyish than I do, but I can tell that deep down, we're a lot alike. I don't think she lives in the same town as me, so I should get her e-mail. What am I thinking? E-mail? A friend like her should be spoken to over the phone if not in person. I really am a bad friend!

I stood back up so fast, I got a little dizzy when those two came back to where I was.

"Hi! Did everything go alright? Did you get the box? Tell me allabout it, it sounds exciting!" Neither of them said anything or looked me in the eyes. "What is it? If you couldn't get it, its okay! I'm sure I can get more." Still silent. "Did...did something happen?"

"yes."

"Oh, no! Neither of you are hurt, are you!?"

"please, don't," Eric said, sounding strangely like he was holding back laughter. "don't be so concerned about me."

"Why not? Cammy, is he alright?" She started to say something a few times, but then just hung her head. This was getting scary! Why won't they tell me what's wrong? Something obviously is, why can't I know?

"i..," Eric said. "when we were going after the box, we had to go by the head counselor's cabin and she...she was with a girl. they were having sex, and Cammy and i stopped to see what was going on. we couldn't tell what was going on for a while and by the time we did, we just...we just kept watching it. i've never seen anything like that and i got excited. i...oh,god, i'm sorry, Rose, i...touched Cammy. more than i should have."

This couldn't be true. Not Eric. Not with Cammy...

I tried to play it off even though I didn't think he was joking. "Yeah, sure you did. And I thought daddy was a good actor. Even he can't cry on cue."

"i'm telling you the truth. i touched Cammy. the whole thing was my fault, and if you want me to leave the girls' camp, i'll understand. i gave in to my own stupid fucking horniness. if i can't even stop myself from doing that, what good am i? not good enough for you, i know that."

I...
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He's actually doing it. He's taking the blame for my stupid mistake. Part of me is screaming for me to tell the truth, but the rest of me wants to let him do it. Like he said, she'll hate the one at fault and if he's willing to be that person, why shouldn't I let him be? I can console Rose for him. Maybe I can even convince her to be happy with someone else. Someone like...

What's wrong with me!? He's throwing away the best girl I've ever known and all I can think about is myself. I have to tell Rose the truth. I can't let Eric take the blame for this. He loves her! She loves him.

But I don't want to lose her.
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I think this will be the point where the story ends. Splits into ends, I mean. For the ends, I'm going to write special one or two-shot stories in which Cammy does come clean with Rose and in which she doesn't, with a different outcome for each. So, the next post here will probably be something with Alison and Ms. Melstrom and then links to the different endings.

Sorry it was such a downer, but I didn't have any inspiration for a sex scene and if I put one in, it would destroy the atmosphere of the main story. I will give Eric a penis size in the option where he ends up with Rose. But it just didn't see to fit into the story this time.

 

great stroy

 

Awesome job.

I want Rose to end up with Eric.

 

good stuff man

 

Very good storie. Can not wait to see how it goes

 

This is the first story I read in the forum. It is by far the best, and I can't wait to read the rest. Take your time and let it come to you. Thanks for the great read.

 

Thank you.

Wait. Its the first AND best? Maybe I've finally overcome all that competition from Nothing. In your face, Not Reading XNXX's Stories!

 

Wonderful story, I love it!

 

i like.