*checks to see if his posts are invisible*

 

I don't think there's a resubmitting an old story rule, though it's up to Horse to decide.

 

Pshaw, if there's no rule against submitting an old story, I've got five I could submit right out of the gate

 

Do you have any idea how interesting you just became? Not that you weren't before, but seriously? I think you have some very interesting stories to tell.

 

From what I hear, you spin a good yarn

 

With horse and eljs driving people away I can see this is going to be a real sleeper. No need for me to write "My First Time Chewing Gum On An Elevator" or "My First Time Beating A Stupid Horse" or "My First Run-In With An Ignorant Whore And Her Socks" stories. Excuse me.

 

And I think my Kindle just cratered.... Stupid Amazon...

 

Drive you away? My dear girl, I believe I asked for links to your stories to see just what we're up against. Don't you want to dazzle us with your pearls of wisdom? Don't you want to show us how good erotica is really written? Well?

 

At first, I just wanted to laugh at you and click away. Maybe I should have.

The last thing I believe Horse and ejls want to do is to drive people away. I'm completely stumped as to why you would think otherwise.

Personally, I think you have the beginnings of three interesting stories. Gum in the elevator? Maybe some really hot guy asks you for a piece. Maybe you give him a piece of ass. Beating a stupid horse? Bestiality and cruelty tags, if you want to go that way. Maybe a really kinky costume party. Ignorant whore and her socks? Wait, let me think. You could always do a story about a nymphomaniac with a hosiery fetish.

See? This can be fun if you let it. Now get busy with your writing.

 

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/23375/Aftermath
There you go Aftermath ....

 

Fucking over-achiever. :excited: How many more do you have up your sleeve? I have a few good ideas myself, and one story almost done (at least in rough form).

 

I think I wrote that one for CAW2... or 3? not sure it was an Ellen story... But if you really want me to pull out some stops........

 

Little teaser of something else I'm working on







“How is the progress coming with the new department?” Miranda asked
“I have narrowed it down to four candidates” Gabriella replied “Another day or so of scrutiny and we should have it”
Gabriella left the office closing the door Dream Corp was a "woman power" corporation. That is to say that all the executives were not only female but also quite condescending toward men. Gabriella smiled to herself well I’ll soon change that she said to herself. Taking the elevator to the first floor.

She looked at the list of candidates on her clipboard, and walked into the viewing room next door to the interview room. There were several other monitors. That monitored other rooms. There was no doubt that the four candidates were quite qualified. There was of course one that she favored above the others and if everything worked out she would select him. His name was Glenn Jameson and he was twenty just out of school, attractive enough for her purposes and would be an ideal test subject.

Glenn Jameson sat down at the clinic; this was the last phase to getting this job. He really hadn’t expected to get it but who was he to complain if they actually let him have this job, it was a dream job really. Excellent salary and benefits he could really use it his wife was barely making ends meet working at Wendy’s as a cashier, and his sister in law was living with them and that really wasn’t making things any better. They finally called his name and he was taken to an exam room. They gave him a flu shot and told him to go home and he could expect a call in a few days.

Gabriella looked up from the video of the four exams Glenn really was the best choice, and with the injection he would be perfect. She called the Doctor who had designed the cocktail. How long before it starts working she asked?
“Twenty four hours give or take.”
“And the Data supporting this?”
“I’ll have it on your desk in the morning”
“What about plan B?”
“Plan B is ready”
“And it will be available also in the morning?”
“Yes, Miss Sanderson, I worry about skipping the testing process for Both experiments”
“I understand doctor”
“I don’t know that I can deal with the guilt if anything goes wrong”
“Doctor, you are absolved of any responsibility”
“But what if”
“Doctor what do you care your retiring to the Virgin Islands with enough money for the rest of your life”
“Yes Miss Sanderson.”
“Very well then Doctor, I expect to see your reports on my desk in the morning.

Glenn Finished His supper and went to bed with his wife Gloria her sister Regina was already asleep on the couch.
“Did you get it?” Gloria asked
“I still don’t know”
“Tell me what it pays again?”
“Its 90k a year plus benefits”
“God how I would love to move out of this dump, when will you know?”
“Your guess is as good as mine but I expect in the next couple of days they will call.”
“I’m so proud of you, you know.”
“Love you babe” he smiled and kissed her and she turned off the lights.

 

OK, CJ, you just proved it.

Every character you've introduced is at least 20, and the only male is married. I'm thinking this ain't a loss-of-virginity story. But it sounds good. Back to work!

 

This one?
“Welcome to Mountain Valley School.” The woman in the pinstriped skirt and jacket said. She led Jessica from the car to the entrance of the school. “As you are not familiar with the facilities we will get you all checked in and then we will assign you one of our older students to guide you around.”

“uh okay” Jessica said.

“But first you need to go through processing and get your uniform and update your shots.”

“Okay” Jessica said hesitantly.

The woman led Jessica into the large Brick building, Jessica was utterly amazed at the lack of anything nearby, the lawn was well manicured but aside from the road that the car that dropped her off and was now winding off into the trees. She quickened her steps to keep up with the well-dressed woman. A few moments later she found herself in a tidy looking nursing station. “This is where I leave you Jessica I have to get back to my duties, Nurse Brightman will take care of you for the time being until your assigned a place to stay.

“Hello Jessica” A perfectly manicured looking blonde woman beamed at her as she came around a partition. The woman’s long legs took Jessica by surprise she was wearing what had to be five inch stiletto heels. As her eyes drifted up Nurse Brightman’s body she was caught by her generous bust accented by her abundant cleavage. A small waist and her hips were only just wider than her shoulders. Here blue eyes inspected Jessica. “Now if you’ll disrobe we’ll get started”

“I.. What?” Jessica blinked in a sense of disbelief.

“Now come on, off with your clothes” Jessica slowly obeyed until she was standing naked in front of this gorgeous woman. “Right, start with this” she pressed a button and a section of the floor retracted revealing a pool “step into the pool all the way up to your neck please” Jessica slid into the pool of what was obviously not water it was more like a thin gel. She stood in it as the fluid rose to her neck, she had a tingling sensation everywhere the fluid touched her skin. Nurse Brightman pressed another button and some tiny lights flashed. “Excellent you can get out now” she said holding out a towel. Stepping out and dripping onto the floor the Nurse quickly injected her with an air-hypo. She placed her hand on the back of Jessica’s neck and then hit the other side with another hypo. Then there were two shots in each cheek, it barely hurt and Jessica was surprised at that. She was then given a yellow smock to wear after Nurse Brightman finished her examination. Nurse Brightman then led her to what she described as the dormitories and showed her, her room. She then led her down two flights of stairs to a cafeteria. Jessica ate quickly she had forgotten when the last time she ate and went back upstairs to her room. There were two single beds. She picked one and was asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow.

Jessica woke some time later she didn’t usually nap but she put it off to her day. She looked around the room, now there was a dresser with her name on it and another with the name Carrie, her roommate she thought. A few minutes later the door opened, and a girl wearing a blue mini skirt and a white half shirt walked in. “Hi um are you Carrie?”

“Oh you’re the new girl”

“Uh yeah I guess” Jessica Gawked as her roommate stripped down to a pair of cotton panties.

[FONT=&quot]The large round globes of her breasts bounced with every step. Carries coin sized areolas were dark in contrast with her olive complected skin, and the nipples were like long pencil erasers. Carrie glanced at Jessica, “you like my breasts?”[/FONT]

 

Or this one???

Kelly didn’t know how it all happened she had always been into the occult and magic and stuff like that it was just what she thought was cool. She had been reading book after book any book that she could get her hands on making her pretty much an expert on all things Magical, her parents thought it was an amusing hobby so long as she didn’t start sacrificing goats or anything like that. She was out riding her bike just enjoying the air when suddenly she was stopped by; two boys, and a girl, apparently laying in wait.

“You have to pay the toll” the girl said.

“Yeah” the two boys chorused.

“What toll?” Kelly asked

“The toll for using the road” the girl responded

“Its ten dollars” the boy said.

“I haven’t got ten dollars”

“Well then you’re our prisoner”

“What?” The two boys wrestled me off my bike and hauled me off the road through some brush. She was curious these were of course kids that she went to school with she never saw them out of school and didn’t really socialize with them but why not play their little game. The one girl and the boy took her two what could be only called a tree fort it was only about two feet off the ground and built on the trunk of a tree that someone long ago had bent over. The other boy who’s name was Nathan went back for her bike. When he returned the three of them tied her hands up over her head on a beam. “What are you going to do to me” I asked

“Whatever we want,” said the girl.

“I want to see her boobs” the one named Nathan said.

“Come on Nathan really?” the girl asked

“Yeah Kendra I want to see them too”

“Samuel what is your fascination with boobs?”

“I don’t know I just like them” Samuel said

Kelly knew she was in trouble but she didn’t scream or anything, She just concentrated on both of the boys trying to push the idea of Kendra’s boobies into their head.

 

Maybe this one?


It was sort of a stroke of fate when my brother in law invited me to stay at his house. I was between places to stay. Not by choice mind but I hadn’t gotten evicted or anything the apartment complex that I was living in burned down, along with all my stuff. So I moved in with just the clothes on my back. Jake my brother in law was a good guy bit of a coke fiend but that was the way truck drivers were those days and he was away from home most of the time. I hadn’t seen my sister Lori in a few since I had left home after graduating high school. So when I pulled up in my car I found her sitting on the porch of a trailer in the middle of a trailer park. I went shopping and got some clothes and other items I needed and moved into their spare room. Lori at this time was in her mid thirties, I was a few years older than her just pushing 40. She had two beautiful daughters Lainy and Julie.

It was a few weeks before Jake went out on the road again. Lori decided that we should have a party about a week after that. Hell I wasn’t going to argue, so with beer in hand I manned the barbeque pit. The menu was mostly hamburgers and hot dogs for the kids, and some chicken and sausage for the adults. It was getting near dark when I was approached by two of the neighbor hood women. “So your Lori’s brother”
“Yeah that’s me”
“I’m Bridgett” a tall lean brunette said.
“and I’m Zoe” a thicker looking red head said.
“Hello” I said.
“Do you have any sausage for us?” Bridgett asked.
“Mmm I could use a nice piece of sausage” Zoe grinned.
Their entendre wasn’t lost on me but I thought it best to play it off and put a generous portion of sausage on each of their plates “There you are ladies”
Zoe picked up the thick piece of sausage between her fingers and brought the end to her lips and then slipped the whole 7” piece of meat between her lips and into her throat before bringing it out. She repeated her demonstration of how she wanted to blow me a few times before I said “I have to finish cooking first ladies”
“Mmmk we will be waiting” I Bridgett said.
It was dark and most of the kids were either in the living room playing video games or had gone home. Lainy was put in charge of watching the kids at the house and I was ushered over to another trailer across the drive. I walked in to see Lori sucking the business end of a bong. I was a little more than shocked but I went ahead and headed back into the kitchen. I walked in on Zoe and Bridgette and another woman taking hits of cocaine. Bridgette wiped her nose “oh Bill glad you could make it to the after party” she wrapped her arms around me and ground her hips against my leg. “Bill you know Zoe and this is Mary” she said indicating a svelte blonde.

 

All right, CJ, all right. I was kinda happy that I had two workable story ideas. Now you busted my balloon.

Sheesh.

 

You are a machine, CJ

 

Lol, I'm not even lookin' at his. I might actually submit something this time (not now that I've jinxed myself, I'm sure), so I don't want anything to influence me. I've got a good idea brewing and I'd like to see where it goes. If it falls flat, I'll stick to my first-time-sex-while-skydiving idea