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Can't wait to see how you tie Subjects 0 in with Broken Bliss.

 

New chapter... Kinda

Okay, so I just re-posted chapter 3 of Subjects 0, with edits. Hopefully this works out better, and there is no confusion on which chapter is which (At least, not after the admins delete the erroneous chapter 2. )

Chapter 4 might be up tonight, if I can find the time.

 

Subjects 0 - CH 4

As promised, and right before I go to bed, Chapter 4 is posted. This one has a bit more story development in it, so to make up for that (For those that read just for the sex), here is a new pic.

From left to right: Shanna, Amanda, and Jackie

 

i love ur storys mmm. u know my brother really fucked me when i was little

 

You write the best stories on the site

 

Thanks!

Thank you very much!

 

Sorry

I have been getting a lot of comments pointing out my misspelling of some words, grammar mistakes, and even just plain oopsies. I want to put out the best stories I can, so they will be coming out a bit slower. I do re-read every one before posting, but I don't always catch things. I am looking for an editor, to help me out. So, I am sorry for the slower pace, but bear with me, as I am not done writing.

Thank you.

 

I'd Like to Volunteer!

Hello Dark Brother, I'm Chris. I'd like to volunteer to be your editor. I am a "fan" of your work, so I beleive I can acuratly judge your writings, fix mistakes, and whatever else you want me to do, including finding images for you to post and match with your stories. If you'd like more information from me about this, email me at cm.computerwiz @hotmail.com
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awesome idea buddy, except for one thing. If you're going to be his editor, shouldn't you be able to spell and show correct grammar yourself? Mmhm, I thought so.

 

I may not be perfect at being gramically correct on forums and various other web sites as it's not as important in the slightest.

Also, I would probably be a better editor than someone, like, just as an example, you, because I don't judge and belittle others without a just cause.

 

Clarification

I guess I should clarify something on the Sister Stripping series. When I wrote chapter 4 I intended on that being the final chapter, so I wrote an ending to wrap it all up. After enough people requested I keep going, I relented and have written chapters 5 & 6. They take place before Amber's daughter is born. I DID make a mistake on the time frame of her pregnancy. For current purposes, consider her 7 months along.

 

All of your stories are good. Most people may not realize that when editing your own stories, you already know what it should say which makes it harder. The few errors there are don't make the stories worse. Keep up the good work.

 

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follow me,follow me, follow me,but dont lose your grip!!

 

How's the next segment coming along?

 

Still waiting on an editor. I have the chapter written (Subjects 0), but have been busy with work lately, & haven't had time to write more. Sorry, everyone.
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Serendipity

Ha ha. Right after I decide you all have waited long enough, I finally get an editor.

Anyway, Subjects 0 - CH 5 is now up. I hope you enjoy.

 

Latest story.

I was requested to write a fantasy for someone, so It should be up as soon as I can get my i-net working fast enough. I titled it: Earning the Afternoon.

Here are some pics of the Female character: Marion.

 

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