Very hot story. Can not wait for the next chaper. Keep up the good work.

 

rating. . .

how the fuck did my rating go down if everybody has given me good responses. Are their just some lame asses on here who will read the story and give you a bad rating because they aren't creative enough to write one. It's a story, not real life, it's imagination. If you dont like the story, then post a comment as to why so us writers can change things to make it better for everybody. I'm trying to break into the porn industry and i want to be a director so my best source of information is the people on here who are just as horny as i am. so fuck all of you who gave me bad rating and thank you to all of you who gave me a good rating and gave me advice and comments.

 

good story. keep it going

 

very interesting

 

Not everyone's gonna like your story, unfortunately. It's life

But I like your story ^_^ 5*.

Hope you update soon

 

Thanks again.

 

Grace at school . . .

The next day I knew exactly what I was ready for. I wanted my brother to go down on Grace, but I did not want him to make her cum. Actually I wanted him to make me cum. I was going to make Grace think we were doing my brother a favor and owning him but at the same time I was going to learn how to have a guy go down on me and learn at the same time how to go down on another girl. So during the day, Grace and I had discussed the blow job she had given my brother. Asked if my brother was disappointed that he didn't get to finish. I laughed and said yes he was heart broken. Even though he wasn't.

Then I set Grace up. "you know what, we've been pleasing my brother, how the hell is this fair to us. I thought the whole purpose of getting control of the boys was them satisfying us."

"You know what Kelly, your right, i'm tired of playing with your brothers cock. Even though it's a nice cock, and last night i masturbated thinking about fucking that cock, i wnat him to start pleasuring me. . . or you, just joking."

"so what do you have in mind? What do you want to make him do tonight?"

"well i don't know, maybe a massage, maybe a little fingering, or you know it's been a while, maybe i can make him go down on me."

We both sat there after that conversation pondering what was going to happen. I was so angry that she was the one that was going to get to play with my brother. But you know what, i can just set it up again. I can make him get her all wet and horny, and then figure out a way of getting her to go home. . . .

TO BE CONTINUED. . . THE WIFE IS HOME, WILL HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS LATER, SHE'S GOT DINNER

 

can't wait for it to continue!! Best story ever :excited:

 

Women who can figure them. Very good very good. Can't wait for more.

 

lol, what would your wife say if she saw you writing this?

https://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=78149 < i made my own version of this story for kelly, its not as good as yours though, much shorter

 

hopefully she would be understanding and supporting. im pretty sure he already said she knows he does this. if not, dump her ass and keep writing it! (j/k)
ummm even that little short was good. i'll be sure to make this thread a 5 again.

 

Continue ASAP

 

continued. . .

Just to put it out there, the wife knows that I write these stories, it's actually how i won her over in college. anyways, back to the story. . .

So i had made up my mind how i was going to get my fun and learn through this experience. After school was over, i met Grace at the front of the school. She was talking to some older boys, must have been seniors because I didn't recognize them. She introduced me to them and some of them made small talk with me but it was obvious that they were all interested in Grace (probably cause she was such a slut). I stood there and just watched them interact for a while before I told Grace I needed to get going. She shook her head and seperated herself from the boys and started walking along with me.

On the way home, i made small talk with her asking her what she was going to do with my brother. She made it simple, she said, "I'm just going to tease him a little and tell him that if he ever wants to fuck me, he has to do everything I say, and the first thing i want him to do is eat my pussy. and he's not allowed to move to the next level until i orgasm."

I was a little surprised at how she was going to be very forward with this and it was like she was taking a little bit of fun away from this. I was disappointed, but I would let her do her thing and I would make my way to join the fun when I deemed necessary.

. . . LATER IN THE AFTERNOON AFTER WE FINISHED OUR HOMEWORK. . .

"So grace, when are you planning on doing this?"

"well actually i was going to tell you to go downstairs and keep your mom busy for about 20 to 30 minutes. That should give me enough time to get him, and get this going, and possibly even orgasm if he's good at what he does."

"well you know he's never done that, he is only 12. your probably going to have to tell him how to do it."

"yeah i know, i'm good at that, don't worry about him, just keep your mom busy okay, now go, i'm getting horny just thinking about it and very eager."

"okay okay, i'm going, i'll see you in a little while."

After that, i went to my laptop and set it up to record again, of course it didn't look like anything just my screen saver. I went downstairs and sat at the end of the steps waiting to here her leave the room and go into my brothers room. this time though she stayed in my brothers room. I left the steps and started talking to my mom. For the next fifteen minutes me and my mom made small talk about school and how i was enjoying it and if i was going to join any sports teams. I asked about how her and dad were doing and if things were getting any better. She said she didn't want to talk about it. Things were goign fine and then she remembered something and asked me to go get something from her room.

I went upstairs and walked slowly and i was hoping my brothers room would not be closed. It wasn't, it was closed but not shut. I peeked through the little bit of door that was open and grace was definitely doing what she said she would do. They were on the bed, and grace was laying down and my brothers head was buried between her legs. her hands were on top of his head and she was whispering things to him. I quickly stopped because i started getting to aroused and headed to my mom's room to get her purse and then i went back downstairs.

As i was talking to my mom, she said the thing she was lookign for wasn't in her purse and that she was going to head upstairs and get it really quickly. I tried to stop her to tell her that i would go get it but i couldn't she just kept walking and said she'd take care of it. At that point my heart lept out of my chest, i was so scared. She was going to catch grace and brian. He was going to be in so much trouble and she was never goign to be allowed to come back over. i just stood there in the kitchen completely frozen and paralyzed. So many thoughts were running through my head.

A few seconds later, i heard a loud "oh my god". Then I heard brian's voice yell "mom". They had been caught. I was horrified but at the same time i was feeling a sense of relief. this would mean that grace would not be allowed to come over, which meant that if my brother was goign to have his sexual fixes, they would have to be with me after school. I smiled and was actually happy about the whole thing. It didn't go how i expected to go, but somehow I would turn this into my favor.

I ran upstairs and acted surprised about what all teh yelling was about. Mom quickly turned to me and said, "get grace out of here and send her home . . .and Grace, I will be calling your parents." Then she turend to Brian in a very stern voice, "young man go to your room right now and don't come out til I tell you to or til I come see you."

I did what my mom told me to. I walked Grace to teh door and told her everything would be fine and not to worry. I told her to stay calm and I woudl see her in school tomorrow. She smiled as if she didn't really care and left and went home.

I went back in and upstairs and my mom had already walked Brian to his room and shut the door and taken his laptop and PS3 away from him. She walked to me and asked, "tell me you didn't know anything about what was happening up here?" I quickly responded acting like I had no idea what she was talking about. She told me to go into my room and that she would call me down for dinner.

About an hour later, she called me down and Brian down. She told us to eat and then go back to our rooms. Dinner was very quiet and very strange. Nobody said a single world. I wasn't going to break the silence so i just ate dinner. When Brian finished, he took his dishes to the sink and then walked upstairs without saying anything. When i finished I did the same thing. I went to my mom and said, "please don't be too angry about whatever happen, he's only 12 and he's very impressionable and you don't want to mess up your good relationship with him." Then i kissed her on her forehead and went upstairs to my room and closed the door.

It was around 10 at night before my mom finally made it upstairs. She went straight to her room after she said good night to me. About half an hour later, i heard her door open and heard her go to Brian's room. She went in and was talking to him for a bit and then I heard him and her in the hallway. Then after a few seconds, the sounds were gone. I got up and looked in the hallway and nobody was there. I went back to bed. I started wondering if everything was okay. I laid there for about twenty minutes before I had to use the bathroom. I got up and very quietly hoping not to wake anybody I went into the hallway and went to the bathroom. When i came out, i saw my mom's door was slightly open and so was Brians. I went and looked inside Brian's room and his night light was on but he was not in bed. I then looked down the hallway to my mom's room. I knew my dad wasn't going to be home all week becuse he was gone. I figured maybe mom and Brian had patched things up and she didn't get upset at him and he was just talking to her.

I slowly walked over to her bedroom door hoping not to wake them just in case they were asleep. When I got to the door, i slowly opened it more so i could peek my head in and check on them. When i looked around the door, what I saw took the ground from under my feet away. It felt like De javu, only this time it wasn't Grace, it was my mom. Brian's head was again buried between a pair of legs, only this time they were moms. what the hell had happen. I stood there motionless, not being able to move. I couldn't even remember if i was breathing. All i saw was my mom laying there in bed, with her legs spread to the side. Brian was laying on the sheets with his face between her legs. My mom's eyes were closed and her right hand was on her breast caressing them. Her left hand was rubbing the back of Brian's head. I couldn't believe it. Even more, I couldn't believe I was still jealous. I stood there just staring.

I heard my mom whispering things to him every now and then. "Brian, do it a little slower, Brian, do it a little faster. Move your tongue up, or down. Move your tongue faster. Yes sweetie, that's better. Put more pressure on my clit sweetie." Just little directions were coming out of her mouth. Seeing her sit there enjoying her own son was shocking. I didn't know what to think other then how jealous I was. I couldn't beleive that my mom would be like this. I stood there feelign the wetness from my own pussy now dripping down my legs past teh opening in my boxers. i was soaked.

I continued to watch and just as I was getting ready to walk away, i heard my mom, "Brian, yes keep goign just like that, same speed and same pressure. I'm about to cum, please don't stop sweetie." I was going to leave but seeing my mom orgasm made me want to stay. I couldn't believe Brian had learned so quick, he was about to make a grown woman cum. I stood there and watched for about 30 seconds. That's when my mom put the pillow over her face and let out a somewhat loud moan into the pillow. She clinched her legs around Brian's head and after a few seconds she pushed his head away. Her body was shaking. She turned to the side facing away from teh door. her back was to me. Brian sat up and laid down behind her holding her.

I quickly rushed back to my room. I got into bed with the image of what I had just seen. I was shocked, turned on, curious, amazed, there was just so many emotions i was going through. Was Brian going to tell me about this at all. We'd see. That night I didn't have the energy to make myself cum. I was definitely horny, and soaking wet, my pussy was throbbing for some touching. But my mind was just in so much shock that I just couldn't do it. I laid there thinking for a while before i just fell asleep. . .

. . . TO BE CONTINUED. . . HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED THE LITTLE TWIST INTO THE STORY. . . I HAVEN'T FIGURED OUT WHERE I'M GOING TO GO FROM HERE, BUT MY WIFE IS GOIGN TO READ THIS TONIGHT AND MAYBE GIVE ME SOME ADVICE . . .

 

Interesting. Keep it cummin'

 

Nice twist.

 

hola

soy Miguel de Valencia

 

Hola que tal,soy Migue de Valencia

 

Hi

Great story, I love the latest twist!!

 

Very fucking hot man. Really very good.

 

Great story! Obviously she has to have sex with her brother and then her mother!