I just love this story, hope to read more that write.

 

great job!

 

Thanks Hank and Mike!

 

Wonderful story

HCB - great work.

 

My thoughts!

Hi Hcb, I have enjoyed reading this story! I liked the fact the Julie has someone like Brian, who she has known to trust and can feel comfortable being around. I like the fact that Brian is generally a good person, with a good heart, and care about others. The felt that the build up was excellent in this story, starting with Brian and Julie playing around in the pool. Brian pops Julie on the ass with the towel and she teasing him about kissing it better. I loved the fact that Brian learns that Julie is full of surprises and shares some of her sexual history with him. I also loved that Julie is the one that mostly leading the action and her curiously to go further with Brian sexually. The details of the characters and the actions between them were excellent. I thought the ending was nice because Brian and Julie get to see each other more often, leaving room for a side story or readers to imagine what to come in future.

 

Thank you Snow! Silent1 I really appreciate your comment. Its comments like that, that really make writters keep doing what they do! Thanks again!

 

Really enjoyed the story and the moral aspects that you didn't compromise with the story. Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to reading more of your stories. Again thanks for sharing your time and talent.

 

Thanks for taking the time to read my story, and giving me feedback on it. It means a lot to know people have enjoyed it.

 

Oh i like the story very much

 

thank u

 

Great story!

That was hot. good job.

 

Thanks but this story is is done, you can always read my other stories if you like.