For the most part very enjoyable stories. You are doing very well considering how English appears to to be your second language. It is much better writing than some folks who speak English as a first language.

Occasionally an episode seems a bit random and out of place (e.g. at Doctor's office or with women other than the daughters). A bit frustrating when I was expecting another hot episode with them.

 

Damn great stuff!

 

GREAT FUCKING STORY LOVE IT

 

Good stuff, keep it up

 

oh my god! looooove incest...mainly cuse ive had i buut anyhow. heheh. love the story.

 

great!

Love this story, looking forward very much for the next part and future stories by you!

 

Great story!

 

Sarahs or melanies both sound good to sniff

 

Jesus, i love this story, Incest just turns me on...Thank you cant wait for the next part

 

stop the suspense please

 

bloody awesome stories
cant wait till i can fuck my daughters

 

Escellent!!!

 

Chapter Eleven - Conversation

"Baby, don't need to pick it up," I said to Melanie. My throbbing cock inside her tight fuckhole.

She picked up the phone anyway, it was her friend, Joselyn; short for Josie. Melanie turned her head slightly - not so much that I can see her whole face but her passionate eyes locked with mine. She really wanted to pick up the phone but reminded herself that I was inside of her. Her father's meaty thickness was inside her tight pussy: deflowered by me. She tried to move away from my cock but I wouldn't allow her.

"Daddy, please."

"No, talk on the phone, go for it," I smiled and even gave her a slight wink. She hesitated but answered the phone anyway with my full length in her. While she talked; her soft and beautiful voice made my cock thicken and strengthen inside of her. I held her hips closer and began fucking her hard.

"H.. he-- hello?" Melanie answered her phone, her voice almost in shambles.

"Hey! Wanna hang today? I don't have anything--"

"I-- I can't." My daughter's voice weakened, her whole body shook in my presence, she shook whenever my cock thrusts inside of her. And while I slide it out, she prodded backwards, wanting the whole length deep inside her. More and more.

"Why? Come on, we're going to just hang out. Pleaseeeeee??"

Melanie's voice, her gasps, she responded once more. "I am busy," she gasps again, and a slight moan released from her mouth. With that, I pulled out my cock. "Dadddddy!" She had forgotten she was on the phone with her friend, "oh, he's just playing around with-- with me," she answered back.

From the other end, I could hear Josie's disturbed voice.

"Are you sure you're okay?"

Melanie gulped, "yeah."

I rubbed my member below her clit, pinned her against the wall. Standing right in front of her was the toilet. I placed my cock underneath her and her head tilted again, looking at me through the reflection of the mirror in front of her.

"Why do you sound so funny?"

"Uhhh," my little girl replied, "what are you... you talking about?"

"You're hesitating, what are you doing over there??"

My baby had no answer, I got on my knees and licked her pussy juices from her legs up to her inner thigh.

"I am fine.. I really, really need to go-- to the bathroom real quick."

"You're on a cell phone though," this Josie girl. Fuck, she's a smart and quick one. I nibbled over her pussy lips and slowly inserted my middle finger inside of her. She couldn't hold it any longer.

"Look, I'll call you back," Melanie hung up just so she could moan real loud. Her moans reverberated across the opened bathroom down the hallway. "Daddd.. dad.. daaaaa.. dadddy, daddy, dadddy.. fuckkk, it feels so good."

"Mhmm, I knew you would enjoy that." I used two fingers, my middle and my index, running it alongside her tight hole.

"Daaaaaaadddddddyyyyy--" she let out an orgasmic scream.

As I pulled my fingers away from her cunt, her pussy juices flowed down, more to the sides of her legs, and my fingers were tainted by her cum. "Lick it." I stood up, while she knelt down; reverse positions.

Her lips wrapped around my rough fingers, her tongue swirled around her cum. Her warm saliva mixed with her own cum made my cock throb even more. I grabbed her head; held it right against my cock and rammed my meat inside her mouth: using it as if it was her pussy.

Her phone rang again. Josie.

I bent down and answered the phone; held the phone right next to my little girl's ears.

"I'm downstairs, we all are! Come down, come down!!"

I rammed my cock inside her mouth. Her muffled voice.

"I.. cccaann't."

 

wicked as storied keep em cumming if u can

 

lol

 

so fucking hot .. go my pussy so wet .. there needs to be more

 

not very realistic

 

omg this is awesome

 

Might need some better criticisms than that, yes some chapters were fillers but what makes the rest unrealistic?

 

cool i love ramming my cock in my daughters holes as they enjoy it also.daddies little girls.